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Zoran89

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For an F95Z game, that was surprisingly wholesome. Downloaded it thinking there would be more D/s stuff, but it was still pretty cool in its own way, and not terribly written as well, which is definitely a huge plus. Poor grammar and shit writing really does ruin my porn games for me, weird, I know.

If there's anything I would complain about... It's that I wasn't looking for a "wholesome" type of game. I can appreciate it, it just isn't really my thing when it comes to porn.

Generally speaking, it's a solid 7/10 (Good) from me, but could give it 8/10 (Very Good) if I were to judge by character development and plausibility of the storyline.
 

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For an F95Z game, that was surprisingly wholesome. Downloaded it thinking there would be more D/s stuff, but it was still pretty cool in its own way, and not terribly written as well, which is definitely a huge plus. Poor grammar and shit writing really does ruin my porn games for me, weird, I know.

If there's anything I would complain about... It's that I wasn't looking for a "wholesome" type of game. I can appreciate it, it just isn't really my thing when it comes to porn.

Generally speaking, it's a solid 7/10 (Good) from me, but could give it 8/10 (Very Good) if I were to judge by character development and plausibility of the storyline.
I rewrote part of the script for each day. Took out all the times Andi and Simone said "girl" to Mary and replaced it with Mare or Mary or sometimes with nothing. I also edited the "Love You" "Love You Too" and "Me too" BS and it made it sound proper, especially in the ending days of Mary's route. It comes through so much better. Took a little bit of time but it was worth it.

But yes it's a very decent wholesome game and staying loyal to Mary was pretty easy as I didn't care at all for the other girls.
 
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I rewrote part of the script for each day. Took out all the times Andi and Simone said "girl" to Mary and replaced it with Mare or Mary or sometimes with nothing. I also edited the "Love You" "Love You Too" and "Me too" BS and it made it sound proper, especially in the ending days of Mary's route. It comes through so much better. Took a little bit of time but it was worth it.

But yes it's a very decent wholesome game and staying loyal to Mary was pretty easy as I didn't care at all for the other girls.
Would you share your mod please?
 

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Would you share your mod please?
Not too in depth but I can upload the scripts of what I did.

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I rewrote part of the script for each day. Took out all the times Andi, MC and Simone said "girl" to Mary and replaced it with Mare or Mary or sometimes with nothing. I also edited the "Love You" "Love You Too" and "Me too" BS and it made it sound proper ("I love you", "I love you too", "I love you so much",) especially in the ending days of Mary's route. It comes through so much better. Took a little bit of time but it was worth it.

Just overwrite all files in the "game" folder. No problems should arise but back-up your old files just in case there are issues. I also had the listed "Text Encoding Fix" before I edited the scripts

MODS: If you want to attach this to the main post of this thread you can. It should work without hassle.
 
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i played LWM because it was available for tablets, i didn't give it much credit. But the second part, when the couple start boring and the mistress and the young license examiner enter the scene, I really thought the game was turning towards a very interesting version. pity instead that those paths are then unused and ends up in Vanilla. :cry:
 

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i played LWM because it was available for tablets, i didn't give it much credit. But the second part, when the couple start boring and the mistress and the young license examiner enter the scene, I really thought the game was turning towards a very interesting version. pity instead that those paths are then unused and ends up in Vanilla. :cry:
Yeah, it definitely made it seem like the game was wrapped up quickly, leaving many of these threads unexplored.
 
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yup .. i think thats where the Dev got her name in this game .. not sure tho :unsure:
When I went through the whole script of this game a little ways back when I fixed it I usually replaced all the times I saw Simone, MC, or the mother called her "girl" and used that nickname or her full name.

You wouldn't believe how many "Mares" and "Marys" I had to put in because the usage of the word "girl" in conversation was incredibly overused. Throughout history there's been several women properly called "Mare" (you can check various Wikis on the name) but I've always heard it as a nickname for "Mary"
 

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When I went through the whole script of this game a little ways back when I fixed it I usually replaced all the times I saw Simone, MC, or the mother called her "girl" and used that nickname or her full name.

You wouldn't believe how many "Mares" and "Marys" I had to put in because the usage of the word "girl" in conversation was incredibly overused. Throughout history there's been several women properly called "Mare" (you can check various Wikis on the name) but I've always heard it as a nickname for "Mary"
hmmm sorry but i don't see your point :unsure:
 
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