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I made a revision and updated the Mega links — for now, only the Mega links. By default, it's enabled, but right before the first scene happens, the game will ask the player whether they want to keep it enabled or turn it off.
well nice to see a quick fix, did just try it and works well and the dialog is changed when walking by (y)

so did continue the story and found out that kate is a escort, it is just said "her line of work" with no specifics added to it in the story, but in the info about her in the phone.
is she a Li? and if so, is she going to continue that line of work?

also with mc wanting escorts for his club that he is going to start, your missing prostitution tag under planned content, all tho kate is already presented as a escort but only by the info in the phone.

is the sister going to be a cam-whore in the future? assuming the whole thing with her getting mad that mc dont want to buy her a webcam?
 

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Rachel is good for netori content. MC should steal her :cool: You should consider add this choice
Nah, better leave that NTR stuff aside :LOL:

I second this. If voyeurism provides a certain context to the story, then yeah, sure, put it in. But as this was the first voy scene, it had no value to the story. If you wanna tell they are having sex, then add text that they are having sex while the door is closed.

Also as people alluded before here if it's just for fap then we already have better sites, games for it. If you want it to be a fap material you need to work hard on animations at least. For now, they are mediocre at best (constructive criticism here).

Since you are a new dev, and hoping you wanna continue on this journey, making a good story game is always better than fap material game for the long run and maybe future projects after this.

Don't take this as hate, it's just some criticism after reading some replies. I love playing new games with different stories, so good luck for the future, and I'll try the game again after a couple of updates.
Thanks for your comment, I appreciate positive criticism because it helps me understand things better and, as a result, bring better updates and content. Thanks for playing

well nice to see a quick fix, did just try it and works well and the dialog is changed when walking by (y)

so did continue the story and found out that kate is a escort, it is just said "her line of work" with no specifics added to it in the story, but in the info about her in the phone.
is she a Li? and if so, is she going to continue that line of work?

also with mc wanting escorts for his club that he is going to start, your missing prostitution tag under planned content, all tho kate is already presented as a escort but only by the info in the phone.

is the sister going to be a cam-whore in the future? assuming the whole thing with her getting mad that mc dont want to buy her a webcam?
Once again, sorry for the confusion in the previous version—spoilers ahead.
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:unsure: To be fair I have to point out a prostitue is just that a prostitue.
And whereas some escourts maybe high end prostitues.(their term for it not mine)
Strangly enough some Escourts are just that Escourts.
Surprisingly I know... but not all Escourts have/happen to be prostitues.
Just mentioning that fact for the sake of fairness.
Equally suprising is that prostitusion is not a requirment to being an Escourt.
And yet say Escourt and some people automatically think prostitue.(go figger)
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Alright, let’s break this down...

There are two main points to consider here:

First — this is a porn game, and let’s be honest, a lot of people are here just for the fap, right?
Personally, when I play something like this, I’m not really into voyeurism or NTR being part of the main story. But if it’s in a gallery, as an optional scene, then I’ll watch it — because at that point, it’s just for the "fap"

Second — I need to follow a coherent storyline. The MC’s father is a powerful guy, a real tough one. He’s definitely not someone who’d get cucked. If something like that ever happened, he would kill both the MC and Rachel without hesitation.
So rest assured: there will be no NTR in this game.

Now, think about it — the only logical way to have a sex scene with Rachel would be if the MC’s father dies, right?
But if I go down that route, it could take 1 or 2 years in development for that to actually happen…
And let’s be honest, Rachel is an extremely attractive character. It would feel like a waste not to have any sexual content with her.

The only viable option, then, is voyeurism. Since there won’t be NTR, and she won’t be a love interest for the MC while the father is still alive.

But of course — if you have a better idea on how to create a scene with her, without killing off the MC’s dad and still staying away from NTR — I’m totally open to hearing it.
Okay, first of all, I don't know about everyone, but I'd say most players aren't here to fap to some text and images. If I wanted to fap, there are tons of free and paid websites with real videos and audio for every genre.
We're here for the story—sure, also for the sex scenes. If it didn't have any, it wouldn't be an AVN.

Second, sure—it's your story, and you can write it however you want. I'm not going to argue whether it's NTR or not, because that's a pointless tag.
For me, if she's a love interest (current or future) and she's getting fucked by NPCs, then I completely lose interest in her. I honestly don't care about her life or story anymore. That kind of content is for people who enjoy seeing their love interest get screwed by NPCs.

And about the scene—
I don't know if she's a future love interest or not, but if she is, it's wasted. I'm 100% sure that 90% of harem players won't follow her story and have zero interest in her sex life, especially if she's getting fucked by NPCs. So yeah, it's already wasted here.

You said she's extremely attractive, but if you really want to create a sex scene for her, there are still other ways to do it and actually attract players.

1. This was a perfect chance for netori fans—they would’ve definitely liked it, but you ruined it.

2. Make him lust after or cheat with other NPC female characters who aren't love interests, and avoid his wife.

3. Give her or the MC some kind of lust power to attract each other.

4. If you can't kill his dad, then cuck him secretly with his own women, and reveal it when the time comes.

Lastly, Just make her route avoidable or optional.

There are still other ways, but like I said, it's your story. Also, be aware that in a harem game, players aren't interested in the sex lives of NPCs.

Just sharing my thoughts—that’s all.
 

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Okay, first of all, I don't know about everyone, but I'd say most players aren't here to fap to some text and images. If I wanted to fap, there are tons of free and paid websites with real videos and audio for every genre.
We're here for the story—sure, also for the sex scenes. If it didn't have any, it wouldn't be an AVN.

Second, sure—it's your story, and you can write it however you want. I'm not going to argue whether it's NTR or not, because that's a pointless tag.
For me, if she's a love interest (current or future) and she's getting fucked by NPCs, then I completely lose interest in her. I honestly don't care about her life or story anymore. That kind of content is for people who enjoy seeing their love interest get screwed by NPCs.

And about the scene—
I don't know if she's a future love interest or not, but if she is, it's wasted. I'm 100% sure that 90% of harem players won't follow her story and have zero interest in her sex life, especially if she's getting fucked by NPCs. So yeah, it's already wasted here.

You said she's extremely attractive, but if you really want to create a sex scene for her, there are still other ways to do it and actually attract players.

1. This was a perfect chance for netori fans—they would’ve definitely liked it, but you ruined it.

2. Make him lust after or cheat with other NPC female characters who aren't love interests, and avoid his wife.

3. Give her or the MC some kind of lust power to attract each other.

4. If you can't kill his dad, then cuck him secretly with his own women, and reveal it when the time comes.

Lastly, Just make her route avoidable or optional.

There are still other ways, but like I said, it's your story. Also, be aware that in a harem game, players aren't interested in the sex lives of NPCs.

Just sharing my thoughts—that’s all.
Thanks for your comment. I really appreciate your opinion. I'll think about it (y)
 
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I may be biased but I still think my "give Rachel a twin sister," is the best idea presented so far, :sneaky:

Once again, sorry for the confusion in the previous version—spoilers ahead.
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This is a personal desire, not saying it's required by any means, but I hope the sister is a virgin, not every love interest needs to be a virgin of course, but it hits nice when the sister is. Especially if it's because she's always wanted her brother, it's just extra special and naughty, :devilish:
 
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The whole thing can be easily solved by just having a fight with the 2 showing they have not been together for a while and have her frustrated and (taking care of herself). If he is such a big deal\big bad and going to be a antagonist it is not a big stretch that he is cheating on her and her scared to leave him. So not hard to see him tired of her but keep her as a trophie so you get to add her to the harem and she can even help to take him down. Win\Win she will be untouched for a while and frustrated so a reason to get with the MC/join harem and you get a plot device to help with the story as she would know things to help MC. Plus the satisfaction of stealing her from him...
 

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The whole thing can be easily solved by just having a fight with the 2 showing they have not been together for a while and have her frustrated and (taking care of herself). If he is such a big deal\big bad and going to be a antagonist it is not a big stretch that he is cheating on her and her scared to leave him. So not hard to see him tired of her but keep her as a trophie so you get to add her to the harem and she can even help to take him down. Win\Win she will be untouched for a while and frustrated so a reason to get with the MC/join harem and you get a plot device to help with the story as she would know things to help MC. Plus the satisfaction of stealing her from him...
this, I LIKE THIS ONE
 

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What does the development cycle look like for this ?
3months ? 6 months ?
 

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What does the development cycle look like for this ?
3months ? 6 months ?
I don’t have an exact timeline for each update since I work on the project in my free time. The last one took about 4 months to complete, so the next one will likely take around 3 to 4 months as well.
 
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The whole thing can be easily solved by just having a fight with the 2 showing they have not been together for a while and have her frustrated and (taking care of herself). If he is such a big deal\big bad and going to be a antagonist it is not a big stretch that he is cheating on her and her scared to leave him. So not hard to see him tired of her but keep her as a trophie so you get to add her to the harem and she can even help to take him down. Win\Win she will be untouched for a while and frustrated so a reason to get with the MC/join harem and you get a plot device to help with the story as she would know things to help MC. Plus the satisfaction of stealing her from him...
It could also be that when the Mc gets to the house instead of hearing them fucking he hears them having a argument and then he can eavesdrop or walk away. Could even have it where if he eavesdrops then he overhears something that can give him leverage at some point. Could potentially work.

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_Akkira_ Had a few, relatively, minor things I wanted to bring up:

First, a question, if I may.
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Another point:
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Last about Kate and escorts in general:
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Not saying you have to take any of my ideas or points and use them. Obviously I'd like it if you did, but so far it's an okay story, and I'm interested in where it is going either way.
 
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It could also be that when the Mc gets to the house instead of hearing them fucking he hears them having a argument and then he can eavesdrop or walk away. Could even have it where if he eavesdrops then he overhears something that can give him leverage at some point. Could potentially work.

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_Akkira_ Had a few, relatively, minor things I wanted to bring up:

First, a question, if I may.
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Another point:
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Not saying you have to take any of my ideas or points and use them. Obviously I'd like it if you did, but so far it's an okay story, and I'm interested in where it is going either way.
Thank you so much for playing and for all the ideas you shared! Let me go over the points you mentioned:
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About the break-in:
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Since this game is a reboot, some scenes are still leftovers from the old version. I’ll be fixing all of these unfinished elements before releasing the next update.
Once again, thanks so much for your feedback!

Maybe something I wrote got lost in translation to English. :confused:
 

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Thank you so much for playing and for all the ideas you shared! Let me go over the points you mentioned:
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Since this game is a reboot, some scenes are still leftovers from the old version. I’ll be fixing all of these unfinished elements before releasing the next update.
Once again, thanks so much for your feedback!

Maybe something I wrote got lost in translation to English. :confused:
Thanks for the response. If you're okay with having a little more discussion then I have some things to add or clarify, especially if you are doing some reworks before the next release:

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All just talk of course, I enjoyed the story for the most part as is, so this is all just little things that I personally think could potentially improve things a bit. No pressure or anything, (y)
 

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I'm working on an AVN right now and have finally started making renders for it so I'm there learning how things work myself.
Nice! When you're ready to play, let me know so I can join in
All just talk of course, I enjoyed the story for the most part as is, so this is all just little things that I personally think could potentially improve things a bit. No pressure or anything,
I agree with the points you mentioned — since I'm going to implement those scenes, the dialogues will probably change a bit.
 

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So what kind of Protagonist are we supposed to be getting here? Played through and I'm not sure if there's supposed to be any relatability or if he's supposed to just be a thug.

Also given the description about not knowing how dark his family is supposed to be, the very casual murder sticks out a bit. He seems to already know how dirty the family is.
 
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So what kind of Protagonist are we supposed to be getting here? Played through and I'm not sure if there's supposed to be any relatability or if he's supposed to just be a thug.

Also given the description about not knowing how dark his family is supposed to be, the very casual murder sticks out a bit. He seems to already know how dirty the family is.
Yes, you could say he's a criminal, since he's an accomplice to his father. But he doesn’t do anything to good, innocent people. There are still hidden things about his family that he doesn’t know — like where their wealth really comes from.
 
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