VN Ren'Py Abandoned Jacob's Saga of Dark Desires [v0.1 Final Test] [Khansama_INC]

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Overview:
This is the remake of "Bad Bobby Saga" previously made by RAinces.
I am a new creator and I hope to complete this project, the version here is the final test version which helps me find out what changes can be made in the future through your valuable feedback.​

Thread Updated: 2024-01-16
Release Date: 2024-01-16
Developer: Khansama_INC
Censored: No
Version: 0.1 Final Test
OS: Windows, Linux, Android
Language: English
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Khansama_INC

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Hello guys thanks for showing interest in the game and I understand that this game has been abandoned multiple times I myself have been waiting for it fo complete for a long time but I assure you that's the reason I took it to myself to get it completed join my discord to stay connected and share your feedback in the channel and what more can be implemented also I have avoided all the grinds and tasks crap so you can simply enjoy this to it's full extent.

Took me 6 hours in my low end pc checkout the animation and give me your feedback!
Your support gives me a chance to complete this project and unlike before lots of content no sandbox.
Support me on patreon and join discord
Also reply to this with your feedback or in my discord.
I assure you that won't disappoint and regular updates will come.
Thank you all!

Regards,
Khansama.
 
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Talcum Powder

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Hello guys thanks for showing interest in the game and I understand that this game has been abandoned multiple times I myself have been waiting for it fo complete for a long time but I assure you that's the reason I took it to myself to get it completed join my discord to stay connected and share your feedback in the channel and what more can be implemented also I have avoided all the grinds and tasks crap so you can simply enjoy this to it's full extent.

Thank you all!

Regards,
Khansama.
I think your MC looks too young. Not just for Patreon reasons nor the potential Shota stigma (censorhip/thread ban).

If you consider the age range of paying supporters, they have to have a bank account or credit card, so consider the minimum age is something around 18-20. Consider the likelihood that an 18 year old (let alone someone in their thirties, forties or fifties, folks having legit disposable income) is going to be able to picture themselves fulfilling the role of what looks like an 11-12 year old. Consider also the plausibility - I get that this is a domination/porn fantasy - but a 17-18 year old girl is not going to be intimidated or coerced by a boy so obviously young.

You don't need to age the MC up to a hulking 20 year old university athlete or anything, but I suggest you consider the character being more of a 15-16 year old, at least. Having been a boy looking that age some decades ago, I can tell you that sex was exciting and a motiviation, but let's be honest, no kid looking that age has a fucking clue about how to dominate/coerce/seduce anyone. Your MC is still at the "sexual impulse --> total freak out" when confronted with the reality state.

Also, on the technical side, light your scenes better. Looks like you're using the lights from the scene set up only, you should add lights that focus on the characters, too. There are several beginner tutorials showing the basic 3-light setup. Implementing even the basic setup will improve the quality. If you don't have a powerful GPU this will probably increase your render time, but...

Just an opinion.

Best of luck.
 
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