Hey dunno if
StinkStoneGames is lookin for opinions but here's my humble one.
The art is realy great as i've already stated. I've been following the game since first released and checked every build since. It is striking that you're a comic drawer, not only in what you draw but also as how you are writing your story. Therefor, i don't know if you're interested in the actual making of a video game. As far as i am concerned, you could totaly use RPGM for visual novel, my point isn't there.
It is just that story wise, there doesn't seems to be any ultimate, commanding plot. One could resume the game as multiple comic strip stacked.
It feel kinda like there's no progression, like the story doesn't matter actually. Even in the diferent path of the various character, they just stand there without a goal or a common link, just ready to get fucked like in that weird japanese trend about NPC rape.
Well that was just the thought i had playing lately. Of course, i don't mean to be rude or demeaning, i wish only to share my experience.