VN Ren'Py Abandoned Into the Milfy-verse [v0.02] [Phase X Studios]

4.00 star(s) 8 Votes

Havenless_

Active Member
Oct 12, 2020
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Feedback
Guys can you give me some feedback on the game ?


Writing
I'm looking to improve the writing. I have no problem with rendering but I find writing scenes and dialogues very stressful (probably because of my autism). I don't give writing enough time and always try to rush it.

I think I would deliver the updates a bit faster if I could use some help with the scene direction and dialogues.
Should look into hiring a writer ?

Sandbox/VN
Though I like linear VNs but I don't find them very immersive or interactive. There's no playing in it, its just reading and skipping.
Will you prefer some of the sandbox elements ?.
Like small quests, that way the sex scenes will probably feel a little bit more rewarding. Or are you okay with the current day settings.

Any feedback is appreciated
I just played the game and I would like to leave you my feedback. Obviously, it's totally personal opinion.

Stuff I liked:
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In conclusion, the idea of the superhero world can be exploited if done right. What fails the most in the game is the syntax along with the grammar, you show us a lot but really tell us little and in general the way the game is written. Too informal, in my opinion.

Now, a question, followed by one more suggestion. I understand that romance and corruption are planned genres. How exactly do you plan to implement that? Will we be able to choose which routes to follow with the girls? Or will we be 'forced' into corruption? Perhaps being able to choose whether to do good or evil with the powers, for example.
I don't know if you plan to explore hardcore corruption (with what that entails) or light corruption. Be that as it may, as a player of romance routes, I would appreciate that any sort of pervy or creep stuff be kept to a minimum in romance routes. I just want to love and respect Aunt May too much.
 

leater

New Member
Jun 28, 2018
3
0
Feedback
Guys can you give me some feedback on the game ?


Writing
I'm looking to improve the writing. I have no problem with rendering but I find writing scenes and dialogues very stressful (probably because of my autism). I don't give writing enough time and always try to rush it.

I think I would deliver the updates a bit faster if I could use some help with the scene direction and dialogues.
Should look into hiring a writer ?

Sandbox/VN
Though I like linear VNs but I don't find them very immersive or interactive. There's no playing in it, its just reading and skipping.
Will you prefer some of the sandbox elements ?.
Like small quests, that way the sex scenes will probably feel a little bit more rewarding. Or are you okay with the current day settings.

Any feedback is appreciated
I would like a sandbox style game as it is more immersive and would give us the chance to romance the person we would like.
As for VN its like just reading a story which we don't have much power over.
 

Phase X Studios

Newbie
Game Developer
Nov 2, 2022
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I just played the game and I would like to leave you my feedback. Obviously, it's totally personal opinion.

Stuff I liked:
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Stuff I didn't like:
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In conclusion, the idea of the superhero world can be exploited if done right. What fails the most in the game is the syntax along with the grammar, you show us a lot but really tell us little and in general the way the game is written. Too informal, in my opinion.

Now, a question, followed by one more suggestion. I understand that romance and corruption are planned genres. How exactly do you plan to implement that? Will we be able to choose which routes to follow with the girls? Or will we be 'forced' into corruption? Perhaps being able to choose whether to do good or evil with the powers, for example.
I don't know if you plan to explore hardcore corruption (with what that entails) or light corruption. Be that as it may, as a player of romance routes, I would appreciate that any sort of pervy or creep stuff be kept to a minimum in romance routes. I just want to love and respect Aunt May too much.

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed some of the elements.

Yeah I agree, the game does need some work on the pacing and writing. Some kind people have reached out to me, for help with the writing. I think, hopefully the syntax and grammar might not be a issue in the next update.
 

7empest5teele

Well-Known Member
Dec 23, 2019
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Oh for crying out loud.
The dialog is abysmal, its painful to decipher some of this, let alone watch May talk to the MC like he is 12 "Here is your CHOKIE MILK", or another great set of dialog; "I made your FAVORITE MEAL today" MC: "Oh what IS IT??"
May makes a dish containing Dairy, even though Ben is ALLERGIC to it, and just places it on the table like its NOO big deal, not telling anyone about it??
How long have they been married again?
Jesus fcking Murphy the dialog needs a complete overhaul, this is just ridiculous.
 

etarg

Member
Oct 11, 2017
354
503
Oh for crying out loud.
The dialog is abysmal, its painful to decipher some of this, let alone watch May talk to the MC like he is 12 "Here is your CHOKIE MILK", or another great set of dialog; "I made your FAVORITE MEAL today" MC: "Oh what IS IT??"
May makes a dish containing Dairy, even though Ben is ALLERGIC to it, and just places it on the table like its NOO big deal, not telling anyone about it??
How long have they been married again?
Jesus fcking Murphy the dialog needs a complete overhaul, this is just ridiculous.
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filochard

Well-Known Member
Feb 1, 2018
1,545
2,335

Dear supporters,
I want to share something I've been thinking about lately. First I want to thank you for your support. It was the first time I earned something online and it really made me happy.
However, I have decided to make a big change that I believe will benefit us all in the long run.
Starting today, I am making my content free of cost. I know this may come as a surprise to some of you, but please understand that the monetary support I receive is affecting my work. I always had to work under a time frame and worry about keeping my supporters happy. Also I have been quite busy lately and only get so much time to work on this game. I often found myself struggling to meet deadlines.
I created this project for fun, and putting my stuff behind a paywall is something I don't like. I want to share my work with everyone regardless of how they decide to show their support. Making my content free will allow me to work more freely without the pressure of meeting deadlines and create what I want (but I do appreciate feedback). This means I can take my time to create content that I'm happy with.
Please note that this site (Patreon) now will simply function as a donation platform. There will be no exclusive posts, everything public. You can choose to continue supporting me at whatever tier you're comfortable with, or you can simply enjoy my content for free. But your support do help me immensely, and I want to assure you that I appreciate each and every one of you.
Thank you for your understanding, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy my content as much as I enjoy creating it.
Warm regards
 

MAN-X

Newbie
Mar 19, 2022
73
343

Dear supporters,
I want to share something I've been thinking about lately. First I want to thank you for your support. It was the first time I earned something online and it really made me happy.
However, I have decided to make a big change that I believe will benefit us all in the long run.
Starting today, I am making my content free of cost. I know this may come as a surprise to some of you, but please understand that the monetary support I receive is affecting my work. I always had to work under a time frame and worry about keeping my supporters happy. Also I have been quite busy lately and only get so much time to work on this game. I often found myself struggling to meet deadlines.
I created this project for fun, and putting my stuff behind a paywall is something I don't like. I want to share my work with everyone regardless of how they decide to show their support. Making my content free will allow me to work more freely without the pressure of meeting deadlines and create what I want (but I do appreciate feedback). This means I can take my time to create content that I'm happy with.
Please note that this site (Patreon) now will simply function as a donation platform. There will be no exclusive posts, everything public. You can choose to continue supporting me at whatever tier you're comfortable with, or you can simply enjoy my content for free. But your support do help me immensely, and I want to assure you that I appreciate each and every one of you.
Thank you for your understanding, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy my content as much as I enjoy creating it.
Warm regards

Super excited to what's come, this is a dream come true game I've wanted and has so much potential. Can't way for the Pete and May action in the future. Marvel-Spider-Man-Avengers-Incest-Porn-Comic-Aunt-May-seduces-fucks-Nephew-Peter-Parker-Hentai...jpg
 
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