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Kp2 update is right before proofreading. It's getting better but I'm still slow in making any progress~
That's great to hear but I was asking more so about whether the problems that you were dealing with before got any better.
Got a bit better I'd say. But I'll slow down development from on. Don't know how slow though. Update is in proofreading now btw~^^
Kyara_Lynetty
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Apologies in advance for the lengthy comment, but I wish to voice some feelings about this game. I'll structure/segment this for ease-of-read as best I can.
I found this game from a recommendation on another thread that I can't remember the topic of now, which mentioned it was an "underrated gem" and "one of the best adventure LNs on the site". So, I gave it a try. That was around a week ago; I have now finished the game (I didn't 100% it, but I got to the end). So, here is a full, spoiler review from me.
NOTE: This is specifically directed towards the creator of the game. If you are another player/bystander, be warned that this heavily spoils the entire game and you should avoid reading this if you have not played the game to completion yourself. (Though I doubt many would even bother reading this gargantuan yapfest)
I found this game from a recommendation on another thread that I can't remember the topic of now, which mentioned it was an "underrated gem" and "one of the best adventure LNs on the site". So, I gave it a try. That was around a week ago; I have now finished the game (I didn't 100% it, but I got to the end). So, here is a full, spoiler review from me.
NOTE: This is specifically directed towards the creator of the game. If you are another player/bystander, be warned that this heavily spoils the entire game and you should avoid reading this if you have not played the game to completion yourself. (Though I doubt many would even bother reading this gargantuan yapfest)
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Thanks a lot for this lenghty review/comment. Had me laughing a lot^^. I'm happy you enjoyed my game this much. I'd advise you to join the game's discord server (which has ~1.400 members by now). There's lot's of lore discussion going on and spoiler/previews for upcoming updates. After such a long review I feel like I should write more but I have no idea what...
So... big thanks again for this review, I had fun reading through it and I hope you'll enjoy kp2 as much as you did kp1~
YadenYu
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Solo lo coloque en la carpeta respectiva pero no me sale en español ni la opción para elegir idioma :'( (estoy desde joyplay)
YadenYu
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MachoGuy
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Weird, none of the reviews either positive or negative talk about the sexual content.
We don't beat our meat to this gang?
EDIT: Found one
" For a short overview
60% lesbian 35% futa 5% rest "
60% Not my cup of tea, 35% Meh and 5% good stuff, not worth it.
Man, I love this website but I can't stand the reviews sometimes.
I get it that this game change your life forever and want to praise it
BUT PLEASE! Say something also about the PORN inside this PORN game on this PORN site for the people that might look for PORN and not for the experience of their life.
We don't beat our meat to this gang?
EDIT: Found one
" For a short overview
60% lesbian 35% futa 5% rest "
60% Not my cup of tea, 35% Meh and 5% good stuff, not worth it.
Man, I love this website but I can't stand the reviews sometimes.
I get it that this game change your life forever and want to praise it
BUT PLEASE! Say something also about the PORN inside this PORN game on this PORN site for the people that might look for PORN and not for the experience of their life.
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Shabrani_Goudou
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- Aug 2, 2020
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Just discovered this game and I just wanted to say no, ending 24 is not a bad ending, it's the only ending worth striving for. Fucking headmaster, he deserves everything happening to him. Shame we don't know what happens to the others, but I reckon/hope they suffer a similar fate. Man those idiots had it coming.
And one of that team of 4 that appear after the 2nd exam who says she won't help because Hikari is not determined enough, f you, girl gets race swapped against her will, almost enslaved numerous times, get nightmares because of it, lose her friends, gets lied to at every occasion available and she dares open her mouth.
Man I liked the game but holy shit is it good to vent a bit about those idiots.
And one of that team of 4 that appear after the 2nd exam who says she won't help because Hikari is not determined enough, f you, girl gets race swapped against her will, almost enslaved numerous times, get nightmares because of it, lose her friends, gets lied to at every occasion available and she dares open her mouth.
Man I liked the game but holy shit is it good to vent a bit about those idiots.
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♍VoidTraveler
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- Apr 14, 2021
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Oh wow, why is this so stupidly convoluted lol.
I was so fucking confused why i didn't get the 'true end' on my first playthrough, but now i see that's because it's simply fucking impossible on the first playthrough lol.
Why did i bother skipping all those fun lewds then, just to earn sanity points and keep fucking instincts low.. sigh, such-a-bullshit.
I hate this anti-fun system.
First of all the 'True Ending' should be unlockable from first playthrough, there is no fucking point locking this anyway because everyone will just skip to the end to see it either way.
Also the endings, including the 'true end', should be relatively easily unlockable. Nobody likes a fucking dialogue maze.
Second no matter which ending you land on, once you do get one, all other endings should be automatically unlocked and can then be watched from the menu or gallery or something, if the player feels like it. Because again why bother adding extra steps, no one will be arsed to do those and there is no reason to.
Complete lack of sound effects and ambient also utterly sucks ass, i had to use my own ambient otherwise this would have been completely unplayable for me. Then there's too much drama as well. You do realize this is supposed to be a porn vn right? Most people can't wank when salt is literally gushing from their eyes ya know?
Not nearly enough h-scenes in my opinion. Mc could be a little pervier too, it isn't evil to be a bit of a perv after all. For example i wanted her to play around with her clones waaaay more soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo fucking badly, but she only does it once for the sake of experimenting... FUUUUUUUUUUUCK. I also wondered what would happen if she popped her own cherry or even knocked herself up. But that's probably a bit too hardcore for this generally vanilla gig.
Next she's annoyingly shy and 'prim and proper' all throughout the game, even after the succubus bait fiasco (which let's be perfectly honest here, was also bs story all-around since it took them DAYS to find her even though they knew her EXACT location!)
Next, where's the so-called 'corruption'?
You probably get some of that once you entered some kinda bad-end right? That's... less than ideal tbh. Boring, even.
There also were hints that she's into the idea of a harem, yet this was not explored in the least in Keepers1, but seems like it will be explored in Keepers2 so that should get rather fun~
Shana and the Elf are also not explored nearly enough, the vn kinda just glosses over them and their troubles making them feel like some mere props for mc's needs. There are other characters as well that just got mentioned and ????????????????? nothing happens in the end, they just get glossed over. Like the girl that got transformed into a mermaid by that shitty fox and that blue-haired yandere bitch. Why mention such characters at all then if you don't plan on doing anything with them in the end? x_x" I mean i get you probably just needed side-kicks for mc but probably didn't want to write proper character arcs for Shana and the Elf so you just cut them off for now at least, but why bother mentioning the mermaid deal at all? She was a completely irrelevant character that remained completely irrelevant in the end. Why give her screen time at all?
The rest is alright i think, could be other points worth mentioning but nothing comes to mind atm, maybe i'll add them into this post later if i think of something more.
I hope Keepers2 will be more fun and well-structured, i'm already a bit disappointed in K2 tho since mc of part2 doesn't seem to be Hikari anymore but.. well, we'll see how that goes. I hope there won't be something extremely cringe like Hikari's daughter getting killed too cuz i'll totally flip if so.
I liked the story's general concept but the execution was lacking a bit, in various places, imo. Even the ending is a bit silly, i mean, what prevented Tizi from just mind-controlling someone into stabbing herself with that realm-keeper-killing dagger instead of Hikari? Then they stab that puppet in the back just like they did with Hikari and the result will be EXACTLY the same lmao, there was no real need to rise Hikari for the task and wasting all that time, AT ALL!
Heck, maybe she could just literally suicide with that dagger with her own hands and Lumi could still be there to take over. Anyway the logic of the ending is.. shoddy as hell at best imo. I doubt any even remotely smart person like a 'realm keeper' would ever buy into that bs that Tizi and Lumi were enemies in the first place, definitely not the ice bitch by the looks of it. And it wouldn't even matter because for their own safety the other keepers would gang up on anyone who gets stronger than the rest of them since no one is dumb enough to let others get more powerful than themselves. So what now? Lumi has to fight.. how many of them? The very reason for sacrificing Hikari is null this way, since they sacrificed Hikari so that they supposedly 'not get attacked by other realm keepers', right? It's just silly, all of it.But anyway, it was still quite a fun read so.. good job writing all that. I'll be waiting for the completion of Keepers2.
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