Hey man, thanks for playing and for the feedback!
I really enjoyed what you wrote, seriously. It was long, but a great read.
About the MC: in the beginning, he is a spoiled, arrogant guy—the kind of "fuck everyone else, I just want to show off" type. But that starts to shift after the conflict with his sister—that moment makes him reflect on a few things. The idea is to show that evolution little by little, even if he stays a complicated guy.
Tiffany isn’t exactly a “traditional” reporter, you know? She’s got her own style: she likes to provoke, draw attention, exaggerate stuff… kind of like tabloid media, haha. It’s part of her personality.
About Kate’s “professional path”... hahaha, I admit I’m not sure how that sounds to a native speaker, but in Portuguese it doesn’t come off that weird. Maybe I’ll revise it later to make it sound more natural.
Bob is intentionally a goofy, slow guy with no experience with women—so he comes off as passive. The scene where the MC
She said she’d follow him to the end, and he wants to know just how far she’s willing to go.
About the affection and submission points: that system and the scenes related to it came from the original version of the game, which was a sandbox. Back then, they were used to progress the girls’ routes. Now that the structure is more linear, I’m adapting it—and those points will start to influence dialogues and small scenes moving forward.
Rachel... yeah, a lot of people want her as a LI. Right now that’s not the plan, but maybe... just maybe... she’ll have a special moment at the end of the game. I’m open to ideas
Mickaelly isn’t the MILF—the MILF will be Kelly’s mom, who’s going to appear later. There’ll also be another character who fits that category too.
Alice really is a sweetheart. She’s Chinese on her mother’s side, but her dad isn’t—which is why she speaks both languages. Her backstory and her connection with Karine will be explored more in the next update.
Cassy… she’s spoiled, impulsive, full of energy… and she’s just getting started. There’s a lot more coming with her.
About the Game Over warning: it’s tied to Bob’s brother, who showed up in the last update. I think it’s clearer now why that choice might end badly. I know people are gonna curse me if they fall into the wrong route… but hey, that’s part of the fun, right?

And just to wrap it up: I have no intention of abandoning the game. I’m also working on another project, with more intense characters and a more complex story—I’ve been writing it for years. But I want to finish this one first, to learn everything I can before launching the next.
Thanks again for the kind words and for playing!