VN Ren'Py Abandoned Lewd Story [v0.149a] [HornyMonster]

[Chrathrard]

Some... awkward language. Good choices in the early content, visibly undone towards the end. Some choices are obviously broken/incorrect (like walking into the bathroom when you wanted to go to the kitchen), but the scenes and renders are superb.

 

[ironbeazt]

hory shit this looks good

 

[Deleted member 1304718]

Really game finish with sis got boyfriend
Lol I don't understand I play all the way I got same scene lol...

 

[ADIDAS]

nice picture from the front with a nice angle.

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more seriously, that's exactly how alots of peoples see games here.

check OP > see nice renders > conclusion : "WOW game is awesome !"

i dont mind about the description, as i get tired of that. just another similar plot like thousands others incest games.

Oh I completely agree with you...but about that chicken butt?

 

[NamelessKnight]

The big problem in this game and it confuses us, it's the coding of this game. The Dev already created only one end, it's the Neutral Ending where the MC is not interested at his sister and she gets a boyfriend, then the developer didn't put any condition for this ending, so any choice leads you to Neutral Ending. Even, if there's one end only, you must to put some condition to avoid it and create a "Next version" screen to the other endings. So, that way, the player wouldn't be so confused and misinterpreting the story.

 

[Johnny6]

Oh yeah just the way of the game I like, pick all the correct choices to romance your LI and then she goes with another guy.(not) WTF
This game/ending requires clarification where it goes or ntr tag. Really not happy to see that ending.

 

[I_want_sleep]

The big problem in this game and it confuses us, it's the coding of this game. The Dev already created only one end, it's the Neutral Ending where the MC is not interested at his sister and she gets a boyfriend, then the developer didn't put any condition for this ending, so any choice leads you to Neutral Ending. Even, if there's one end only, you must to put some condition to avoid it and create a "Next version" screen to the other endings. So, that way, the player wouldn't be so confused and misinterpreting the story.

I think the developer just didn't count on the fact that the users download game from f95 and not read the description to the updates.

I read a couple of descriptions from the

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. Even the last one has a lot of information about it.

But I think you're right, people are too lazy, so it's better to add that information to the game.

 

[Everilld]

Hi I have a problem events with the teacher doesnt come out it says i need 1 mv piont and at least 8 agressive to get this event, I have 1 mv point and 10 agressive points and nothing happes anyone know why?
PS i hope the secound part of the game is alpha or sth bc there and much less content than in fisrt part

 

[Ennoch]

Add the abysmal engrish on top of that.

Its not abysmal, i consider it a mini-game by itself

 

[laflare82]

Hey dev your game seems interesting but extremely difficult for an adult title its suppose to be fun every choice matters and change your points from neutral to perv to aggressive to quickly a person could replay this game over 10xs and not get all scenes the simplest answer can change if you can interact with a situation its to much yes its a short game but the variations to scenarios turns it into a long tedious game

 

[fuckyouassholes]

hey dev ? are you on f95 ?

 

[derbertl]

had a good anal scene after that the game fell flat choices then don't seem to do anything but it is still in development . still gonna check some other options i didnt manage to get the good maria stuff and mom if there is some

 

[Gargarlley]

If the developer happens to be here, please add a way to choose the text color. I am colorblind and I can't see many messages.

Thank you for anything else although, hope you find the means tod o this

 

[Avaron1974]

Its not abysmal, i consider it a mini-game by itself

Play the "what the hell did they just say" game.

Most of it is perfectly understandable but there are a lot of lines that make no sense whatsoever.

 

[delain]

Game is like 25% done, maybe even less.
After shower scene it's just crazy rushed to the end.

 

[macadam]

Oh I completely agree with you...but about that chicken butt?

that's a deal with a deer.. not me :/

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[botc76]

The Engrish is strong in this one. Yes, you can understand it, but a lot of it is cringeworthy.
I tried playing with the walkthrough, but a lot of stuff just doesn't trigger at all, despite having the right numbers and answering as the walkthrough suggests.

This needs a lot of work, but it might be worth waiting for that, if you are into big tits and "roommates."

 

[The Bunny]

Sister ? More like Mom...

 

[Zahkrizos]

played through the end. will there be a hardcore fetish coming (BDSM/NTR/etc) or not?
I'm fine either way as long as it remain as an option and not tied up to the main game. Love the game
Found some interesting stuff in the package. Totally didn't see that ending coming though

 

[Healthalete]

According to the walkthrough, something is supposed to happen on "tuesday" morning. It is the morning after your sister is drunk leaning on the coffee table. Anyway, all i am getting is an couple of under construction looking icons. Is that supposed to be there, or is my version broken?