VN Ren'Py Completed Katie's Corruption [v1.19] [3diddly]

[OwMyFace]

I don't think the paths I theorycrafted about would've been more time-intensive than what's in the game right now. I do e.g. not see why you'd need more pictures than you have right now to have the story at the exact same point.
It's basically two paths I suggested where Katie could earn money:

- Secretary: Basically the same as now. Only difference gameplay-wise would be that Katie gets to choose whether she wants to be his slut in which case she gets paid adequately, otherwise she'll have to do prostitution at the side.
I'm sorry but those "corruption" points are stupid, she should just decide everytime whether she currently (or generally) needs the money or not and refuse or accept services accordingly.
I would make more sense for her to gradually do more and more slutty stuff similar to just about any other game out there.

- Prostitute: So far we have lots of scenes at the side which could be used for all sorts of clients. How about Katie starting as a gogo girl, learning to dance because she doesn't want to fuck anybody (hence refusing Mr. Wight).
After a while she realizes she's still not making enough money, so she's accepting client's invitation back home.
The owner gets wind of it and gets angry because it's against the policy, she now has to fuck him to keep her job. He'll also offer more pay if she keeps doing him.
Now Katie still has her contract with Mr. Wight and works at the office, but if she earns enough money otherwise she doesn't have to do favors for him but can simply serve her time.

From the amount of scenes I don't see how this would've been more difficult than what the game has right now.
Remember that I'm just playing a "what if the developer had had a good story at the beginning"-scenario, nothing else. I'm not expecting the developer to go "oh, this is great, let me just rewrite this entire game I've been working on for ages!".



My second sentence in the post you quoted states that I understand why she's letting Mr. Wight abuse her, I get that.



I'm sorry, but those "attempts" are a bit of a joke. Vera and Hanna are just telling Katie what sluts they are and try to kiss her and you think it makes sense that this brings down her relationship with Brian?
How about Vera actually told her that the job is easier if she gives in, maybe cracks a joke or two about Mr. Wight to give Katie the illusion they're on the same side. It might be easier for Katie if she knows that she has another person who's in it with her, but who has assimilated to the situation and might serve as a rolemodel.
Not brushing things off everytime Katie tells her yet another guy raped her but comforting her might improve their relationship in a realistic way, too.
Hannah does a decent job at explaining her the advantages of a gold digger and the tatoo is kinda cool. As I said, the Mr. Wight storyline with the company is mostly fine, after all he's blackmailing her, so it's not like she really has a choice.

But take e.g. Brandon: After grabbing her at the dance floor he offers to take her home, but then takes her to his place? Not creepy at all, but super hot, right?
Oh, and if she's stupid enough to come in to sleep on the couch he forcefully kisses her and fucks her throat because that's apparently exactly what she wants. He's not even finishing her off, how the fuck is that supposed seduce her and make her chill about casual sex?
Every woman with half a brain would go to the police after that, isn't she supposed to be confident and smart?
I mean unwilling sex with Mr. Wight makes sense, unwilling sex with anyone else though really doesn't.

Sorry, but the complete storyline with Brandon as well as Ogre McBigdick is a joke.
Especially when you look at how Katie is portrayed her actions (and inactions) don't make any sense.
It basically follows the pattern:
Katie refuses sex ->she gets raped -> "oh, your dick is so big, I loved it! I'll totally do you again and not tell my boyfriend about it."

That said this is maybe 1/3 of the story, this still leaves the other 2/3 of the game with a decent plot and very nice sex scenes.

The only issues I have there is how Katie can just refuse Mr. Wight over and over without any consequences, sometimes not even giving the player a choice because Katie hasn't said the right thing hours before or hasn't slept with other guys. Didn't they have an agreement that she can quit earlier and doesn't have to work twelve hours a day if she does him some favors?
I know I'm weird, but I would've found it quite thrilling to have Katie almost have a burn-out because Mr. Wight overloads her with work if she refuses to obliege.
She'd then beg him to do him a favor just to have a day off in which case Mr. Wight gets to use her limp and overworked body and uses her right on her desk, finally breaking her spirit (maybe a tear or two?).

You need to do yourself a favour and stop complaining about this game, and instead make your own game about Corruption, I'm already a fan of your ideas.

 

[Balub]

You need to do yourself a favour and stop complaining about this game, and instead make your own game about Corruption, I'm already a fan of your ideas.

Sadly I'm currently finishing studying, so I don't really have time to learn Ren'Py (though it looks relatively easy).
I'm more of a writer anyways, if it's an easy possibility I might make a mod of this game at some point in the future though.

 

[othello]

I don't think the paths I theorycrafted about would've been more time-intensive than what's in the game right now. I do e.g. not see why you'd need more pictures than you have right now to have the story at the exact same point.
It's basically two paths I suggested where Katie could earn money:

- Secretary: Basically the same as now. Only difference gameplay-wise would be that Katie gets to choose whether she wants to be his slut in which case she gets paid adequately, otherwise she'll have to do prostitution at the side.
I'm sorry but those "corruption" points are stupid, she should just decide everytime whether she currently (or generally) needs the money or not and refuse or accept services accordingly.
I would make more sense for her to gradually do more and more slutty stuff similar to just about any other game out there.

- Prostitute: So far we have lots of scenes at the side which could be used for all sorts of clients. How about Katie starting as a gogo girl, learning to dance because she doesn't want to fuck anybody (hence refusing Mr. Wight).
After a while she realizes she's still not making enough money, so she's accepting client's invitation back home.
The owner gets wind of it and gets angry because it's against the policy, she now has to fuck him to keep her job. He'll also offer more pay if she keeps doing him.
Now Katie still has her contract with Mr. Wight and works at the office, but if she earns enough money otherwise she doesn't have to do favors for him but can simply serve her time.

From the amount of scenes I don't see how this would've been more difficult than what the game has right now.
Remember that I'm just playing a "what if the developer had had a good story at the beginning"-scenario, nothing else. I'm not expecting the developer to go "oh, this is great, let me just rewrite this entire game I've been working on for ages!".



My second sentence in the post you quoted states that I understand why she's letting Mr. Wight abuse her, I get that.



I'm sorry, but those "attempts" are a bit of a joke. Vera and Hanna are just telling Katie what sluts they are and try to kiss her and you think it makes sense that this brings down her relationship with Brian?
How about Vera actually told her that the job is easier if she gives in, maybe cracks a joke or two about Mr. Wight to give Katie the illusion they're on the same side. It might be easier for Katie if she knows that she has another person who's in it with her, but who has assimilated to the situation and might serve as a rolemodel.
Not brushing things off everytime Katie tells her yet another guy raped her but comforting her might improve their relationship in a realistic way, too.
Hannah does a decent job at explaining her the advantages of a gold digger and the tatoo is kinda cool. As I said, the Mr. Wight storyline with the company is mostly fine, after all he's blackmailing her, so it's not like she really has a choice.

But take e.g. Brandon: After grabbing her at the dance floor he offers to take her home, but then takes her to his place? Not creepy at all, but super hot, right?
Oh, and if she's stupid enough to come in to sleep on the couch he forcefully kisses her and fucks her throat because that's apparently exactly what she wants. He's not even finishing her off, how the fuck is that supposed seduce her and make her chill about casual sex?
Every woman with half a brain would go to the police after that, isn't she supposed to be confident and smart?
I mean unwilling sex with Mr. Wight makes sense, unwilling sex with anyone else though really doesn't.

Sorry, but the complete storyline with Brandon as well as Ogre McBigdick is a joke.
Especially when you look at how Katie is portrayed her actions (and inactions) don't make any sense.
It basically follows the pattern:
Katie refuses sex ->she gets raped -> "oh, your dick is so big, I loved it! I'll totally do you again and not tell my boyfriend about it."

That said this is maybe 1/4 or 1/3 of the story, this still leaves the other 2/3 or 3/4 of the game with a decent story and very nice sex scenes. The only issues I have there is how Katie can just refuse Mr. Wight over and over without any consequences, sometimes not even giving the player a choice because Katie hasn't said the right thing hours before or hasn't slept with other guys. Not sure how that's blackmailing.

Okay, I agree that the first scene with Brandon isn't really plausible. You have to let Katie agree to go home with him without any reason, she acts just clueless like a 12 year old girlie. I wasn't too happy you have to choose this to get to the blackmail path later (if you don't you end up in the purity path). Later blackmail scenes are much more credible btw. Katie gives in because she really is blackmailed and she doesn't like it at all, she calls the men jerks and pigs. I think this game has it's drawbacks but as you say the general idea is quite good and somewhat realistic. But have mercy, this is the dev's first game and I'm sure he'll do better in later games.

 

[woltka35]

So, why do you need saves for these? Just play the new 1.14 version, thankfully there's no grinding in this game so you really don't need a save, you'll just miss content.

I can't play 1.14 version , because I don't have any save around!!!!! I deleted before .. So I don't want to play again.. So somebody can uplluad the save or not ?

 

[3Diddlyf95zone]

I made it so that she can refuse sex in order to comply to Patreon's new rules. Of course this is not realistic, but I made the decision to not get banned. Do I like the washed out version of the game? Not really, but you have to do what you have to do in life sometimes. You don't need to play the game if you don't like it. I will dodge all banned fetishes altogether in the next game, so that this sort of backlash doesn't blow up in my face again.

I don't think the paths I theorycrafted about would've been more time-intensive than what's in the game right now. I do e.g. not see why you'd need more pictures than you have right now to have the story at the exact same point.
It's basically two paths I suggested where Katie could earn money:

- Secretary: Basically the same as now. Only difference gameplay-wise would be that Katie gets to choose whether she wants to be his slut in which case she gets paid adequately, otherwise she'll have to do prostitution at the side.
I'm sorry but those "corruption" points are stupid, she should just decide everytime whether she currently (or generally) needs the money or not and refuse or accept services accordingly.
I would make more sense for her to gradually do more and more slutty stuff similar to just about any other game out there.

- Prostitute: So far we have lots of scenes at the side which could be used for all sorts of clients. How about Katie starting as a gogo girl, learning to dance because she doesn't want to fuck anybody (hence refusing Mr. Wight).
After a while she realizes she's still not making enough money, so she's accepting client's invitation back home.
The owner gets wind of it and gets angry because it's against the policy, she now has to fuck him to keep her job. He'll also offer more pay if she keeps doing him.
Now Katie still has her contract with Mr. Wight and works at the office, but if she earns enough money otherwise she doesn't have to do favors for him but can simply serve her time.

From the amount of scenes I don't see how this would've been more difficult than what the game has right now.
Remember that I'm just playing a "what if the developer had had a good story at the beginning"-scenario, nothing else. I'm not expecting the developer to go "oh, this is great, let me just rewrite this entire game I've been working on for ages!".



My second sentence in the post you quoted states that I understand why she's letting Mr. Wight abuse her, I get that.



I'm sorry, but those "attempts" are a bit of a joke. Vera and Hanna are just telling Katie what sluts they are and try to kiss her and you think it makes sense that this brings down her relationship with Brian?
How about Vera actually told her that the job is easier if she gives in, maybe cracks a joke or two about Mr. Wight to give Katie the illusion they're on the same side. It might be easier for Katie if she knows that she has another person who's in it with her, but who has assimilated to the situation and might serve as a rolemodel.
Not brushing things off everytime Katie tells her yet another guy raped her but comforting her might improve their relationship in a realistic way, too.
Hannah does a decent job at explaining her the advantages of a gold digger and the tatoo is kinda cool. As I said, the Mr. Wight storyline with the company is mostly fine, after all he's blackmailing her, so it's not like she really has a choice.

But take e.g. Brandon: After grabbing her at the dance floor he offers to take her home, but then takes her to his place? Not creepy at all, but super hot, right?
Oh, and if she's stupid enough to come in to sleep on the couch he forcefully kisses her and fucks her throat because that's apparently exactly what she wants. He's not even finishing her off, how the fuck is that supposed seduce her and make her chill about casual sex?
Every woman with half a brain would go to the police after that, isn't she supposed to be confident and smart?
I mean unwilling sex with Mr. Wight makes sense, unwilling sex with anyone else though really doesn't.

Sorry, but the complete storyline with Brandon as well as Ogre McBigdick is a joke.
Especially when you look at how Katie is portrayed her actions (and inactions) don't make any sense.
It basically follows the pattern:
Katie refuses sex ->she gets raped -> "oh, your dick is so big, I loved it! I'll totally do you again and not tell my boyfriend about it."

That said this is maybe 1/3 of the story, this still leaves the other 2/3 of the game with a decent plot and very nice sex scenes.

The only issues I have there is how Katie can just refuse Mr. Wight over and over without any consequences, sometimes not even giving the player a choice because Katie hasn't said the right thing hours before or hasn't slept with other guys. Didn't they have an agreement that she can quit earlier and doesn't have to work twelve hours a day if she does him some favors?
I know I'm weird, but I would've found it quite thrilling to have Katie almost have a burn-out because Mr. Wight overloads her with work if she refuses to obliege.
She'd then beg him to do him a favor just to have a day off in which case Mr. Wight gets to use her limp and overworked body and uses her right on her desk, finally breaking her spirit (maybe a tear or two?).

 

[Balub]

I couldn't bring this one scenario out of my head and wrote a short story about it, It's about Mr Wright breaking Katie after a long time of reluctance from her side.
It's not coherent with the game, let's call it fanfiction
Oh btw, it's kinda messed up and might be a bit too realistic for some.

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[Daniel xVxd]

I really like the story. Please will there be continuation. Perhaps in further periods of time - as demands on her increase but her attitude develops as well. Please, more chapters ;-)

 

[Daniel xVxd]

Well, I meant Balub's fanfiction story.

But no question I enjoy the game story as well. it might be less realistic, but after all it's fantasy fun, and keeps my suspense of disbelief, thanks to its circumstances. (This is why I become a Patreon supporter of 3Diddly). Thanks for the Tumlr link.

 

[madbloke]

I couldn't bring this one scenario out of my head and wrote a short story about it, It's about Mr Wright breaking Katie after a long time of reluctance from her side.
It's not coherent with the game, let's call it fanfiction
Oh btw, it's kinda messed up and might be a bit too realistic for some.

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Yes I like, you should seriously consider developing a game yourself.

 

[othello]

Here is another text change for 1.14. It includes the osmcuser mod as well as the text changes in 1.13. Put it in your game folder and have fun.

 

[portrapoodle]

mac download for 1.14?

 

[jackgege]

it's a very good game, but updates are very short.
i wish there were group sex or gangbang in futur ;-)

 

[mighty]

mac download for 1.14?

Hoping to see that as well!

 

[zubitex]

I wish Patreon wasnt that annoying, or at least accept some content with the possibility to switch if off for people for are offended with some other people fetishes in the sense its just games and cg noone is getting hurt. Im not into incest but i'd love to see her with the dog. Nowadays hypocrisis.
Thanks for upload by the way.

 

[Amanda Carter]

Update;

"Hi guys,

I've been very busy lately with things in life, but I'm putting some more time in the last few days into the update. I should have a sneak peek tonight, and perhaps a release by this weekend or early next week.

Sorry for the delay."

 

[SholBlerk]

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Could you provide the new sneak peek, @Amanda Carter?

 

[yihman1]

I have come to the conclusion I must wait for every 2-3 updates if I can enjoy playing this for the updates are too short when I play them as released.

 

[Amanda Carter]

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Could you provide the new sneak peek, @Amanda Carter?

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Tentative release: Early next week. Please don't ask me which date specifically. It'll be released when it's ready.

In this update, Katie will be getting her first breast augmentation surgery (1 of 2) in the corruption path. Depending on if she is still with Brain, different dialogue and scenes will occur.

Katie will also be inviting Mr. Wright over for dinner afterwards. There is an optional NTR scene, and it will be more intense than the last 2 that have been introduced, as Brian will be present during the dinner.

 

[Balub]

Sooo... breast augmentation is somehow sexy now? I mean, I get it irl if you're into big boobs or if you have very small ones to start with, but why ruin a perfectly fine body. You all remember how hot Megan Fox was before she got that surgery?

 

[critter]

You are right, as i said before, once Katie's feeling for Brian dropped to 0, there is nothing more left for her but go from one sexual encounter to the other. And as none of the characters in the game are fleshed out (contrary to GGGB), it becomes boring quickly. Blackmail route is kinda more interesting but 3Diddly made this route softer because of the recent Patreon changes. Even the ntr scenes (that i'm a huge fan of) are not very fun.
Now, the game can still have a few interesting updates at the near future, just like pregnancy, but it seems the end approaches. 3Diddly already made some polls about his next game.

Othello mentioned some weeks ago, that there are some possible routes for Katie's development:

White: Office slut, breeding bitch
Brandon: Drug addict, hooker
Jacob: Stripper, pornstar
Father: ???

I would like to see all three paths with the father (he and not White is the father of her child and so on ...) and the other actors as a surprise and disturbing moment in all of them.
Perhaps it is possible to develop one route after the other with one or two decision points of Katie along the storyline.