Yeah evil dom is what i played it was so fucking awesome. So few games have this much range nor the guts to go even this dark. Truly a fan.
To be honest, I waffled a lot on that scene and had THREE versions of it written up. I ultimately compromised and went with Choice 2 (which I considered the "medium" choice) instead of 1 or 3. I am figuring out the balance/tuning of things still even as I go this late into the narrative. Very difficult scene to gauge, the dom path in general I am more careful/wary of how I am balancing things because I can feel a little too much of my own leanings trying to influence/hijack the story. (Like for example when Claudia says she would like to have another session with Kane where they can both get massages and then have sex...this is definitely me talking haha...but I left out personal stuff like what we both could err watch in terms of what slaves are enduring while we get massaged haha! because that's not Claudia really...yet perhaps) I think more than a few Patrons know I have kind of a dom couple leaning too personally...
It would not be apparent at all to anyone, but my hardest scene to write was Dominique Karlsson and Kane talking on the balcony followed closely by Veronica and Kane talking in the same choice tree. I rewrote both multiple times because they are for me anyway such critical scenes long-term and I was quite particular in how I wanted them laid out. I actually had an easy time writing the vagrant scene in the alley for whatever reason! Very easy to write dominant Olivia/Kane for me personally, much harder to write especially a sub woman. I feel like I don't quite "get it" very well from that perspective for whatever reason. That and "male locker room" type humor, although that's only been very minor in game. (way back in Episode 1, I struggled with them talking to each other in "bromance" style, etc.)