- Thread starter AlterxArt
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The description is only one sentence long and doesn't really tell me anything about what kind of "management" it is, and the images only show the pictures used *in* the game rather than having any pictures *of* the game. You really need to give people a better idea of what it's like to actually play the game before expecting them to just download and play it to find out what it even is. At the very least, you need some proper in-game screenshots for the sample images.
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Description was updated to be more descriptive. Thanks for your input!
My eyes. Sorry, I never got a bachelor of arts, so I can't articulate well just how offputting and soulless the AI slop looks - I can only give my sincere opinion on it, that the random image generator makes the art look far worse.
Personally, I play pornographic video games for sexual titillation - the gross/offputting aspect of AI slop makes it harder for me to enjoy that.
God, anti-AI whiners are getting more annoying than the people crying about netorare in games clearly tagged as netorare... Don't like it, don't download it, no need to bombard every damn thread with bitching about it...
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These are my favorites that you can find on this site:
- Witch Trainer: Silver Mod
- Succum brewery
- Good girl gone bad
Interesting game. It might be worth looking at adding some kind of indicator when this "power" is working, even if it is a subtle one, as right now you can probably cut out the dream sequence thing with the host at the start entirely and not have to change much else in the story. But that might be more of a future thing.
I'm not sure what to do on the screens where it's just Chloe looking at you? Is there supposed to be something before you click on in the story beyond clicking on her to make her flinch?
As a minor note, changing her reaction there depending on her "stats" could be a nice little touch. Submissiveness, Lust, Love, and Boldness would all imply different reactions to what I assume is supposed to be getting groped.
I'd recommend adding some level of player agency in figuring out who you interact with for the non-Chole girls. It being random, as it appears now, can be frustrating for players. I get these are supposed to be chance encounters, but you typically want to maximize player agency in games like this. Something as simple as "Go to the store" or "Go to the train station" might be worth doing.
Something I recommend for pretty much all corruption-based games is to add some level of interaction between the people being corrupted and someone other than the MC. Chloe talking with Kim about how things are going living with the MC, and Chloe's reactions (and possibly Kim's reactions) can help sell the corruption narrative, especially if it can be compared to what they were like beforehand somehow.
Overall, this was promising.
I'm not sure what to do on the screens where it's just Chloe looking at you? Is there supposed to be something before you click on in the story beyond clicking on her to make her flinch?
As a minor note, changing her reaction there depending on her "stats" could be a nice little touch. Submissiveness, Lust, Love, and Boldness would all imply different reactions to what I assume is supposed to be getting groped.
I'd recommend adding some level of player agency in figuring out who you interact with for the non-Chole girls. It being random, as it appears now, can be frustrating for players. I get these are supposed to be chance encounters, but you typically want to maximize player agency in games like this. Something as simple as "Go to the store" or "Go to the train station" might be worth doing.
Something I recommend for pretty much all corruption-based games is to add some level of interaction between the people being corrupted and someone other than the MC. Chloe talking with Kim about how things are going living with the MC, and Chloe's reactions (and possibly Kim's reactions) can help sell the corruption narrative, especially if it can be compared to what they were like beforehand somehow.
Overall, this was promising.
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Thanks a lot for taking the time to share your input!
I’ll definitely take some of these ideas with me to the drawing board, you’re spot-on. I’m glad to have some extra perspectives to compare my vision with, and I think we align on the overall idea (which makes me really happy).
This is mostly a passion project and I'm really excited to have some extra people with me watching it come to life. I don't know if it'll be perfect, (probably not, obviously) but I'll do my best to stay true to everyone expectations.
P.S. I've already added some of those to our roadmap
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