You had me at dead girlfriend. That in itself hits close to home. Going to try this out.
There shouldn't be one.badtimetales hello dev, merry christmas!
i just want to ask the decryption key for the mac download?
Don't know what happened there.badtimetales hello dev, merry christmas!
i just want to ask the decryption key for the mac download?
solved now. thank you devDon't know what happened there.
Please try again with the link in the OP.
This is really good work. I like the fact that:Chapter 2.1 is online.
Indeed. There was a subtle but important moment when Alex...Alex is sassy, witty and cool. badtimetales
Thanks a lot for the feedback, really appreciated!This is really good work. I like the fact that:
- you've thrust us straight into an interesting story without a ton of clunky exhibition;
- the characters are well-crafted and distinctive;
- the two main LIs seem true to the personalities you've created for them (focussing on the two of them also makes very good sense);
- you've included a couple interesting male (non-LI) NPCs (although they are gay or older, making them non-threatening to the anti-NTR fanatics on this hellsite); and
- the hot, well-executed sex scenes make sense in terms of the plot and characters... no strangers hop on the MC's dick without warning or reason.
I'm trying to tell a story, not to produce a porn movieIf you stick with it this could be a great story-driven game. Please don't surrender to porn logic... there's no reason to charge straight into sexual options with the LI we don't know well. Let that relationship build organically, in a way that seems true, before introducing any options there.
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Great work, so far. I think it's too early to give your game a proper rating/review, but it's on my list of most promising new entrants. If you can string together another couple chapters of similar quality, I'd be happy to lend financial support.
Just gave this one a try, and I like what I'm seeing!
You've nicely established a background and a potentially interesting story, and most characters we've met so far seem well-written and three-dimensional. Alex is sassy, witty and cool. Isabella is a blank slate damsel in distress so far, but I'm sure she'll get an actual personality in future chapters. Good luck with the game badtimetales
A bit short? With 40-60 minutes gameplay?Pretty good start, Loved Alex not sure about Isabella yet, kinda looks like typical spoiled supermodel to me nothing special but always love a Mystery, a bit short at the moment but gets the point across, can't wait for more, and Dev can u please give us option to disable the autosave at end of chapters, dont want it to mess up my saves later in the game..