VN Ren'Py Abandoned Kindread: The Redburns [Ch. 5] [Inkalicious]

[Nubatron]

I actually wonder if we will ever get to molest the zombies.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

To few naked zombies in this release, give us some eye candy!

I actually wonder if we will ever get to molest the zombies.

While alive, our sex thrived
When she tickled my pickle.
She's dead now instead,
So I butter her bread.

 

[inkalicious]

I've noticed that regardless of the choice the situations tend to end up the same, but I figured that since the female characters main problem with you was being a skeevy perv about everything, that if you correct that behavior, the MC's life will end up better.

Hopefully I'm not wrong about that.

By the by, your Skip is broken. I had to start a new save, so I tried skipping to the new content and started skipping new content when I got there. I double checked to make sure I didn't have "Unseen Text" selected and I didn't. It still allowed me to skip through things.

Damn. Thanks for the heads-up about the skip. I've had a few bugs with this release, but all related to the Ren'Py app rather than my content. Frustrating.

I mulling over writing a post about decisions within the game. I tend to play the long game, so the set-up has already happened for some important stuff that's coming.
Man, some people are going to be annoyed about decisions they made, even in Chapter 1, that'll only matter in a much later chapter.

 

[D Dog]

Damn. Thanks for the heads-up about the skip. I've had a few bugs with this release, but all related to the Ren'Py app rather than my content. Frustrating.

I mulling over writing a post about decisions within the game. I tend to play the long game, so the set-up has already happened for some important stuff that's coming.
Man, some people are going to be annoyed about decisions they made, even in Chapter 1, that'll only matter in a much later chapter.

@inkalicious make the game \ story you want to tell, if you try to please everyone the product (game) you want to deliver will not be of high quality. Just a thought consider.

 

[inkalicious]

To few naked zombies in this release, give us some eye candy!

I actually wonder if we will ever get to molest the zombies.

Soooo... It won't happen in this VN, but in another, there was a character written who had an 'interest' in pretty dead things. And it was completely up to you whether that content was available or not.
However, after having one account closed by Patreon and a polite warning that they were now watching my account, I decided to not argue whether undead = necrophilia and get rid of that content.

I can't see myself lasting long on Patreon, so it might get reinstated. However, even as avoidable content, I'd have to think about it being a taboo too far for a wider audience.

 

[Abîme]

I made several playthrough, all of them concern Megan, so for her story part, in one way or an other I'm good

 

[inkalicious]

@inkalicious make the game \ story you want to tell, if you try to please everyone the product (game) you want to deliver will not be of high quality. Just a thought consider.

Cheers. Nothing's likely to change in the story, so it's more about voicing my approach to decision-making. No design-by-committee here.

 

[Comrade Anulnyat]

Forgot about the game for some time and was pretty happy to see updated. As usual, love the game, the dialogues, the humor and the whole build up thing, however, the end of the third chapter left me really confused.

The MC is clearly a perv, but with a good soul and overall kind person.
Since he was perving on his "childhood friend/neighbour's daugther/classmate/roomate/pilot of the airplane/spacemarine", how come he overreacts so much, when she tells him the whole truth about things, that happened?

I want to think, that it was made so for the sake of cliffhanger, but perhaps I don't know something and I need to replay the game and see if I missed anything about MC?

 

[Mtgwo]

Great game my dude.

Looking forward for new updates.

 

[Deleted member 512926]

Very nice game, looking forward to the next update, and to see where the story leads our beloved main character, in his time of depravity. Hoping that we will get more content with random girls outside the main base.
Also do you have plans for a combat system in the future that could lead to different story points, or will you keep it strictly visual novelish?

Damn. Thanks for the heads-up about the skip. I've had a few bugs with this release, but all related to the Ren'Py app rather than my content. Frustrating.

I mulling over writing a post about decisions within the game. I tend to play the long game, so the set-up has already happened for some important stuff that's coming.
Man, some people are going to be annoyed about decisions they made, even in Chapter 1, that'll only matter in a much later chapter.

Makes me kinda hyped to see where my decisions leads me.

 

[genehage]

Pretty great work.

I'm especially a fan of the way you do subtle conversation variants for previous decisions / stat levels. Best example is... (uh, avoiding spoilers) the Ch1_253a, Ch1_253b, Ch1_253c and Ch1_254a / var10 sequence. I really liked the effect of that one.

 

[inkalicious]

Pretty great work.

I'm especially a fan of the way you do subtle conversation variants for previous decisions / stat levels. Best example is... (uh, avoiding spoilers) the Ch1_253a, Ch1_253b, Ch1_253c and Ch1_254a / var10 sequence. I really liked the effect of that one.

Ha! Thanks. I do enjoy making these little variations, which might get missed, so good detective work there.

 

[inkalicious]

Forgot about the game for some time and was pretty happy to see updated. As usual, love the game, the dialogues, the humor and the whole build up thing, however, the end of the third chapter left me really confused.

The MC is clearly a perv, but with a good soul and overall kind person.
Since he was perving on his "childhood friend/neighbour's daugther/classmate/roomate/pilot of the airplane/spacemarine", how come he overreacts so much, when she tells him the whole truth about things, that happened?

I want to think, that it was made so for the sake of cliffhanger, but perhaps I don't know something and I need to replay the game and see if I missed anything about MC?

See. You can find some good in even a slightly depraved soul.

Here's my take. And of course spoilers ahead...

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[Mormont]

First time playing this and I gotta say very impressed with this, decent story so far very interesting characters and I'm a sucker for cute redheads spoiled for choice with Megan and Sam both hotties. And as others have said very underrated and I'm looking forward to seeing more of this, nice work

 

[inkalicious]

Very nice game, looking forward to the next update, and to see where the story leads our beloved main character, in his time of depravity. Hoping that we will get more content with random girls outside the main base.
Also do you have plans for a combat system in the future that could lead to different story points, or will you keep it strictly visual novelish?



Makes me kinda hyped to see where my decisions leads me.

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You'll definitely be meeting Olivia above.

There isn't a combat system, but any action will be treated the same as other choices. So it'll use your previous decisions, current situation and other elements to decide outcomes.

 

[fuckyouassholes]

Cheers. Unfortunately I can't say how many.
The story is written, but the chapter length is determined by what I can get done and ending on a nice cliffhanger.

I do love a nice cliffhanger.

thank you for the reply !

hey, take your time

i love what i see so far !

best of luck

thanks alot for making this !

 

[Nubatron]

I see Olivia is good with a spear.

 

[Mahgni Mada]

@inkalicious
Man, these characters are awesome! Especially Sam (what a tease), I'm totally in love with them as well as the story and setting presented here. Well done! And good luck with the project.

I have a question though if you don't mind, is there any chance of you adding some optional urination scenes involving Sam in a future update for those of us who have a urination fetish? That scene were she needed to use the toilet was a bit of a turn on for me because I got excited at the thought of seeing her use the sink or something out of desperation. I'll admit I was a little sad when nothing actually happened

I'm already going to support you on Patreon but if you were to add an optional peeing scene or two involving Sam in a future version, it would be a very hefty bonus that I (and I'm sure many others) would very much appreciate

 

[inkalicious]

@inkalicious
Man, these characters are awesome! Especially Sam (what a tease), I'm totally in love with them as well as the story and setting presented here. Well done! And good luck with the project.

I have a question though if you don't mind, is there any chance of you adding some optional urination scenes involving Sam in a future update for those of us who have a urination fetish? That scene were she needed to use the toilet was a bit of a turn on for me because I got excited at the thought of seeing her use the sink or something out of desperation. I'll admit I was a little sad when nothing actually happened

I'm already going to support you on Patreon but if you were to add an optional peeing scene or two involving Sam in a future version, it would be a very hefty bonus that I (and I'm sure many others) would very much appreciate

Glad you're enjoying it Mahgni.

There are Patreon polls arriving after Chapter 4, but at the moment they're character specific, not for events or the story.
I thought about opening up more to votes, but I have more than enough to produce at the moment.

I also don't want to give too much away, but there is an optional pee-related event in a future chapter. Unfortunately it won't be ongoing content and how it happens is... relevant to the characters situation, so not sure if it'll tick the box or not.

I'm such a tease.

 

[inkalicious]

Big post ahead...

I'd like to thank everyone for their comments and feedback. It helps to know when characters, plot devices and the story are working and where things need improving.

One thing that's cropped up a few times is the belief that decisions don't have much effect. This is very far from the truth, but I completely understand why it seems that way.

I'm not going to change the VN, but I also don't want my audience to feel that they've been ambushed by unreasonable future WTF moments. No Daenerys plot twists here, so I'm going to explain my approach and some thinking in a couple of spoilers.

If you're happy just playing, no need to read these, just know your decisions have effects, however small.
If you'd like a little glimpse into my thought process, read the first spoiler.
Second spoiler contains spoilers for real.

For those reading back, this post was written soon after the release of Chapter 3.

Spoiler: Slowly, slowly catchy monkey

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Spoiler: Here be dragons

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