This all comment is trying to justify your stupidity in writing by giving the "Star Wars" Kathleen's Kennedy treatment to the public, if someone says anything is wrong they: "Hate Women" are "Racist", "Sexist", have fragile ego, etc... But the actual truth is you are from the "Womanist" braindead people, who made a character which looked like a strong heavyweight "Champ" beating real "Male" champs, then suddenly a woman which is not even a female champ or anything, comes to the ring and beats him wearing gloves and true out his defense with a single "Bruce Lee" punch knocking him down cold...Try to put Tyson Fury with some average wanna be boxer woman without him attacking her for a round and see what surprise she will do to him, she'll rock the world with her statement For suure... In your stupidity you said is not a real fight, but if someone is trying to knock you out not just spar with you, only a weak person will not react and take his chances going easy, and any fight is a one of the ways to show Clear dominance over somebody.You could have teach the champ a lesson in so many other ways, but that's the only one a "Womanist" knows... And he been a good sport statement is even more funnier, was She, trying to knock him out in friendly match(bet)??
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Then with your iconic thinking you sell yourself by disclosing that you want to elevate the "woman", by beating the protagonist, who by some chance in the universe is a lesbian, think about that
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and many lesbians, do actually "Hate Men", so what a win win situation for you to emasculate strong man and elevate hateful lesbian to be in the man's shoes, who will show her condescension to others no doubt, who just look at her funny, because she's the only one with bad history, others needs to respect her, because she was committed in "Medical institution" watch out, she's a strong person and after her tantrums events which probably await in the future, then just maybe, maybe, if he's a puppy she'll have an intercourse with this Simp! And then you sell yourself even more by saying she'll be his bodyguard in the future, ooh what a surprise there that's some next level writing over here
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, she tough him the master's ways and now he will use them, Wow, Bruce Lee will be proud. She'll teach him how to interact with other women to make amends and be more like her the "Alpha Male". And also from before you even said that you women don't need some men to help you, you can do it yourself, like a "Strong Waman" can, what do I know, but apparently a "Strong Man", who just by some miracle is a heavyweight Champ needs a "Waman" to keep him safe, because they "Wamen" could be better bodyguards then other men... But wait she's having a softer side too you didn't know that... She's a woman too what do you know, she needs to be fed and sheltered, when becomes crazy needs to be taken into "Medical facility", there's nothing wrong with her you know, she admitted herself in there, because she's such a healthy person and needs the sleep there, and the people see as crazy only the ones who are admitted for mental issues, when they are out they are purfectly sane, how could you say otherwise you're mean... And when she becomes drunk like a motherfucker she'll need her simp to take her away in the carriage bf she fuck someone up with her attitude, such a softie you didn't know, and then needs to be tucked in bed, before she get's even angrier from the hungover, but beware if he don't do that, she'll show him one of the moves that "Bruce Lee" didn't even know, she's such a lovely monster from the inside, a real beauty among them can't you tell. Just stop it, the cringe writer is your second name, and was needed to be answer accordingly, but judging by now you dk what's good for you so keep going, you might even write something more "believable" no doubt! There's no point for me to continue, keep talking nonsense, and don't say you didn't ask for it, some of educated fools may congratulate you of being smart in their midst don't you worry.
Two things off the bat:
1) Just because you do not like something does not mean that it is stupid.
2) Calling someone else fat does not make you thin. Calling someone else ugly does not make you attractive. Calling someone else stupid does not make you smart.
Womanist? What does that even mean... I never even heard that term used in regular conversation so I looked up
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The first line of that wiki article is: "Womanism is a social theory based on the history and everyday experiences of black women."
Well... Violet is NOT a black woman so this term can not apply to her.
I don't think you understand the words you are using... Did you mean something else by that?
Our MC is not "Tyson Fury". Tyson Fury is a two time professional heavyweight champion that has won gold medals in boxing and is undefeated. Our MC on the other hand is still an amateur and not yet in the pros. Not until after next fight. So it is unfair to compare the MC to Tyson Fury this early in the story. Wait until he is in the pros, and has had some professional fights and is a title contender before making that sort of comparison. It is a little bit too soon for this comparison just yet. I'm not saying our MC is weak. He is rather strong, but he is not Tyson Fury level just yet.
Comparing Violet to an "Average" woman is unfair too. She is a trained and skilled fighter and in peak physical condition and knows some very powerful techniques such as the one inch punch. Violet would wreck an "Average Woman". It would not even be a fair catfight. Not counting women with super powers it would be difficult to find any female in any adult game that could straight up whoop Violet.
"Was she trying to knock him out in a friendly match?" You bet she was! Very much so she was giving it her all.
I wouldn't agree with the statement "Many lesbians hate men", but would agree with the statement "some lesbians hate men". I don't think it is a majority. I think it is a small fringe minority of lesbians that are the man hating kind. Violet is not a "Man Hater". She looks up to MC.
Violet is struggling with some mental health problems, but she is doing her best. That is a big part of her story.
MC is not going to be a simp, but he won't be a cuck either.
As for her working as a body guard, that is a good addition because she is trained in hand to hand combat, and she is trusted. Plus, it is good for her to be able to get away from her parents place, and have a place to stay with pay. She has already proven herself as a bodyguard on the train.
Went with a female body guard because I like the idea of adding more women more so than adding more men. We could have gone with some big buff man to be a body guard, but we chose a woman because we don't need more camera action on men when people are trying to masturbate. A woman is much better eye candy. We are adding as few men as possible actually. Trying to make the cast as heavily female as possible. Yet, sometimes we do need to add men. Such as our boxing opponents, or the Uncle or Rob, or Mike.
I'll start this by saying I really don't mind Violet, her introduction felt like a shift in tone though and by that I mean it was like the whole interaction with her came from an anime. What could've been a heartwarming reunion with one of your good friends was instead turned into a pissing contest that the MC started by being an arrogant prick which kind of sort of seems out of character but then again the whole Rose thing makes me question how "good" the MC actually is. It actually bothered me how long the whole "I'm so strong and I'm a fighter and women are weak" shit went on, not because he's right or wrong but because it just made the MC seem like an absolute douche canoe and I'm actually glad Violet was able to ring his bell but she should've caught him out with a haymaker. In no world would a one inch punch produce enough force to knock out probably most people and definitely not someone who has been training to be a boxer (probably a reason you've never seen one thrown in an actual televised professional fight). After receiving his lumps he immediately wants to learn the technique because ...why? All this is capped off by the shower scene where you catch a shampoo bottle in the dome and then she even says "It.. it's not like I like you!" after she catches you peeking. Of course I don't know why I'm actually surprised by any of that after being given pills that cause the MC to produce what must be a gallon of cum. All I'm saying is the game went from relatively grounded to fantasy land real fuckin quick.
After that the night out with her was fine aside from her constantly calling you a pervert I guess. Learning more about her over drinks especially about the MC's sister was fine, shame Amy is an abuser hopefully if she comes back around we'll have an option to just not have anything to do with her. Also not real sure about the choice to hire someone who just got back from a mental institution as a bodyguard and giving them access to several guns. Seems like a poor choice to me but ya know.
The biggest head scratcher for me though is why on Earth aren't Alice and MC sleeping in the same bed at this point? I've chosen to have her be pregnant, they are saying they love each other sometimes anyway but they aren't sharing a bed? Come on bro. The choice to knock her up should've started a real relationship with her at that point, the MC is still looking at her as a fuck buddy and that's lame as fuck.
About feeling more anime... That is on purpose. When I first joined the writing team and was talking with Moon he expressed to me that he wants to make things feel a little bit anime sometimes. His favorite Anime is "Hijame No Ippo". That is a boxing anime, and was a big part of his inspiration for starting game development.
I see where you are coming from with Violet ringing his bell, but to be fair he said these things in the most polite way possible. A lot of what he said is true how men do have a big advantage in athletics over women. He wasn't wrong, but he misjudged the situation and Violet, and she caught him slipping. We had considered some other punches she could have thrown, but we just went with a one inch punch. We wanted it to be something she could teach MC, and that would catch him by surprise.
As for the level of realism, I get how it can feel a bit "Anime" at times. We are not shooting for "Gritty Realism", more so like anime or a sports movie. We added the shooting a gallon of jizz for some fun in the sex scenes... Our MC is a 1 man bukkake now! Doing that is similar to how we give him a foot long dong. Of course, in reality it would be closer to 6 inches, but we are adding these fantasy elements. Plus his excessive load is a good reason for him to get so see Dr Candy again, and spend more time with her.
Part of the reason for adding a character like Violet, or having Rose dump him, and having Scarlet dislike of him is...
We are trying to make it more meaningful when we get the girl finally. We want story arcs there. Leah was a "gimme"... Alice was a "gimme".
We ran out of "Gimme Girls". It also adds a bit of mystery and surprise.
In what order will the girls be getting some dick?
Violet? Rose? Scarlet? Candy?
I'm not even 100% sure on the order yet, and that is something Moon and I need a good long talk about.
Because Yihman1 is a a feminist so they make the Mc out to be this dick when he was never one to begin with.
I don't identify as a feminist. I have been called a misogynist more times than a feminist in my life, and I don't identify as one of those either.