Unity Abandoned Life Begins [v0.5] [KennTica]

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mistwolf_2k

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This has the potential to be a decent game. Several key things are holding it back though.

First is the fact that there is little in game guidance. You have the objectives listed in the phone, but no hints or clues at how to achieve them. If you are going to have a sandbox with multiple time slots and numerous locations you can't expect folks to wander aimlessly.
That actually leads directly into the second thing. Your schedules suck ass. No simple way around that. Having events end at the end of the weekend on midnight and then don't kick back off until the next weekend is just horrid. Maybe a tooltip on buildings indicating the open hours and a visible schedule we can find for the people. Some have them have very narrow windows of availability.
Grind is grind, but you seem to want to lay it on thick for no purpose. You will lose prospective players right off the top by being a sandbox. If you keep it this tedious you are going to further impact your player base.
 

KennTica

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This has the potential to be a decent game. Several key things are holding it back though.

First is the fact that there is little in game guidance. You have the objectives listed in the phone, but no hints or clues at how to achieve them. If you are going to have a sandbox with multiple time slots and numerous locations you can't expect folks to wander aimlessly.
That actually leads directly into the second thing. Your schedules suck ass. No simple way around that. Having events end at the end of the weekend on midnight and then don't kick back off until the next weekend is just horrid. Maybe a tooltip on buildings indicating the open hours and a visible schedule we can find for the people. Some have them have very narrow windows of availability.
Grind is grind, but you seem to want to lay it on thick for no purpose. You will lose prospective players right off the top by being a sandbox. If you keep it this tedious you are going to further impact your player base.
Very useful feedback! Hint system will be included in the next update. Visible schedule is a great idea! Player feedbacks are really important, this will help the game get better.

Thanks for your time to give a feedback to the game (y)

1. How do I tell the secretary that she's not going home?
2. How to cut the wire?
1. Go to the CoaJal Office(building with black door), and talk to the secretary in the front desk.
2. You'll need wire cutter, ladder and int > 10
Wire cutter - can get in the garage(unlock the garage first, give porn magazine that you can find in your room to Tyron)
Ladder - can get in the club(unlock the club first, it's in the first floor(enter the dark room)
 
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Anon4321

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Wire cutter - can get in the garage(unlock the garage first, give porn magazine that you can find in your room to Tyron)
I gave the magazine to Tyron in the gym, after which he came to the house and told me to meet him at garage, saying he'll be there everyday until noon, but, he never appears, did I miss something, like am I looking in the wrong location or do I need to start a new game.

Also is the part about the ledger and duplicate for the aunt new, or from a previous update. because I don't recall seeing them.

on another not, could you add another way to forward time on the HUD/GUI so that we don't need to return to the house every time we need to do it. Thanks
 
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KenneX

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1. Go to the CoaJal Office(building with black door), and talk to the secretary in the front desk.
2. You'll need wire cutter, ladder and int > 10
Wire cutter - can get in the garage(unlock the garage first, give porn magazine that you can find in your room to Tyron)
Ladder - can get in the club(unlock the club first, it's in the first floor(enter the dark room)
1. Coral: Hey, I know it sounds rude but you're not allowed here during office hours. (+ right arrow won't let me go there)
2. I knew it, it had to be a new location but...

I gave the magazine to Tyron in the gym, after which he came to the house and told me to meet him at garage, saying he'll be there everyday until noon, but, he never appears, did I miss something, like am I looking in the wrong location or do I need to start a new game.
Same problem.
 
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KennTica

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I gave the magazine to Tyron in the gym, after which he came to the house and told me to meet him at garage, saying he'll be there everyday until noon, but, he never appears, did I miss something, like am I looking in the wrong location or do I need to start a new game.

Also is the part about the ledger and duplicate for the aunt new, or from a previous update. because I don't recall seeing them.

on another not, could you add another way to forward time on the HUD/GUI so that we don't need to return to the house every time we need to do it. Thanks
Ugh, Tyron not showing is a bug. I already uploaded the fixed version, sorry for the inconvenience.

Duplicate is from previous update, Ledger is a new progress that will be needed by Carol Progress.

There's a skip time/day and use map anywhere in cheated/modded version. (It's the only thing I can offer for my patron so I can't upload it here :ROFLMAO: . But i'll try to improve it in the next update.)


1. Coral: Hey, I know it sounds rude but you're not allowed here during office hours. (+ right arrow won't let me go there)
2. I knew it, it had to be a new location but...


Same problem.
Did Aline already ask you to tell the secretary that she will not go home? May I know the progress title your stuck at?

Btw fix version is already uploaded, sorry for the inconvenience!
 

aidoru95

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Is there something missing in the hint for the computer password in Carol's storyline? All that shows up is "Copper + Iron +"
 
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KenneX

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Ugh, Tyron not showing is a bug. I already uploaded the fixed version, sorry for the inconvenience.
Thanks! He's there now and I didn't even have to start a new game.
Did Aline already ask you to tell the secretary that she will not go home? May I know the progress title your stuck at?
Yes, she did. I did everything besides 3 questlines and I'm stuck at: "I'm not going home!", "This is full body photo, right?" and "Where's the key?" (side quest). I have 35 items and max stats (actually, I have 72/50 luck, LOL). Thanks for one of the most cryptic sandbox on this site, it took me 6-7h without walkthrough, damn...
Is there something missing in the hint for the computer password in Carol's storyline? All that shows up is "Copper + Iron +"
Yeah, I was going to ask... why Copper + Iron + GOLD, and not i.e. SILVER? :)
 
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KennTica

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Is there something missing in the hint for the computer password in Carol's storyline? All that shows up is "Copper + Iron +"
It's gold, don't know why it doesn't show up to you.

Thanks! He's there now and I didn't even have to start a new game.

Yes, she did. I did everything besides 3 questlines and I'm stuck at: "I'm not going home!", "This is full body photo, right?" and "Where's the key?" (side quest). I have 35 items and max stats (actually, I have 72/50 luck, LOL). Thanks for one of the most cryptic sandbox on this site, it took me 6-7h without walkthrough, damn...

Yeah, I was going to ask... why Copper + Iron + GOLD, and not i.e. SILVER? :)
After looking into it, it turns out to be a bug. I'm uploading v0.3b that will fix it, but I don't know if your still willing to play it :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO: . That's a lot of time wasted, I'll understand if you've cursed the game :ROFLMAO:

Someone skips his science class.. :ROFLMAO:
 
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Ugh, Tyron not showing is a bug. I already uploaded the fixed version, sorry for the inconvenience.

Duplicate is from previous update, Ledger is a new progress that will be needed by Carol Progress.

There's a skip time/day and use map anywhere in cheated/modded version. (It's the only thing I can offer for my patron so I can't upload it here :ROFLMAO: . But i'll try to improve it in the next update.)



Did Aline already ask you to tell the secretary that she will not go home? May I know the progress title your stuck at?

Btw fix version is already uploaded, sorry for the inconvenience!
How do I progress Alines story? My next step is "upper head only"

Also the passcode system to type is bugged.. I can only input numbers otherwise nothing will type out for Carols computer.
 
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Ramagar

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I like the game but it is grind-fest. I do have a few suggestions that might help

Add the name to the pic in the phone of people. It would make it easier to see who is who

Add hints to the tasks to be completed. you list them in the phone, but give no clue what needs to be done to accomplish them

Add hints to where to find items that you need to complete tasks

If there is a prerequisite of a task, list it

These are just a few that would I think improve the game
 
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FcapperZ

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How do I progress Alines story? My next step is "upper head only"

Also the passcode system to type is bugged.. I can only input numbers otherwise nothing will type out for Carols computer.
passcode should be a number, i dont wanna be a spoiler but theres a hint that says "Atomic Number" type it
 
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jackkane

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Very useful feedback! Hint system will be included in the next update. Visible schedule is a great idea! Player feedbacks are really important, this will help the game get better.

Thanks for your time to give a feedback to the game (y)



1. Go to the CoaJal Office(building with black door), and talk to the secretary in the front desk.
2. You'll need wire cutter, ladder and int > 10
Wire cutter - can get in the garage(unlock the garage first, give porn magazine that you can find in your room to Tyron)
Ladder - can get in the club(unlock the club first, it's in the first floor(enter the dark room)
how to unlock the garage?
 
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KennTica

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How do I progress Alines story? My next step is "upper head only"

Also the passcode system to type is bugged.. I can only input numbers otherwise nothing will type out for Carols computer.
"Upper head only" - will be required by Mariana's progress(University President)
Passcode is a 6 digit number

did that...I meant how to open the garage doors.
Talk to the masked guy first(at the alley), he will tell you how to open it. You'll need:
Steel wire - at the gym
Piece of wood - at the park(that has only a wall)
 
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KennTica

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I like the game but it is grind-fest. I do have a few suggestions that might help

Add the name to the pic in the phone of people. It would make it easier to see who is who

Add hints to the tasks to be completed. you list them in the phone, but give no clue what needs to be done to accomplish them

Add hints to where to find items that you need to complete tasks

If there is a prerequisite of a task, list it

These are just a few that would I think improve the game
Glad you liked it, your suggestions are great, I'll keep it in my mind for the next update(hint system will be surely included).

Thank you for having the time to give a feedback!
 

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I can't get the auntie's key to appear I've re-downloaded the new Zip-file & it did cure the Tyron not appearing glitch! But i've tried multiple attempts Knock door/try lock! ETC: Is there a specific time & day when to get the key to show? My stats are all above 30+ Any help will be greatly appreciated :)
 

KennTica

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Walkthrough v0.2

Correction
Kiara's Panty - Can get at Saturday afternoon (will be fix in the next update it should be sat or sun).
Give Wine to Kiara - Can give it to her at tues, thurs, friday night (forgot to edit).
 
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KennTica

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I can't get the auntie's key to appear I've re-downloaded the new Zip-file & it did cure the Tyron not appearing glitch! But i've tried multiple attempts Knock door/try lock! ETC: Is there a specific time & day when to get the key to show? My stats are all above 30+ Any help will be greatly appreciated :)
After the attempt of entering her room at midnight, the key will appear in the front door. Did the "What do I need to open a door?" got completed?

BTW I just uploaded a new walkthrough, hope it helps.
 
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