- Jun 7, 2017
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About Katie wanting to have a baby; Good, smart girls can make bad decisions, especially when they get used to a shiny, rich lifestyle. In real life too, i saw a successful woman quit her job and marry to an older, rich man. This things happen. And that was not so sudden, Katie had a lot of sex with Orlov at that point of the story, she saw he is rich and powerful, she went to Vegas, she saw the shiny lifestyle. I know that is sad but that is life.This was something to be expected. I followed the dev just from the start of the Hannah comic and here on Katie's. As in Hannah I had the feeling in Katie's that the dev didn't really know how to end his story. As from chapter 12/13 the Hannah story became really weird and lots of patrons critizised the following chapters as being too brutal and merciless. For Katie's the same question arose after Katie returned from Vegas where she had been cheating on her fiancé. In the next conversation with Brian you may choose 'want to have kids sooner' and I never understood why the dev let you choose this. I think it was at this point I again had the feeling the dev lost the red thread once more. One other thing to mention is when you may change from the manipulation path to full corruption. If you did so you saw that the following scene didn't match at all. I tried to rewrite it but this was impossible because it wouldn't have matched the corruption path anymore, really bad coding there. And, I would never understand why little Katie suddenly wanted to have a baby - yeah, I know, maybe she wanted Wright to be the father just to marry him like Hannah did with Orlov. But sorry, she's a smart girl and should know that this wouldn't be a reason for any man and especially not for one like Wright.
Well, maybe we see some continuation, may it be by 3diddly or not. Time to say goodbye here, see you on GGGB or somewhere else of this site.
I think most of the problems with the end of the story both at Hannah and Katie comes from 3Diddly getting bored. When that happens, a good writer close the story but unfortunately, at patreon, these stories tend to drag more and more. If you end your story, people who pays you money accuse you of suddenly cutting it. (like what happened at Road Trip.)