First of all, i'm extremly pleased to see that this game gets updates!
I played it way back in the day and was immediately overhwhelmed by the world and all the lore!
qwertyu12359 thank you for passionatly updating this game with the other dev you mentioned earlier!
I played the game for a few hours now and i gotta say, it got a whole lot harder than i remember.
I still came to notice a few things and would like to list em here. Constructive critique is always good, but i would also be interesested in contributing to the game!
First off:
1| The textborders of the game, the one the bottom and the one on the right side
are still way too big!These texts (especially the one on the right) are so minimal that it really isn't worth it to cover so much space with it! This goes for the border on the bottom too, the actual game itself, with all these nice pictures,
are so cramped away it's really not pretty to look at! This is one of my biggest critque points!
2| The game is old and a lot of pictures really show that, there are many pictures of areas/scenery, which look extremly washed up, pixelated or straight up low resoluiton/quality, it's a damn shame! I already noticed that you have cut out some of the most horrible ones that even back in the day were borderline sketch shit - but i still noticed that there were quite a few trainings/sex pics that still seemed pretty old. There are NPC's that also really need a facelift! For example:
Magnaga: There should be better, high quality pictures of a succubussis to use (the internet is full of them).
Mikkey: DeadMau5 looks to me out of place, the picture should be replaced.
Prince charming: Picture is really out of place too - he is located in the outcast but the picutre suggest a palace.
Lord Pyra: Picture looks really low quality.
(just to name a few there are more)
Inconsistency in the artstyle: Game builds mainly around the anime/hentai artstyle so western art sometimes really looks out of place. But this also goes for certain slave girl render pictures! Because
some of em' really have that dated visual novel anime style (extremly big eyes, washed up/yellowish colors).
Also the picture of The
"checkmark-button", which you press if you're agreeing to a deal is
really badly rendered and overall low quality the same goes for the
"cancel-button" which looks a bit cleaner but also has a really low resolution.
3| Spell to read Aura with, the spell to "read" the aura of the girl in order to know how she feels is a pretty neat idea, but
in may opinion its way too cryptic. "Seeing" the Aura in different colors is cool and adds to the immersion, but i think jack should immediatly "translate" what he is seeing. The game is complex enough as it is and even knowing exactly how she feels still can be a challenge to tackle it in the right way, so having to look up at the wiki what the colors and the weird text stands for is just too big of a hassle.
These are right now the biggest things i noticed! And for some of these problems
i could come forward to help out with.
Right now i'm contributing to a other management game with girlpacks. So if you guys need a helping hand with new "girls" i could wade through the current ones and point out outdated stuff to you guys and if you're okay with it we replace em with new ones.
I also could look for new backgrounds/area picutres and NPC pictures - even stuff for training/sex/foreplay you name it.
Btw. i absolutely know that the engine JONT's based on is extremly outdated, i'm not a big coder so i'm not quite sure what of these critique points of mine actually can worked with.
Good enough?
