- Feb 12, 2021
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I've played thru seven times so far and each time I get to 'the talk' with Sam (just before chap4) I feel like something is missing. I have to admit the first time I got SO salty - I playthru as if it was me IRL.
And what popped into my head was: 1. I'd slap that smartass smirk off her face and beat the living sh*t out of her (which wouldn't have helped anybody) or 2. I would have stood up walked back to my room gotten dressed grabbed my bug out bag and gear and left. More than likely I'd have gone somewhere close by until daylight then found someplace else like the warehouse. After two weeks I'd show up again - after I'd cooled down some and Sure Megan would be pissed, Sam my have had a relapse - like when MC skipped out on inventory day and came back late (good on her).
But I digress - what I feel missing is just that - a choice - there's a spot for it when you say "I'll be making the decision" and she's like "you will?". Then you'd have the choice of A: [say oh well] staying and swallowing everything she's done to you over the last 4.5 (maybe longer) months {game continues}. Or B: [say f*ck it] leave then comeback later (as above). After that you tell Sam (in front of Megan) about your 'deal', why she made it, what it entailed and how long it had been going on because of her (Sam) actions. Then find out if Megan knew about 'ALL' the stuff Sam had done. If not then you tell her everything Sam told you and end the 'deal' that was based on a lie. If she did know that night when she came to your room then..... ?. If that's the case you've been stabbed in the back by both of them and looks like there's no reason to stay or to have come back..... except 'Free Use' from both of them starting immediately.
Of course all of this would mean a major rework to add the content for the second choice/path. Maybe have it as Redburns 1.1,1.2,2.0, stand alone.?. But my later plays with different choices made me less salty - in the morning and not helping and giving her what she deserved .... and also what she wanted (the sl*t).
So hopefully inkalicious will see this and have some thoughts or ideas. Love the VN of course!! <3
And what popped into my head was: 1. I'd slap that smartass smirk off her face and beat the living sh*t out of her (which wouldn't have helped anybody) or 2. I would have stood up walked back to my room gotten dressed grabbed my bug out bag and gear and left. More than likely I'd have gone somewhere close by until daylight then found someplace else like the warehouse. After two weeks I'd show up again - after I'd cooled down some and Sure Megan would be pissed, Sam my have had a relapse - like when MC skipped out on inventory day and came back late (good on her).
But I digress - what I feel missing is just that - a choice - there's a spot for it when you say "I'll be making the decision" and she's like "you will?". Then you'd have the choice of A: [say oh well] staying and swallowing everything she's done to you over the last 4.5 (maybe longer) months {game continues}. Or B: [say f*ck it] leave then comeback later (as above). After that you tell Sam (in front of Megan) about your 'deal', why she made it, what it entailed and how long it had been going on because of her (Sam) actions. Then find out if Megan knew about 'ALL' the stuff Sam had done. If not then you tell her everything Sam told you and end the 'deal' that was based on a lie. If she did know that night when she came to your room then..... ?. If that's the case you've been stabbed in the back by both of them and looks like there's no reason to stay or to have come back..... except 'Free Use' from both of them starting immediately.
Of course all of this would mean a major rework to add the content for the second choice/path. Maybe have it as Redburns 1.1,1.2,2.0, stand alone.?. But my later plays with different choices made me less salty - in the morning and not helping and giving her what she deserved .... and also what she wanted (the sl*t).
So hopefully inkalicious will see this and have some thoughts or ideas. Love the VN of course!! <3
