Thanks for player agency, players like the idea that they have some ability to "steer the wheel" during the story.
Good story so far, I'm interested in seeing how it plays out.
Dad *is* being too harsh on spoiled brat daughter, but hopefully there's an ability on the players part to temper her spoiled brat nature, bring her back to reality. She'll be able to handle life better if she doesn't have unrealistic expectations.
Also, please God, don't make her interested in being just another cam whore, those are a dime a dozen in real life and in AVN's. Your story is already something a bit different than the usual spoiled brat boy at home trying to diddle his mom, I like that "different" energy.
Have a nice day.
Oh, in the first sex scene, that needs a bit of work, the alignment with the genitals is a little wonky. Other than that it looks good to me.