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johnyakuza1

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I mean story itself wasnt shakespeare by any stretch of the imagination...

But the rush to the ending?

My man just typed end this story to chatgpt and used the first output. Goddamn.
SB1 was done with the story, and he wanted to wrap things up... and Kim got the happy ending she deserved.

He has just grown out of this game/story/genre, and he couldn't have continued it any longer. This is a better outcome than an abandoned game. I'll be honest, I don't see how padding it with another version or two could've "slowed" down the ending. We all knew it was coming, and it did.
 
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SpaceBall1

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Toilet paper logic !
Nope…it’s the truth and the truth might hurt you, but it’s still the truth…and to further my point…a visual novel is really just a picture book. An adult picture book. The ones with choices are like if dr. Sues or r.l. Stein made alternate “what if” chapters to their books to account for all the different choices the character could have made. Choices or no choices don’t make a visual “novel” a game…it’s literally in the word…a novel…that’s a book in case you didn’t know.
 
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MasterGamer1234567890

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I have played this game both with joy and disgust at the same time.

It always felt like giving some premium stake to the maggots...

I think most norman guys would love to take the virgin Kimberly as GF/Wife, but after beeing tosses arround and used like toiletpaper, i wouldn't dare to touch her. You might get multiple STD's. Disgusting!

I am happy this waste of good fapping material has finally ended.
Give Kimberly a new start in a nice (vanilla) story.
Personally the vanilla stories make me want to puke. I LOVE the non consensual sex fantasy, but it would be event better if the the girls were pimped and didn't get a dime them self or forced to take creampies despite not being on birth control.
 
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MasterGamer1234567890

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Thanks for a good novel. I liked it, except the ending. That is a bummer and doesn't fit the novel at all. Would have been better with the girls ending up as reluctant prostitutes shitting unwanted babies one after the other.
 
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88stanford88

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So is this game the boring slow-burn story where only at the end is there, finally, some sexual action?
I stopped playing after the third update, which is why I ask
 
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Thank you so much SpaceBall1 for this Amazing game! I enjoyed and looked forward to every update. Would've loved to see Kimberly fuck more homeless guys, but that's something I hope you think about for the next game. Can't wait to play the next one.<3
 

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So is this game the boring slow-burn story where only at the end is there, finally, some sexual action?
I stopped playing after the third update, which is why I ask
Not sure when the third update came out, but all updates since I started playing this novel more than a year ago, has contained sexual actions in all of them. Haven't you played them, you have definitely been missing out.
 
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I thought I would fill in my f95 followers on my progress with the space story. It is being worked on and I am at 66 images. There really isn't a timeline for when the prologue will be available, but I will let you know when it gets closer. Here are some images for you guys. May the Schwartz be with you. ~SB1
Base8.png Base10.png Base29.png Base37.png Base44.png Base65.png
 

SpaceBall1

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Hey, what's the new project about? Will there be some interspecies action?
Yes there will be interspecies action.
Old men too.
Short synopsis is Jenna(the blonde) is going to be a new cadet on admiral Lonestar's crew. Her friend River is already there, and there’s another girl, Ava, who is jealous of Jenna’s looks and friendship with River. Ava is the captain so she is superior to the others. And she has some spiteful plans for our heroine. On the ship is also a Senator who is the middle man between the Alliance command and the Admiral's missions. The senator lusts over Jenna. He gives the green light on decisions, and reports the effectiveness of the ships work. While at the academy, Jenna's parents were kidnapped from her home planet Metradore, by the main bad guy named Lord Cain. Jenna wants to rescue them and will do anything to accomplish this task. Jenna will find her self in all kinds of situations on different missions and those missions will be the stories that follow. There is also a gangster who runs a neutral planet who is named Tokka the Slugg. There will be run-ins with him as well. Plus a lot of other fun ideas.
 

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Yes there will be interspecies action.
Old men too.
Short synopsis is Jenna(the blonde) is going to be a new cadet on admiral Lonestar's crew. Her friend River is already there, and there’s another girl, Ava, who is jealous of Jenna’s looks and friendship with River. Ava is the captain so she is superior to the others. And she has some spiteful plans for our heroine. On the ship is also a Senator who is the middle man between the Alliance command and the Admiral's missions. The senator lusts over Jenna. He gives the green light on decisions, and reports the effectiveness of the ships work. While at the academy, Jenna's parents were kidnapped from her home planet Metradore, by the main bad guy named Lord Cain. Jenna wants to rescue them and will do anything to accomplish this task. Jenna will find her self in all kinds of situations on different missions and those missions will be the stories that follow. There is also a gangster who runs a neutral planet who is named Tokka the Slugg. There will be run-ins with him as well. Plus a lot of other fun ideas.
Forgive me if this comes off as insensitive: but that doesn't seem too far off from Kimberly's Life? Swap the old ugly men with aliens and it looks like it will be the same general plot - unless this time, the heroine engages in interspecies lewdness on her own accord and enjoys it from the start?
 

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Forgive me if this comes off as insensitive: but that doesn't seem too far off from Kimberly's Life? Swap the old ugly men with aliens and it looks like it will be the same general plot - unless this time, the heroine engages in interspecies lewdness on her own accord and enjoys it from the start?
I don't see that at all. More story, less sex. Searching for information about her parents whereabouts and capturing bad guys. I don't remember Kimberly doing anything like that...I mean, as for the sex part, she's not going to want to be doing it but she knows sex/seduction is going to be part of the job. But still, the plot is nothing like Kimberly.
 
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I don't see that at all. More story, less sex. Searching for information about her parents whereabouts and capturing bad guys. I don't remember Kimberly doing anything like that...I mean, as for the sex part, she's not going to want to be doing it but she knows sex/seduction is going to be part of the job. But still, the plot is nothing like Kimberly.
More story less sex... Why not make it a pure Lesbian tale...
 
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More story less sex... Why not make it a pure Lesbian tale...
It's possible to put lesbian stuff in it, we'll see. But I am not going down the path where sex happens in almost every scene. Maybe there will be sex in one update, and none in the next. I didn't like what I did with Kimberly and I am not doing it again. I'm developing a story and it's characters. Just trying to be as open and clear as I can.
 

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It's possible to put lesbian stuff in it, we'll see. But I am not going down the path where sex happens in almost every scene. Maybe there will be sex in one update, and none in the next. I didn't like what I did with Kimberly and I am not doing it again. I'm developing a story and it's characters. Just trying to be as open and clear as I can.
I appreciate the honesty.

However, I feel like what you described is "Kimberly's Life" with a heavier focus on story. More importantly, if the main heroine (Jenny) will not in fact enjoy transactional sex with old men & aliens, then the game sounds an awful a lot like Kimberly's Life - except this time, Jenny doesn't have to do it to survive, but to save her parents.

The farewells you made at the end of Kimberly's Life gave me a different impression of what your next project (if there ever was one) might be. Seeing it happen so fast, and not being all that different to Kimberly's Life is what's throwing me for a loop here.
 
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SpaceBall1

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I appreciate the honesty.

However, I feel like what you described is "Kimberly's Life" with a heavier focus on story. More importantly, if the main heroine (Jenny) will not in fact enjoy transactional sex with old men & aliens, then the game sounds an awful a lot like Kimberly's Life - except this time, Jenny doesn't have to do it to survive, but to save her parents.

The farewells you made at the end of Kimberly's Life gave me a different impression of what your next project (if there ever was one) might be. Seeing it happen so fast, and not being all that different to Kimberly's Life is what's throwing me for a loop here.
I guess you'll just have to play it to see.
 
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