VN Ren'Py Abandoned Life Of Kiki [v0.03 Preview] [Echidna]

[mazariah]

Couple thoughts on this update: Not much in the way of sex yet but it's still early development so I'll give it a pass. If we got 2-3 more updates without Kiki getting any action then I'll start to worry. This game is clearly inspired by GGGB and that's fine but I wish the dev would add the visible good and bad points like GGGB. It would be nice to know what our affects decisions have on our stats.

Last thing that really bugged me, why are all the backgrounds super blurry and spinning like they're the Confused Mr Krabs meme? When I noticed it it was super distracting and hurt my eyes a little bit after a while.

 

[Migral]

Couple thoughts on this update: Not much in the way of sex yet but it's still early development so I'll give it a pass. If we got 2-3 more updates without Kiki getting any action then I'll start to worry. This game is clearly inspired by GGGB and that's fine but I wish the dev would add the visible good and bad points like GGGB. It would be nice to know what our affects decisions have on our stats.

Last thing that really bugged me, why are all the backgrounds super blurry and spinning like they're the Confused Mr Krabs meme? When I noticed it it was super distracting and hurt my eyes a little bit after a while.

Exactly this fact I find personally so exciting, if you consider that Kiki is still a virgin and she is only the second day in the new city, then it is quite clear for me that we have not yet seen sex and hopefully will not see so soon. Because my biggest worry is that the game will develop like in the meantime gggb did, where you just bang everybody.

I can do without the good/bad points, the dev had also on his patreon site that communicates that there won't be any,
i think it's very challenging and ok, but it would be much better if there were some stat menu in the game something like a wife and mother but maybe the dev just doesn't know how to do thatx'Dx'Dx'D

but with the backgrounds i completely agree with you...no idea maybe dev did so for copyright reasons or maybe that the focus is on the drawings who knows but it's certainly not ideal...

 

[afc2112]

Was kind of hoping she asked out the salesman...

 

[waffel]

I tried GGGB once, but I dropped it after an hour or so, the writing and setting was so North American (with much too little French) like, that it was really really off putting, I much prefer the writing and atmosphere in this game, the faces and phrases remind me of Spain or Greece. That's much more pleasant, and a lot more relate-able culture

Also I think the person who has made this game is Larry and not Kiki in the story, if it's inspired by a real story

 

[gmn]

I tried GGGB once, but I dropped it after an hour or so, the writing and setting was so North American (with much too little French) like, that it was really really off putting, I much prefer the writing and atmosphere in this game, the faces and phrases remind me of Spain or Greece. That's much more pleasant, and a lot more relate-able culture

Also I think the person who has made this game is Larry and not Kiki in the story, if it's inspired by a real story

I don't know what are your criterias to say that but it's quite funny considering EvaKiss is... Spanish and considering Larry wears... a French jersey

 

[waffel]

@gmn Just a feeling while reading the VN, I have no clue if the auther is male or female, and from a short search to find out I came out empty handed on that regard. The VN just feels like Echidna is 'Larry' have heard the stories and experienced the rest and made a VN of it

I really like the Spanish VN's on this site, Pact with a witch is so good. I don't know how they have a power to make the girls slutty, cute and loveable at the same time. I rarely have that feeling with American or Russian VN's.

 

[afc2112]

I feel like the Life of Kiki dev is relying too much on popular culture.

 

[gmn]

@gmn Just a feeling while reading the VN, I have no clue if the auther is male or female, and from a short search to find out I came out empty handed on that regard. The VN just feels like Echidna is 'Larry' have heard the stories and experienced the rest and made a VN of it

I really like the Spanish VN's on this site, Pact with a witch is so good. I don't know how they have a power to make the girls slutty, cute and loveable at the same time. I rarely have that feeling with American or Russian VN's.

@waffel Yeah you might be right, it doesn't have enough content for me to make my own mind on whether the author is a female (btw I think Evakiss is a male or maybe a couple so I don't know if I'm really reliable on this subject haha). But concerning what you say and what I said in my previous post, I don't get it when you say you like Spanish VN and you don't like GGGB!

 

[Migral]

@gmn & @waffel
Until now I am also of the opinion that the dev is a man or maybe even Larry, but I noticed something, maybe the dev has betrayed himself in all the delay stress, read the text of this post:

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Could be and @gmn I also think evakiss is a guy...

 

[waffel]

@gmn WHat I mean is that GGGB doesn't feel Spanish at all, it feels very very USA American. It's they way they speak, the way they interact. It's more like watching either a Hollywood movie or a USA American piece of recorded porn. It doesn't have a European feel to it, the persons and the setting doesn't feel European And that is all, there is really not more to it than that, and the American feel is so extreme that it is off-putting for me.

 

[afc2112]

Can we get that pink dress on page 12?

 

[Migral]

Can we get that pink dress on page 12?

Yes you can...in the shop you have to give the embarrassing answer (pink), but this is a secretanswer you have to unlock first, I think it worked for me by making all nice decisions, but unfortunately I don't remember everything...

 

[A.Rahman]

Yes you can...in the shop you have to give the embarrassing answer (pink), but this is a secretanswer you have to unlock first, I think it worked for me by making all nice decisions, but unfortunately I don't remember everything...

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I get All of them expected that Anyone pls?

 

[Lilith Studio]

hopefully in this update you see a little more Kiki a little more daring, but little things jejeje.

 

[LunaticF]

Hmmm still early but looks like a very promising game. Cant wait for the next update

 

[HalSiv67]

How can I download the v0.0.2 for android??

 

[someoldguy]

I'm far more impressed with the artwork, which hits the spot in most images, than the English story line. That really needs a lot of work to rephrase things in a more natural way. At least that's relatively easy to improve.

Hoping for more lesbian content in future. So far it's been dicks all the way apart from the sisters comparing boobs.

 

[gusxxx]

Last thing that really bugged me, why are all the backgrounds super blurry and spinning like they're the Confused Mr Krabs meme? When I noticed it it was super distracting and hurt my eyes a little bit after a while.

This is also my main criticism of the game, it is really annoying and distracting the background. The scene when they are in the car is specially egregious. That seems easy to change if the dev wanted to, doesn't need to re-render all the scenes.

Besides that I actually enjoyed the game, like others said yes it really moves really fast for a girl who is naive, still a virgin and only 2 days in the "big city". But attention span for people in the forum to wait for sex scenes seems rather limited also.

 

[LP83]

I like how the game is going.
And I agree that the backgrounds need to be changed to the original ones with no distorted effects!

 

[Jansen]

version 3 on svscomic.com

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