VN Ren'Py Abandoned Life is Hard [v0.3.6.2] [MarshmelloGames]

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Belnick

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Sep 3, 2018
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Just go downstairs (by clicks on the stairs), and sorry for that bug :D
i could not find the downstairs for sometime, thought it was balcony that was "outside", but finally say the clickable area and could continue :eek:
 

Hentai_Lover00

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Apr 28, 2018
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iiZombie so as for my opinion and advice bring back the old Characters and atmosphere. cause the old characters looked like they need money and going through bad days. atmosphere was better, looked normal and not too bright. plus the house was better and right now it looks like a mansion for super rich people. also make it normal choice base game and not that click to move to a location type game.
but 1st bring the old charaters back and make them look better with better render.

also take a litle slower path, dont make it a porn right from the start. cause as per your story its a normal woman who desperately needs money so it will take time to change her. i dont think any woman like that will let other see her in underwear or in bathroom
 

iiZombie

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Jan 11, 2019
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iiZombie so as for my opinion and advice bring back the old Characters and atmosphere. cause the old characters looked like they need money and going through bad days. atmosphere was better, looked normal and not too bright. plus the house was better and right now it looks like a mansion for super rich people. also make it normal choice base game and not that click to move to a location type game.
but 1st bring the old charaters back and make them look better with better render.

also take a litle slower path, dont make it a porn right from the start. cause as per your story its a normal woman who desperately needs money so it will take time to change her. i dont think any woman like that will let other see her in underwear or in bathroom
First of all thank you for your opinion but I want to let you know that they are rich but the money is about to end and the will decide to sell the house if that happens as her husband was working in a good work (you will know about it later in the story) I think free roam game is good but it needs some fixes that I did but still fixing the grammar and I will publish the release again with fixes. The game will be sloooooow but you can make it just slow with some choices for who hate sloooooow games
 

instancabile

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Dec 10, 2017
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iiZombie so as for my opinion and advice bring back the old Characters and atmosphere. cause the old characters looked like they need money and going through bad days. atmosphere was better, looked normal and not too bright. plus the house was better and right now it looks like a mansion for super rich people. also make it normal choice base game and not that click to move to a location type game.
but 1st bring the old charaters back and make them look better with better render.

also take a litle slower path, dont make it a porn right from the start. cause as per your story its a normal woman who desperately needs money so it will take time to change her. i dont think any woman like that will let other see her in underwear or in bathroom
He can't those are mine... everything was made by me and was unique. But nobody forbid him to make similar stuff
 

Lukereds

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Sep 28, 2019
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iiZombie, if you need a story I have it ready.
Textures are really nice and you have potential.
The story is written but I haven't time to develop it (I'm too busy currently).
If you are interested please let me know.
Obviously it will be really long with a lot of filthy for achieving various ends.
 

Hentai_Lover00

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Apr 28, 2018
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First of all thank you for your opinion but I want to let you know that they are rich but the money is about to end and the will decide to sell the house if that happens as her husband was working in a good work (you will know about it later in the story) I think free roam game is good but it needs some fixes that I did but still fixing the grammar and I will publish the release again with fixes. The game will be sloooooow but you can make it just slow with some choices for who hate sloooooow games
ok but the thing is the house look way too much expensive. and their current looks dont look like they are going through bad time
 
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victor659

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Jan 9, 2019
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Ok it is not AWAM but it has potential and we definitely need more games with mom MC. I saw the old models at a previous post and I have to say that the new ones are better except the boy. The renders of mom are very good and she is looking at a age of a mom and not about at the same age as her children as we see at other games. Of course it is too early to rate this game because it has little content so far and I would say that it is more likely a 0.1 version that 0.3.

Now I would like to make a comment about the story. I don't know exactly what the main concept will be but I assume that it has to be about mom's corruption. I suppose for start mom has 0 corruption and see Nick only as her son. So at the bath thinking like that just from the start of the game does not fit very well ("Maybe there is no wrong to let him watch for little as he don't have friends or girlfriend"). Also Nick seems like a pervert boy so it is a little unexpected that it is just the first time she catches him peeking. Also later mom thinking "As handsome a young man as Nick is I just can't let him get away with that again without him having some sort of punishment.". What matters if her son is handsome or not if he peeking at her. Something like that would make more sense at this point "I don't know if it was accidentally or not but if he does it again I must speak with him. I know that he has grown and he hasn't any girlfriend but he can't peek on his mother like that..."

Probably it is mentioned before:
- When you enter the balcony the game ends without warning.
- At the ground floor it is "big bathroom" and not "big bedroom"
 
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