hakarlman
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I think Bris's power grab CAN make sense, but she lacks the character development for it. She needs to be introduced earlier in the game, and placed in a position of power that rivals Neve. She needs to feel just as powerful as Neve, Vehlis, or even the lead Orcs. But then it begs the question, why make a new character? Why not just use Neve or Vehlis? They already have Vehlis funding the tents, so that was the right direction.Bris trying to grab power makes sense, but Sabia's reaction to it on the sub route is baffling to me.
I strongly agree, you nailed it here.Sabia is currently trying to take down one of the strongest person on the continent who rules one of the strongest houses in the strongest empire and when a random catgirl convinces two orcs to side with her against Sabia, she just stands there and thinks: "whelp, there is nothing i can do about this now."
It sounds like you're a huge fan of Bris? Be honest, do you like Neve, Vehlis or Bris? If you think Bris running the tents makes a lot of sense, maybe I should give her another chance. But, I just don't see it. Kira would make a better madame than Bris.It wouldn't even need too much extra to make a lot more sense. Just add a quick line saying something like "i know what to do but i need to buy a bit of time", or "let's see what Bris tries to do with this opportunity" or considering that this is the sub route even something along the lines of "this must stop soon, but for now i'll have a bit of fun".
It sounds like you like Bris. I just don't see her as a dominate catgirl. The catgirl's are portrayed as highly submissive, and they get conquered.Just 3-4 more sentences and Sabia either stays an active protagonist or she is just giving herself a bit of time to enjoy her kink instead of sitting there helplessly as she does now.
The name catgirl just screams an aura of submissiveness, not power IMO.
A woman like Kira would make sense for running the tents. Kira, Neve, Vehlis, not Bris. I just don't see it. Even the Averton mayor would make a better Madame. Averton gets conquered and you turn the mayor girl into the tent madame.
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