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The description is only one sentence long and doesn't really tell me anything about what kind of "management" it is, and the images only show the pictures used *in* the game rather than having any pictures *of* the game. You really need to give people a better idea of what it's like to actually play the game before expecting them to just download and play it to find out what it even is. At the very least, you need some proper in-game screenshots for the sample images.
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Description was updated to be more descriptive. Thanks for your input!
My eyes. Sorry, I never got a bachelor of arts, so I can't articulate well just how offputting and soulless the AI slop looks - I can only give my sincere opinion on it, that the random image generator makes the art look far worse.
Personally, I play pornographic video games for sexual titillation - the gross/offputting aspect of AI slop makes it harder for me to enjoy that.
God, anti-AI whiners are getting more annoying than the people crying about netorare in games clearly tagged as netorare... Don't like it, don't download it, no need to bombard every damn thread with bitching about it...
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These are my favorites that you can find on this site:
- Witch Trainer: Silver Mod
- Succum brewery
- Good girl gone bad
Interesting game. It might be worth looking at adding some kind of indicator when this "power" is working, even if it is a subtle one, as right now you can probably cut out the dream sequence thing with the host at the start entirely and not have to change much else in the story. But that might be more of a future thing.
I'm not sure what to do on the screens where it's just Chloe looking at you? Is there supposed to be something before you click on in the story beyond clicking on her to make her flinch?
As a minor note, changing her reaction there depending on her "stats" could be a nice little touch. Submissiveness, Lust, Love, and Boldness would all imply different reactions to what I assume is supposed to be getting groped.
I'd recommend adding some level of player agency in figuring out who you interact with for the non-Chole girls. It being random, as it appears now, can be frustrating for players. I get these are supposed to be chance encounters, but you typically want to maximize player agency in games like this. Something as simple as "Go to the store" or "Go to the train station" might be worth doing.
Something I recommend for pretty much all corruption-based games is to add some level of interaction between the people being corrupted and someone other than the MC. Chloe talking with Kim about how things are going living with the MC, and Chloe's reactions (and possibly Kim's reactions) can help sell the corruption narrative, especially if it can be compared to what they were like beforehand somehow.
Overall, this was promising.
I'm not sure what to do on the screens where it's just Chloe looking at you? Is there supposed to be something before you click on in the story beyond clicking on her to make her flinch?
As a minor note, changing her reaction there depending on her "stats" could be a nice little touch. Submissiveness, Lust, Love, and Boldness would all imply different reactions to what I assume is supposed to be getting groped.
I'd recommend adding some level of player agency in figuring out who you interact with for the non-Chole girls. It being random, as it appears now, can be frustrating for players. I get these are supposed to be chance encounters, but you typically want to maximize player agency in games like this. Something as simple as "Go to the store" or "Go to the train station" might be worth doing.
Something I recommend for pretty much all corruption-based games is to add some level of interaction between the people being corrupted and someone other than the MC. Chloe talking with Kim about how things are going living with the MC, and Chloe's reactions (and possibly Kim's reactions) can help sell the corruption narrative, especially if it can be compared to what they were like beforehand somehow.
Overall, this was promising.
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Thanks a lot for taking the time to share your input!
I’ll definitely take some of these ideas with me to the drawing board, you’re spot-on. I’m glad to have some extra perspectives to compare my vision with, and I think we align on the overall idea (which makes me really happy).
This is mostly a passion project and I'm really excited to have some extra people with me watching it come to life. I don't know if it'll be perfect, (probably not, obviously) but I'll do my best to stay true to everyone expectations.
P.S. I've already added some of those to our roadmap
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To add to the above, I wouldn't mind seeing some indication of mind control/corruption working as well. A woman maybe having what starts as her "normal" response to something and then the control kicks in and what not. It was the one thing about the demo that wasn't satisfying enough for me, which otherwise was incredibly good. But I see you've got a road map, so that's good.
I also wouldn't mind different paths of control/corruption. There's a wide variety of mind control tropes out there, from the obedient doll, to mindlessly blissed out, to loss of body control and more. Being able to, once you get your hooks in, focus on a specific type of control based on the stats would be very cool to see.
Really like the idea of friends noticing changes in their friend, maybe before they even notice it in themselves. Serial recruitment could be a nice by product of that as well. Stuff like a woman would never let her guard down enough around MC to allow the power to work, but she would around her trusted friend, not realizing her friend is betraying her to MC.
Overall though, I really enjoyed the demo, so don't feel like you gotta compromise what you've got going for any of this.
I also wouldn't mind different paths of control/corruption. There's a wide variety of mind control tropes out there, from the obedient doll, to mindlessly blissed out, to loss of body control and more. Being able to, once you get your hooks in, focus on a specific type of control based on the stats would be very cool to see.
Really like the idea of friends noticing changes in their friend, maybe before they even notice it in themselves. Serial recruitment could be a nice by product of that as well. Stuff like a woman would never let her guard down enough around MC to allow the power to work, but she would around her trusted friend, not realizing her friend is betraying her to MC.
Overall though, I really enjoyed the demo, so don't feel like you gotta compromise what you've got going for any of this.
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I assume the corruption here is some form of "make them horny and bolder when the MC is nearby", at least for now.
Honestly, if you wanted to do a version of the latter idea here, having one of Chloe's friends notice the change, demand to meet with "this creep", and end up getting ensnared herself somehow, would be interesting to see. Alternatively, it could easily be Chloe's parents/mother in that role, if the Dev wants to include them in the story somehow.
Yeah, I assume it's just happening, but as someone that plays more for mind control/corruption than just flirting/seduction, it's nice to see for sure when the power is working. A lot of ways to indicate it, I was just throwing out random ideas. My Best Deal and Lustful Sin changes the color of the women's eyes, Symphony of the Void has very clear moments when the power is turned on versus not (and even variants of the power that you can choose to activate or not to change scenes, giving you that satisfying click and know its working), etc.
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Changing the color of the text in their dialouge, changing the lighting of the room, or even just a faint pink glow around the edges of the screen are other ways I've seen it work too.