Jinsoyun

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Sep 28, 2018
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I can't be the only one who thinks this "You're going to break me!" shit is fucking stupid, surely? Jasmine wants to break Velhis, Velhis wants to break Jasmine, Kroq can somehow make Sabia scream out "You're going to break me!!!!" all by himself after she got gangbanged by orcs for 3 days straight, orc's either got the world's most perfect dick or this is some high-school writing shit.

I physically cringed at that little dialogue between Jasmine and Tyrin, doubly-so at Sabia's line of being broken. This writing is going to break me, but unironically.
Indeed. Depending on player choices, at that point Sabia could have taken Tekrok to the ass, dry. A hellhound. A fucking minotaur. A dozen tentacles at the same time. A 7 foot tall shapeshifting red monster. And she participated in a dozen gangbangs as the only woman. Yeah, homeless orc#56 is going to break her in 10 seconds if he isn't gentle enough...

I get that this is a fantasy porn game and as such the revenge on a woman is adjusted accordingly, but to me it sometimes feels like there are key phrases in each patch that are thrown around as if a little kid learned a new word. This time it was "breaking", in the Bris quests it was "lessons", another time everyone was talking about "discipline" and so on.
Scenes and series of interactions can and sometimes should have themes, but it has to be implemented well and not just hammered in.
 

nyqz

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Mar 17, 2018
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And this is where a good quest turned into a nose dive. The dom was still relatively good and sometimes even a bit funny too, but on the dom path Sabia just got abused, again, for a few days... Can someone please help me out? Are subs not allowed to enjoy sex? Is that how it goes? The dom has fun and the sub never does? Wasn't this fetish about taking the lead and following the lead? When did it change?
Couldn't agree more. The obvious way that the training scenes should have gone with the sub-path is Sabia has to flatter, entertain or seduce the orcs that she's recruited so they're willing to actually commit to warrior training. It feels like such a natural place for the sub-storyline to go, but they do nothing with it. If they were still sticking to the original vision of a porn game with a meaningful RPG-style narrative then having Sabia get gangbanged in a cage would be the consequence of not managing the quest properly. For example by being too assertive when your choices have given Sabia a reputation as someone not to take seriously.

I get that this is a fantasy porn game and as such the revenge on a woman is adjusted accordingly, but to me it sometimes feels like there are key phrases in each patch that are thrown around as if a little kid learned a new word. This time it was "breaking", in the Bris quests it was "lessons", another time everyone was talking about "discipline" and so on.
Scenes and series of interactions can and sometimes should have themes, but it has to be implemented well and not just hammered in.
At least during the Bris questline the constant use of 'lessons' was mainly coming from Bris and it was sort of appropriate to her characterization. The use of 'breaking' really stands out though, even more now you've pointed out how little sense it makes.
 

Jinsoyun

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Sep 28, 2018
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Couldn't agree more. The obvious way that the training scenes should have gone with the sub-path is Sabia has to flatter, entertain or seduce the orcs that she's recruited so they're willing to actually commit to warrior training. It feels like such a natural place for the sub-storyline to go, but they do nothing with it. If they were still sticking to the original vision of a porn game with a meaningful RPG-style narrative then having Sabia get gangbanged in a cage would be the consequence of not managing the quest properly. For example by being too assertive when your choices have given Sabia a reputation as someone not to take seriously.
Absolutely.
One of the reasons why i think the first Ranak story line after the jailbreak works so well is because it's scenes build up gradually. This new training quest is the biggest one so far as Hreinn boasts, so there could have been space for it.
On the first day Sabia could have noticed that the orcs are not paying attention to her and Ranak could have suggested that she flashes her tits to get their attention. Things could escalate to Sabia teaching them in the nude, wearing chains, making bets and losing them, promising rewards to the best performers or a full orgy after the job well done.

Instead of this, Sabia doesn't only lose control the moment the quest starts, she never even has control since she lets Ranak organize everything without tagging along to see what she can expect. Wouldn't it be more fitting for a sub path for Sabia to watch as Ranak gathers up the horniest orcs around and choose to let him do it knowing the consequences?

Somehow it feels like everyone at Hreinn just made the wrong choices while making this update. This could have been the best patch since the Arena.
 

LuckyMember

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Feb 4, 2020
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I'm confused what to do, when I try to go to rest she says "I can't go sleep. I'll need to go talk to the apothecary"
Where is this apothecary?
 

phr1510

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I'm confused what to do, when I try to go to rest she says "I can't go sleep. I'll need to go talk to the apothecary"
Where is this apothecary?
i think in the city with brothel, castel, horse shed which u unlock,
in the inn or bar or maybe multiple house
 

JaszMan

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A Few things. One, The Game and story is awesome. Two. it would be cool to name the protagonist. Three. I Really Hope she can turn on the Humans and destroy them and get Revenge. Go Bad essentially, no more little miss good heroine. Time for Queen of Pain. Evil Laugh.
 

nyqz

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Mar 17, 2018
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could someone post the text file of the scenes, please
The text for each scene is mixed in with the code to make the game display things, so it's not very convenient to read. But if you really want to have a look at it then you just need to run unRen on the game, navigate to the game folder, and open up whichever rpy file you're interested in.
 
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