VN Ren'Py Leaving DNA [Ep. 4.3a] [Impious Monk]

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znar25

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I would really have to be reaching to offer constructive criticism however I am already invested in the VN and love it.

The only worry I have is the character Malena. I hope she doesn't turn into a Klingon.

Meaning, when they write for Klingons, most times they are a stereotype: talk about battle; act aggressive; eat garbage food that would make a billy goat puke and so on.

With Malena, so far all we have is she always gives orders and always talks crude. That character has a hell of a lot to offer in depth of personality. Just a really great canvas and back-story to write from. I hope we see the real Malena and not the up-everyone's-ass-crack-at-dawn.

Again though. Great writing and a great story. A really entertaining VN. Imagine that.

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Vidal the king of Pervert

Vidal the king of Pervert

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znar25 said:
I would really have to be reaching to offer constructive criticism however I am already invested in the VN and love it.

The only worry I have is the character Malena. I hope she doesn't turn into a Klingon.

Meaning, when they write for Klingons, most times they are a stereotype: talk about battle; act aggressive; eat garbage food that would make a billy goat puke and so on.

With Malena, so far all we have is she always gives orders and always talks crude. That character has a hell of a lot to offer in depth of personality. Just a really great canvas and back-story to write from. I hope we see the real Malena and not the up-everyone's-ass-crack-at-dawn.

Again though. Great writing and a great story. A really entertaining VN. Imagine that.

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while I do love badass and crude Malena

I definitely think there's more to her than that I think when we get to know her

we will get to see a softer and more loving Malena

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Vidal the king of Pervert said:
while I do love badass and crude Malena

I definitely think there's more to her than that I think when we get to know her

we will get to see a softer and more loving Malena

I definitely think there's more to her than just a girl that likes to hook up with people she just met
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. So it’s not quite as random of a hookup as it might otherwise seem.
 
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Crimsonfiend76

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Interesting premise, liking the story so far... I've settled on Jamie as my main LI, as I have a weakness for childhood friends and redheads... so win-win! I did have a question though, is it possible to get into a friends with benefits arrangement with Aghavni and Malena while romancing Jamie? At least until Jamie's romantic path takes off?

Not asking for a harem or throuple, just some casual sex to blow off some steam until things get serious with Jamie.
 
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Elduriel

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Crimsonfiend76 said:
Interesting premise, liking the story so far... I've settled on Jamie as my main LI, as I have a weakness for childhood friends and redheads... so win-win! I did have a question though, is it possible to get into a friends with benefits arrangement with Aghavni and Malena while romancing Jamie? At least until Jamie's romantic path takes off?

Not asking for a harem or throuple, just some casual sex to blow off some steam until things get serious with Jamie.
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I think it's possible... I'm with you on the Jamie path, she is too cute... but obviously you can get into sexual escapades with others as per the latest update. But I'm really interested how it will work out in the end.
 
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Joshy92

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anonx5 said:
I like this game because:

1. The MC not at like a 304 like in so many other game. For example in many other games if a married woman wanted to cheat with the MC he would either not have an option to refuse or he would. Rare if ever will you see an MC flat our reject it without giving you the option, and I like that because it shows his character so far. Who knows how he may evolve, he could very well get the option to become a 304 and even try and steal his BFF's wife. Who knows?

2. While there is much to read, it is an enjoyable read, and this is a game first, sex simulator second. Since if you don't read you won't be able to figure out the answers to questions when asked.

3. If all you want is to masturbate fast then play anything by Perverteer or Phillygames. Masturbation can be exhausting anyway so it really does not make a game special if that is all it focuses on. I rather have a good story and great characters than constant sex, since sex comes cheap in games here anyway.

4. I also like that he is not catering to pedophiles or any guys who may end up meeting Chris Hansen. I dislike it when female characters are intentionally made to look underage and then given big boobs as if that makes it all OK.
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I agree with most of what you are saying but calling people who like loli's or girls with small boobs a pedo seems a bit silly to me
You wouldn't call someone who plays gta v a murderer would you

Also I hope the mc doesn't try and sleeps with some dudes girl
That would make him an arsehole to me.
 
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I never said all who watch it are... but I would be naive to think none actually are, since if one no longer wants to be a pedo or end up seeing Chris Hanson face to face, playing games with underage looking girls as main love interests is not going to help diminsh the pedo desire but rather heighten it.
 
TakashiLeaked

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Boehser Onkel said:
pretty good game


btw :
i chose to have no "interrest" in jamie at the mentioned visit
later at the office the mc told jamie nothing about a museum visit
but
at post robert interview he says to aghavni he invited jamie to the museum
its a "writing slip" right ?
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no check for the interrest var here

scene 2-5-x206a with dissolve
a "But first we need to go revisit Mr. Hawkins and have him explain himself."
a "Let's go pick him up and bring him down to the local Sheriff's station."
a "We'll go see the ex-wife tomorrow."
scene 2-5-x207 with dissolve
mc "I can't tomorrow."
mc "I promised Jamie we'd go to the museum."
scene 2-5-x214 with dissolve
a "Oh."
if aghavni_luis == True:
scene 2-5-x215 with dissolve
mc "Sunday?"
scene 2-5-x216 with dissolve
a "Sure."
scene 2-5-x217 with dissolve
$ renpy.pause()
elif True:
scene 2-5-x208 with dissolve
mc "Sunday?"
scene 2-5-x206b with dissolve
a "Sure."
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Sooo, did the dev fix this?
 
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