It is so funny reading some of these posts. if you play a sex game and/or watch someone fucking, you are a cuck. Maybe you do not want to watch your real partner fucking someone else. But the same as porn, you are not fucking the woman or the man. You are a bystander, watching other people fuck, with your dick or twat in hand. Me, I prefer to fuck sluts in front of their husbands, but I do like porn and playing these stupid games, lol.
Anyway, onto the game.
I tried playing Glamore and sprained a finger grinding, lol. This is not that, thank the gods.
This game is weak and she agrees way too fast to strip and give up her virginity to a dildo and a nurse. Had there been a little story prior to the few choices available it might make more sense. Maybe some build-up describing how she has always thought about sex or saw her parents, watched porn, exposed herself in risky situations, spanked her ass, fingered her asshole, or something to lend credence to her sudden acquiescence into doing something a sheltered 18-year-old virgin would never agree.
Since I do not speak Russian, I cannot comment on Russian grammar or the difficulty in translations. However, one would think that even in foreign languages most people speak with some small amount of eloquence. Instead of reading like a Dick and Jane children's book. See dick run. See Jane jump.
Use complete sentences and an attempt at proper grammar, instead of disjointed comments.
Try using some description of the action, feelings, emotions, and especially the "sex scenes".
Her expression doesn't change in the shower, no moans, or stifled screams of ecstasy. I come or she come; her boring words, (in reference to sex it is cum, cumming, or came, in lieu of the word orgasm.)
I understand not being a native speaker, however, at least pass it by a native English speaker prior to release or even a writer or editor.
My final thought, even though it is an erotic game, doesn't mean that a story is not essential. You need to build characters and scenes; that takes time. Don't skimp on the details; stories require details, descriptions, and emotions. Personally, I try reading every game I play. If I can't, for whatever reason, no story, poor grammar, or ridiculous premise, I will peruse the images and see if it is even worth my time.
For me, Glamore is an unknown quantity. Yet I like the direction of this VN and the renders are very nice. Find a story, then tell it and add some emotion to your renders, you can do so with the lighting as well as expressions.
Good luck with your game.
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