I know Vega was hurt because you broke up with her and dude is emotionally vaccant......but that entire interaction sounds like she took all of that they way she did and didn't even try to think she might be wrong. Its not like the guy forgets the things he does. He's there for it. Even his ex understood he wasnt all there emotionally.....actually it seems like all his exes understand that except for Vega. Yet somehow this dude just thinks she was right.
Also, and this is not a complaint because I love this story, just fyi, people cannot just snap other people's necks.....especially not a woman against a man who is also in the military. Everyone is generally trained in combatives. Hell maybe not even an unfit guy. Choke out to the point of strangulation maybe sure, but she can have the most righteous 6 pack and shes not magically just breaking necks. Most men can't just break a person's neck and shes not super strong, shes super toned. The mass required to be that strong is more like the size of the MC. Also shes not fighting 5 dudes on 1 and winning. Kill me because I like Malena's character, but she also comes off like shes completely full of shit.
Beyond those two issues.....more like brain itches, but thats more things that just bother me personally, I love this story. Keep up the good work because this is really good.
