Overall, I preferred the Devs first game as the setting/characters were so much more interesting! I didn't like the weird occult/school setting at all. I also didn't like being put into a relationship that had no value in the prologue. You can literally fuck all the girls in this game (there's even one who doesn't have a name!) and there's no NTR or real consequences of what you do. Literally every girl wants to fuck you with no effort? And of course... all the girls are perfectly fine being the side piece. Inane.
There's even the question of 1-2 girls that served little to no value (teacher/eve).
The renders are pretty, most girls are attractive. This is on par. I'm happy the Dev used Renpy for his 2nd game. The sex scenes need work and the 2-3 renders moving back and forth do little for me anymore. Additionally, I'd add different sex noises as the same file being played at this point is quite annoying. Full animations are great but could use better compression (so much space!). I liked the final Anna scene where she kept on some clothes. I find it really odd seeing characters going buck naked when trying to have a quickie.
Lastly, the poor spelling. With 700+ Patreons. I believe he can have someone run through spellcheck and provide some corrections. Also the quality of writing at times is poor to bad. There's definitely room for improvement on his 3rd game.