Losersriot

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Is NOT female protagonist - is MULTIPLE protagonist, because male view option exist
 

harvercode

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this might be a dumb question but why is the render not playing for me

the text is there but no scenes then again im not gonna play this since the pov is the cuck
 
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Is this a Lara Croft and Indiana Jones collaboration? :) Most people will not spend their time and/or money here if it's a struggle to read the words, as written, not to mention trying to follow the sentence structure. Please find a good proofreader/English language specialist for the next update. No offense but, unless you do, this will remain an unpolished black-on-blonde third-rate production. - One clown's opinion!
 

SpyderArachnid

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Yeah this needs a male protagonist tag and the NTR tag. You don't play as a female protagonist, you play as her husband (make choices as the husband). And just cause you can see her perspective, doesn't mean it isn't NTR. She still has sex with others behind her husband's (the MC) back regardless (it is unavoidable). You don't make any choices as the female, only the male. So it's a male protagonist NTR game.

And the engrish is really strong in this one. Needs a better translation badly. Feels machine translated. And those "Now Loading" screens need to go. No reason for them except to just draw out play time by forcing you to wait. Good thing you can just CTRL skip over them, but still. They need to be gone.

This just needs a lot of work and proper tagging. Still, good luck with your game regardless, just not for me is all. Thanks. :)
 

lordrango

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No matter the pov i assume you are playing as the beta cuck no matter what.
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Not entirely game related, but I feel people are misusing the word beta in these cases.

Beta is right below alpha. In more complex societies in animal kingdom, alphas usually need consent of betas to actually remain alphas, and betas are quite often former alphas themselves (if they're older not) or future alphas (if they're younger). It is a very powerful and influential position within a group, and most often it includes access to females.

The proper word would probably be "omega". Omegas are last in the pecking order, get bullied most often and have no access to females.
 

bamachine

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Well, so far putting crystal skull in the title seems appropriate. Not been so let down since that movie came out.

This idea has potential but it needs a whole different script writer.
 
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menatv

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Not bad. Not great either. I do like you can pick which perspective to see some of the scenes from. But yeah, the writing could use some work here. Game has potential. But it's still a ways from realizing it though.
 
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