Lexie lecoeur
Tried your game. Being Russian I tried to play in Russian so before I say my thoughts about the game I'll say some words about so-called translation.
In short, it sucks. It looks like machine translation that was manually corrected in some places with modern youth jargonisms. More of that, it was machine translation from English, not from French. There's constant mix of "tu" and "vous" when one person address another. And some sentences MC said are said in female gender. The lowest point was literal word-by-word translation of "I suck in it". No Russian-speaking man ever will say it like that. And like an icing on a cake, no Russian after combat scene. With no warning, screen goes black and then out of the blue something like Christmas where some people speaks French. I found out how to switch to English of course, but that wasn't a nice experience.
About the game itself. Visually it's beautiful. Renders are really life-like, not some plastic dolls with ideal skin like in many other games here. Game has a story, maybe even interesting one, it's hard to say now, after all it was just a prologue. I like that you give players a choice how they want to see characters in your game, it's a big plus in my mind. And my personal - cat things, all the cat things, were awesome, thank you for that.
And about what I didn't like, from minor to major.
I better not mention music and sound part, I rarely turn it on but in your game I turned it off after some time voluntarily.
A long procedure of quitting a game is certainly not good. If you want to say something to players do it before they want to close your software, not after that.
Too many excessive clicks. We don't need to click (or press a button) on every render, we need to click when we read all the text and want to see what's next.
More serious thing, it's good we have many choices, we can choose our LI, we can choose solo or polygamy, we can choose pubic haircut, we can choose who Alex will be... It's so bad that beside that we still see what we don't want to see. I don't get it, if I choose MC likes incest it means MC and his mother are basically almost lovers and MC and his sister don't like each other at the same time. What if I want the opposite? But that was a small thing.
Just right after MC said he likes small boobs (it was a choice) he sees fat baker and begins to dream about her buns (if I correctly translated that word from Russian back to English). It's only one example but you do it with every kink in the game (beside trans, it's what every choice must look like). It's like you showed us that choices are meaningless, MC will lust for every girl, woman or granny he sees anyway. And readers will be forced to read walls of text with descriptions of things they don't like. After all, they play for a 25 years old virgin, sexually disturbed and extremely horny all the time. Believe me, it becomes boring quite fast.
Your game today is a overglorified proof of concept that shows us that you have an idea of a game. That idea can become wonderful, ugly or something in between. I'd like for that idea to become a wonderful game.
