VN Ren'Py Life With Chloe [Alpha v0.8] [AlterXArt]

[jack_hollow_boy]

looks cool, thanks

 

[AlterxArt]

Is it intended to be this easy in the real game? Theres no slow corruption here, everyone throws themselves at you and stats like love increase for the stupidest reasons, there doesnt seem to have been an effort to imagine how the women would really be thinking or acting

This versión is just to showcase the general idea.
Is it going to be easy? Yes. But corruption should be much slower in the final game.

When we get much more content into the game, I'll be able to afford blocking the player out of routes/scenes or enabling others based on the gameplay, the starting blessings are a good example of this, right now they don't do anything but are a high priority for the next update.

 

[xkevlarex]

Looks great, but too little content for version 0.8.

 

[Ali ibn Hassan]

Thnks fr shrng

 

[AlterxArt]

Looks great, but too little content for version 0.8.

Its Alfa 0.8, then comes the full Demo, after that Beta releases, after that the full game.

(We're a loooong way before the real 1.0)

My bad, I get that a good amount of people got confused because of the version naming convention I picked.

 

[GreenOwl]

what a nice surprise
AlterxArt happy to see that you were able to release the game after all. congrats <3

 

[Zolse]

Honestly shows a lot of promise. I noticed I didn't get the ice cream or boob events with Kim my first time around, the game ended before they showed up.
I'm a bit skeptical of the job interview Chloe does in the near beginning and the MCs response to that. I can't in good confidence give this game a good review with what seemed like sharing/cuck bait. Let's hope it doesn't come to that.

 

[Insoniria]

Dude, I hope you include anal sex, and if you do, don't wait until the end and add just one scene. Good luck!

 

[AlterxArt]

Honestly shows a lot of promise. I noticed I didn't get the ice cream or boob events with Kim my first time around, the game ended before they showed up.
I'm a bit skeptical of the job interview Chloe does in the near beginning and the MCs response to that. I can't in good confidence give this game a good review with what seemed like sharing/cuck bait. Let's hope it doesn't come to that.

NTR/Sharing/Anything of the sort is a nono

(Specially for Chloe)

The resolution of that event will leave that very clear.

The only cheating that will occur is MC corrupting other people's love interests, currently unavoidable but might be optional in the future.

 

[Zolse]

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NTR/Sharing/Anything of the sort is a nono

(Specially for Chloe)

The resolution of that event will leave that very clear.

The only cheating that will occur is MC corrupting other people's love interests, currently unavoidable but might be optional in the future.

I appreciate your clear response.

While I don't have much business giving advice, I do feel compelled to say that you should perhaps add a little something to that scene sooner rather than later. Simply because the MC seems perfectly open to what the interviewer suggests and there is no player agency in the MCs reply.
Or just add something in the OPs dev notes.

Looking forward to more Chloe and Kim in the future

 

[AlterxArt]

I appreciate your clear response.

While I don't have much business giving advice, I do feel compelled to say that you should perhaps add a little something to that scene sooner rather than later. Simply because the MC seems perfectly open to what the interviewer suggests and there is no player agency in the MCs reply.
Or just add something in the OPs dev notes.

Looking forward to more Chloe and Kim in the future

Thanks for your input, I will be adding a detailed FAQ on the dev notes later for sure.

As for the MC's reaction, I'll put a pin on tweaking those dialogues, but it's important to me that the MC doesn't come out as a prohibitive person because

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Thanks again for your input, I'll give it some tought.

 

[justgetoutlabaaa]

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[ThaneShayk]

Beautiful LI makes this a promising start.... the writing needs to be fleshed out and the characters need more of an introduction so we can feel engaged with them. but over all I have high hopes you'll pull it all together and create a great VN.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[52637]

I've done my best to maintain a minimun standart for the writting but please report any nonsense you come across.

The many typos in this sentence talking about minimising spelling mistakes is quintessential irony, lol!

 

[AlterxArt]

The many typos in this sentence talking about minimising spelling mistakes is quintessential irony, lol!

I'm doing my best

 

[LidTheStanker2]

Big fan of these models. Good luck with the game

 

[Ecchi00769]

I'd pass on the fat chicks but the girl with the glasses is interesting.

 

[Sissycuck111]

Honestly shows a lot of promise. I noticed I didn't get the ice cream or boob events with Kim my first time around, the game ended before they showed up.
I'm a bit skeptical of the job interview Chloe does in the near beginning and the MCs response to that. I can't in good confidence give this game a good review with what seemed like sharing/cuck bait. Let's hope it doesn't come to that.

Let's hope that it does. You see, other people have opinions too.

 

[2edgy4u]

Very nice start, hoping to see more later on