So I tried this out, and I gotta say, the writing is fantastic. I rarely comment on any games, but the girls in this one seriously impressed me. Conversations felt natural and real, they have real personality and their own little quirks, even the way the intro sequence works with the little flashes back to reality was really well done.
The renders are fairly good, too, and while I think the face type might be a little overused (random girl at the office having the same unusual face type as the two girls at home is a little weird), the expressions and posing so far are great. Those often bug the hell out of me about other games because even some of the big name devs don't pay a lot of attention to the little details and it all winds up looking fake, but it's very solid here.
Looking forward to more of this.