- Sep 12, 2017
- 8
- 14
JUST FOR CREATOR AN SERIOUS STORYTELLING FANS
Sorry but English its not my mother tongue so ill try to explain myself the best i can. First of all, and most important. Awesome game. Really nice chapter; funny, interesting, deep some times and of course, the usual hot moments thats keep us coming back (mate, that lake scene... less is more sometimes). But second (always the "but") just for feedback, and on a constructive way. The feel on the father, its been quite strange. I totally buy the daughters behaviour, motivations and twisted but delicious paths. Even the coworkers with al that fetish menu. So the oniric resources and traumatic backgrounds. Whatever. But that father is becoming less credible, a puppet even. I mean, is supossed to be the protagonist, and is a blurry character. Its quite passive, its like not taking responsability, and i can understand it in the laboral situation but not in home. At least for me im losing contact with him. The better stories are these were you can relate, and even in the arousal part he is becoming a secondary. This can be right, maybe is this way you want to develope it, making more a groupal travel. Its your choice, but be careful, maybe when less expected he will develope a face and fall into the third person and we all want to watch the spin off centered on the daughters travel of self discovery and forget about the not so "choice maker". The italic part its just for laughs, but be aware. Still and amazing new chapter, thanks for whats already a "classic", and for me a real Top3 of all times. Continue this hard work, we are all supporting you, even when we lose our nails waiting. But, you know, abstinence is hard when the shit is damn good. Best.
Sorry but English its not my mother tongue so ill try to explain myself the best i can. First of all, and most important. Awesome game. Really nice chapter; funny, interesting, deep some times and of course, the usual hot moments thats keep us coming back (mate, that lake scene... less is more sometimes). But second (always the "but") just for feedback, and on a constructive way. The feel on the father, its been quite strange. I totally buy the daughters behaviour, motivations and twisted but delicious paths. Even the coworkers with al that fetish menu. So the oniric resources and traumatic backgrounds. Whatever. But that father is becoming less credible, a puppet even. I mean, is supossed to be the protagonist, and is a blurry character. Its quite passive, its like not taking responsability, and i can understand it in the laboral situation but not in home. At least for me im losing contact with him. The better stories are these were you can relate, and even in the arousal part he is becoming a secondary. This can be right, maybe is this way you want to develope it, making more a groupal travel. Its your choice, but be careful, maybe when less expected he will develope a face and fall into the third person and we all want to watch the spin off centered on the daughters travel of self discovery and forget about the not so "choice maker". The italic part its just for laughs, but be aware. Still and amazing new chapter, thanks for whats already a "classic", and for me a real Top3 of all times. Continue this hard work, we are all supporting you, even when we lose our nails waiting. But, you know, abstinence is hard when the shit is damn good. Best.
