VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.12.3] [Nyx]

[Puma1978]

Players like Alexis because she has the most content and is not a stuck up princess, and Nikki/Cara are in the runoffs after Alexis. There is a reason why they are the most popular characters because they actually have scenes in this porn game. yet despite this Nyx keeps forcing the blonde as a plot device through most of the game despite the fact that by the time any of her problems are solved (and she has a full baggage of them) the player will be heavily involved with other characters. This is just a case of bad planning of the VN by the dev IMO.

Yes but this doesnt make the game bad. Anyway it would make the game even more interesting in creating in future episodes more detail and engaging introductions to one of the other girls like Elena who has obviousley some busy times with her family which are still not deeper explained yet, or one of the others...

 

[NewTricks]

(had to look up what susceptible means..)

You have a point there i did not think about the locker room scene. he´s at the very least a douche and im probably going a little soft on him but a lot of his behavior can be explained by stupidity. He just does not get how he is perceived by others and so far no one realy confronted him. So he might just not know any better. I still think that he wouldn`t have akted against the MC this way if he had not gotten manipulated by Ethan, which on the other hand is a full blown sociopath he uses and harms others for his own gain in full conciousnes, he deserves everything bad.
ps: sowy for bad englishs

You are right that we shouldn't attribute to malice things that are adequately explained by stupidity. But there are a lot of people who do bad things without malice. They do them because of fear, ignorance, or conformity. But the person who is hurt by these actions is no less hurt because of these reasons. You are right that sociopaths pride themselves on their ability to manipulate others into wrongdoing, and I am certain Ethan is pleased with himself. We shouldn't let Zach totally off the hook, though.

 

[ZagorTeNay]

At the very least, I expect a scene, Zach chained to the bed watching as MC bangs Valeria.

 

[MrD812]

Yes but this doesnt make the game bad. Anyway it would make the game even more interesting in creating in future episodes more detail and engaging introductions to one of the other girls like Elena who has obviousley some busy times with her family which are still not deeper explained yet, or one of the others...

Several things can make a VN turn bad.
Erynn dead on the side of a dumpster would totally ruin it for many.

 

[horusxcaen82]

At the very least, I expect a scene, Zach chained to the bed watching as MC bangs Valeria.

I feel like he maybe complicit to whatever happened to Erynn if something did happen to her at the end of this last version.

 

[MrD812]

I feel like he maybe complicit to whatever happened to Erynn if something did happen to her at the end of this last version.

Even so, Zach is guilty of being himself.

With that said..... perhaps ya may take a gander at the link on this post here:

https://f95zone.to/threads/intertwined-v0-9-2-nyx.53676/post-8375488

 

[horusxcaen82]

Even so, Zach is guilty of being himself.

With that said..... perhaps ya may take a gander at the link on this post here:

https://f95zone.to/threads/intertwined-v0-9-2-nyx.53676/post-8375488

I don't want her to die.. I don't know as the reader/player I could take that, hopefully there is an option if you've played her route to keep her alive if that happens.

 

[MrD812]

I don't want her to die.. I don't know as the reader/player I could take that, hopefully there is an option if you've played her route to keep her alive if that happens.

I agree 100%+
Know many in person, let alone online whom are the same.
We ALL do not like it one bit.

Erynn was my full play through.
Life partners along with friends and neighbors did the others.
Nothing on Erynn's run prevents what has happen in e9.

 

[horusxcaen82]

I agree 100%+
Know many in person, let alone online whom are the same.
We ALL do not like it one bit.

Erynn was my full play through.
Life partners along with friends and neighbors did the others.
Nothing on Erynn's run prevents what has happen in e9.

my thing is, the ramifications to those who did it will be bad I mean they cant get away with it but Melissa? she will go ballistic not to mention the MC especially if the reader/player has been on her route. I am thinking she might not die but possibly be in a coma? then after a time skip (if one happens) she could recover but be mentally and emotionally scarred from it.

 

[MrD812]

my thing is, the ramifications to those who did it will be bad I mean they cant get away with it but Melissa? she will go ballistic not to mention the MC especially if the reader/player has been on her route. I am thinking she might not die but possibly be in a coma? then after a time skip (if one happens) she could recover but be mentally and emotionally scarred from it.

Possibilities of investigation(s) alone is easily traumatizing in it's self.
When something horrific as this happens(and it has within the industry more often then not).
Effects far more then just family members.

Doubt it's Iris on the side of that dumpster.
Whomever it is.
Highly unlikely to be alive.

All clues lead to Erynn, so far.

EDIT:
If we look at things from a medical stand point.
Someone with a plastic bag over their head while in a coma.
After lets say 10, 20, 30, 40 minutes, hour, half a day.

Their chance of not being dead?

 

[constantine]

No other LI has a scene as good as going to the concert with Alexis. I can't even think of any bonding time with the other LIs that isn't physical.

I think it's easy to like Alexis because you get to do fun things with her, but Erynn tends to be there for MC when he needs it. She let's him stay at her place, makes him dinner, gives him a ride, buys him clothes, and when he found out about his real Dad, Erynn skipped class to be there for him.

Alexis' path is front loaded. The good stuff with her comes early, but with Erynn you have to go through a bit of a trial first. Her path is more frustrating, but relationships that go through hardships can end up being more rewarding. I guess that's partly why I'm interested in Erynn. It's the hope that all of the drama may end up being worth it.

 

[horusxcaen82]

Possibilities of investigation(s) alone is easily traumatizing in it's self.
When something horrific as this happens(and it has within the industry more often then not).
Effects far more then just family members.

Doubt it's Iris on the side of that dumpster.
Whomever it is.
Highly unlikely to be alive.

All clues lead to Erynn, so far.

EDIT:
If we look at things from a medical stand point.
Someone with a plastic bag over their head while in a coma.
After lets say 10, 20, 30, 40 minutes, hour, half a day.

Their chance of not being dead?

I dunno I saw the trash bag as next to person not on them.

 

[PeraDrnda]

I see that most of you think it's funny when I address CrioniC.Syn as NyxValeria. I'm not kidding, CrioniC.Syn is an account created by NyxValeria on the same day when she deleted her NyxValeria account (profile number 596203).

NV was tired and annoyed like she said in her final words:

...But I finally realised why so many devs stop being active here and stop engaging with the players.
This is the last post I make too. I'm tired and annoyed.

Deleting my account now.
Thanks for the great and not so great times. Have fun.
Bye.

Those words were posted on Aug 30, 2021, by Deleted member 596203 AKA NyxValeria.

Nyx was tired and annoyed, but she wasn't irresponsible. She invested so much time in her game, and in this thread, so she created new accout CrioniC.Syn, on the very same day Aug 30, 2021. Why ? What's the point ? Answer is in the first message by CrioniC.Syn. It ended in the inbox of f95 moderator Igneel1.

Aug 31, 2021
Hi,
Could you please send a Mod to the Intertwined thread so it can get cleaned up? Things are getting seriously out of hand there.
Thank you very much.

Her intention, most possibly, was to clear the thread, and to keep an eye on it.

I'm not sure if she created any more accounts, but she stayed inactive as CrioniC.Syn untill Mar 12, 2022. These are some of her first words under new indentity:

...There aren't any real animations in the game. Seems it's just looped pictures. The first ones have a lower count, but the latest are 30 fps (which is more than enough.)...

And then she get active, really active. Sometimes she used "Nyx said at the Q&A", or "confirmed by Nyx herself on Discord", things like that, but most of the times she sounded like pure and simple Nyx.

Some things that make me more sure about Nyx indentity:

I know for a fact that the dev didn't create the banner, nor did she put the preview pictures here, nor did she put the tags here. Those were all created/chosen by the moderator who created this thread.

Why would I need to reread the forum if I have the script from version 0.1 and the 0.5.5 in front of me and see what's changed?
The time has shortened, not increased. Meaning people should be even more furious about Emily?
Anyway, I'm not going to react anymore. If you want to be right. You are right!

If you have time, you can check CrioniC.Syn profile. There are 102 messages, at the moment (100 in Intertwined thread !). Lot of interesting stuff.

Could I be wrong about all this ? There's always a chance, but not bigger than 1%

A word to CrioniC.Syn , you can keep playing your game, but i see more benefits if you get a proper name and badge (game developer). Also, no matter that you think of f95zone as a hotspot of imbeciles and idiots , there are lot of friendly and helpful people, devs like you. Ask in the proper forum section, and you may find solution for making movies from frames, or how to optimize your game. Good luck with your game, and let it be your game truly, like it's now, not influenced by others.

Big thanks to Ariostebaldo who was actually the first one who connected CrioniC.Syn to NyxValeria. Yet Ariostebaldo got just pathetic 3 likes for that. Go here and give him some love for his great finding.

 

[schinoize]

No other LI has a scene as good as going to the concert with Alexis. I can't even think of any bonding time with the other LIs that isn't physical.

Helping Elena with her cheerleader routine is probably my fav bonding scene in the game rn. Too bad her path is still in the early stages for now.

Also, wholesome Layla - Elena - MC -content best part of the game for me. Really nice chemistry.

 

[CrioniC.Syn]

I see that most of you think it's funny when I address CrioniC.Syn as NyxValeria. I'm not kidding, CrioniC.Syn is an account created by NyxValeria on the same day when she deleted her NyxValeria account (profile number 596203).

NV was tired and annoyed like she said in her final words:


Those words were posted on Aug 30, 2021, by Deleted member 596203 AKA NyxValeria.

Nyx was tired and annoyed, but she wasn't irresponsible. She invested so much time in her game, and in this thread, so she created new accout CrioniC.Syn, on the very same day Aug 30, 2021. Why ? What's the point ? Answer is in the first message by CrioniC.Syn. It ended in the inbox of f95 moderator Igneel1.



Her intention, most possibly, was to clear the thread, and to keep an eye on it.

I'm not sure if she created any more accounts, but she stayed inactive as CrioniC.Syn untill Mar 12, 2022. These are some of her first words under new indentity:


And then she get active, really active. Sometimes she used "Nyx said at the Q&A", or "confirmed by Nyx herself on Discord", things like that, but most of the times she sounded like pure and simple Nyx.

Some things that make me more sure about Nyx indentity:



If you have time, you can check CrioniC.Syn profile. There are 102 messages, at the moment (100 in Intertwined thread !). Lot of interesting stuff.

Could I be wrong about all this ? There's always a chance, but not bigger than 1%

A word to CrioniC.Syn , you can keep playing your game, but i see more benefits if you get a proper name and badge (game developer). Also, no matter that you think of f95zone as a hotspot of imbeciles and idiots , there are lot of friendly and helpful people, devs like you. Ask in the proper forum section, and you may find solution for making movies from frames, or how to optimize your game. Good luck with your game, and let it be your game truly, like it's now, not influenced by others.

Big thanks to Ariostebaldo who was actually the first one who connected CrioniC.Syn to NyxValeria. Yet Ariostebaldo got just pathetic 3 likes for that. Go here and give him some love for his great finding.

3 for 3!
Very nice try. I'll give you that. But I have to disappoint you.
If I were Nyx with all the shit I've been writing here, I'd be doing more harm than good for the game.
It cracks me up that you've spent so much of your time playing detective. Nothing better to do?
If you would've spent all that amount of time on the game and trying to figure stuff out, you might understand the story better.
Keep on guessing though. You might figure it out. Someone already did.

 

[ZagorTeNay]

I know a few psychological tricks how to uncover secret agents ( back when I was a high ranking KGB officer).
Hey Crionic, say you were walking down the street and saw NyxValeria about to beat up nice, kindly 80 year ol' grandma. But then grandma pulls out a shotgun out of her shopping bag.
Would you call the police?

 

[CrioniC.Syn]

I know a few psychological tricks how to uncover secret agents ( back when I was a high ranking KGB officer).
Hey Crionic, say you were walking down the street and saw NyxValeria about to beat up nice, kindly 80 year ol' grandma. But then grandma pulls out a shotgun out of her shopping bag.
Would you call the police?

No. I would do what every normal person nowadays would do in that situation. I pull out my phone and record it. Then put it on youtube and wait until it becomes a meme.

 

[Nurikabe]

It feels more like fairly even content amongst Alexis, Layla, Nikki, and Cara. Erynn is sprinkled throughout like Elena. I haven't done anything crazy like count dialogue or images, but I would say they are all fairly equal. And the story represents that. I guess if someone is only counting specific types of content (i.e. lewd) then it would seem unbalanced. And if you are approaching it from the side of storytelling, then I would agree that Erynn has not had an appropriate amount. Still, I don't seem to have any of the problems with the story that some have.

The Alexis story is the most well-rounded and developed so far. So, it makes sense that some people would appreciate that content more. And at the same time, it explains why some people do not like Alexis. But the story is still being developed. A lot can change.

As mentioned above, Erynn is there when the MC needs help and comfort. Alexis/Nikki/Cara fills the sex and love area. Layla is climbing, in regards to sexual awakening. Flashbacks take care of Iris and Lakeyn. And most of us are anxiously waiting to see if there will be Elena and Valeria content. And of course, you can see my bias for characters now!

 

[Ragnar]

It feels more like fairly even content amongst Alexis, Layla, Nikki, and Cara. Erynn is sprinkled throughout like Elena. I haven't done anything crazy like count dialogue or images, but I would say they are all fairly equal. And the story represents that. I guess if someone is only counting specific types of content (i.e. lewd) then it would seem unbalanced. And if you are approaching it from the side of storytelling, then I would agree that Erynn has not had an appropriate amount. Still, I don't seem to have any of the problems with the story that some have.

The Alexis story is the most well-rounded and developed so far. So, it makes sense that some people would appreciate that content more. And at the same time, it explains why some people do not like Alexis. But the story is still being developed. A lot can change.

As mentioned above, Erynn is there when the MC needs help and comfort. Alexis/Nikki/Cara fills the sex and love area. Layla is climbing, in regards to sexual awakening. Flashbacks take care of Iris and Lakeyn. And most of us are anxiously waiting to see if there will be Elena and Valeria content. And of course, you can see my bias for characters now!

Then say Alexis/Nikki/Cara are the real Lis so people know what to expect. I'm not interested in Alexis and I think it's strange how she's getting the lion share. Maybe she's Nyx selfinsert or her favourite character?

 

[Warscared]

I see that most of you think it's funny when I address CrioniC.Syn as NyxValeria. I'm not kidding, CrioniC.Syn is an account created by NyxValeria on the same day when she deleted her NyxValeria account (profile number 596203).

NV was tired and annoyed like she said in her final words:


Those words were posted on Aug 30, 2021, by Deleted member 596203 AKA NyxValeria.

Nyx was tired and annoyed, but she wasn't irresponsible. She invested so much time in her game, and in this thread, so she created new accout CrioniC.Syn, on the very same day Aug 30, 2021. Why ? What's the point ? Answer is in the first message by CrioniC.Syn. It ended in the inbox of f95 moderator Igneel1.



Her intention, most possibly, was to clear the thread, and to keep an eye on it.

I'm not sure if she created any more accounts, but she stayed inactive as CrioniC.Syn untill Mar 12, 2022. These are some of her first words under new indentity:


And then she get active, really active. Sometimes she used "Nyx said at the Q&A", or "confirmed by Nyx herself on Discord", things like that, but most of the times she sounded like pure and simple Nyx.

Some things that make me more sure about Nyx indentity:



If you have time, you can check CrioniC.Syn profile. There are 102 messages, at the moment (100 in Intertwined thread !). Lot of interesting stuff.

Could I be wrong about all this ? There's always a chance, but not bigger than 1%

A word to CrioniC.Syn , you can keep playing your game, but i see more benefits if you get a proper name and badge (game developer). Also, no matter that you think of f95zone as a hotspot of imbeciles and idiots , there are lot of friendly and helpful people, devs like you. Ask in the proper forum section, and you may find solution for making movies from frames, or how to optimize your game. Good luck with your game, and let it be your game truly, like it's now, not influenced by others.

Big thanks to Ariostebaldo who was actually the first one who connected CrioniC.Syn to NyxValeria. Yet Ariostebaldo got just pathetic 3 likes for that. Go here and give him some love for his great finding.

stalker alert! unless you are handsome then girls will just call you interested attentive and romantic...