Hi Jojoz,
Let me start by saying that your game is one of the best on this website.
1. There were some posts that complained that the MC is not manly enough and also that you plan to rewrite the beginning to make him more manly.
I think that it's totally normal that an 18 years old boy who is probably not experienced with women doesn't act dominant and manly.
Imho, there's no need to change anything and you should ignore those who say otherwise.
If you're not sure what to do, maybe you can make a poll on Patreon or on this site to see what the people think.
2. Also, you mentioned that you need to pause the game development.
If this is because you doubt the appeal of the game and feel you need to rewrite parts of it, then let me tell you again that (imho) this is one of the highest quality games of this type: the story, the characters and the renders are all top notch.
3. If you need more money in order to be able to continue, then I suggest putting this game on Steam as early access.
You might get a lot of support from people who won't use Patreon but are ok with Steam.
Also, you can put it on Gog, OppaiMan and other platforms.
Best of luck with your game and don't doubt yourself or the game.
