PBS666

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Here is a short opinion/review for people who are taken aback a little because of the screenshots with the homely looking girls. This game is definitely something else, so I hope more people will give it a go.

The not so good:

1. Compared to what we're used to, the faces of the characters are somewhat strange. You may initially think the models are ugly, but you get used to them and can learn to appreciate them because the girls are genuinely nice characters.
2. The game feels very disjointed. You have the 'main' story with the daughters and mom at home, and you have the 'side' story at the office. It feels like the stories belong to two different games. The office story is lighthearted/funny/silly, while the home story is much more serious/sad.
And if that is not enough, we have a third totally disjointed part with the dream scenes which seem to be some random mishmash of fantasy stories.

1. If you mean that the characters don't look like generic Daz models (aka plastic store mannequins), then I agree. They are different than what I see in most other games around here. I think that's a good thing.
2. Here I don't agree at all. The main story indeed is at times very serious, sad and sometimes outright scary. But at other times the witty banter between the two girls is at the same lighthearted level as the side stories. For me, they blend in together perfectly. And those dream sequences are an integral part of the story that chronicles the evolution of the MC's and the girls feelings.
5. The animations are bad. They are basically two or a few frames morphing/switching into each other repeatedly.
I honestly prefer this over those "better" animations I see in some other games. The latter look unnatural as can be most of the time.
 

Count Morado

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Can anyone explain how it is on version 6.2 but my downloaded version says it is number 8 and I've had it for months?
It's on v0.6.4 ... though 6.4 is only minor fixes over the bugfix of 6.3 for 6.2.
And yes, this version came out on December 8/9, 2021 depending upon what part of the world you're in - about 2.5 months ago.

Maybe you should screenshot so that we can see what you see?
 
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naughtyroad

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I think (future) Denise has found herself a summertime teaching job in an another game's universe.
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Hmm, darkcookie's character design are always great I think, but I kinda hope super busty nerdy hijab girl finds her way onto the stage in some other incarnation at some point. :whistle:
 

Count Morado

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how often does this update?
December each of the last two years. Developer stated on the game's page to look for it in the second half of this year for Chapter 7. Add it to your wishlist there - also on the , there is a progress graphic updated weekly.
 

UncleFredo

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how often does this update?
Updates are infrequent compared to many VNs, but they are massive in their content. Naughty updates by chapters and has a high standard of quality. As the VN progresses he has more threads to deal with and he has a full time job and other real life commitments. You're probably looking at several months to a year, but trust me it will be worth the wait. It always has been so far and I see no reason to expect anything less.
 

MGUltimate

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Updates close to a year (!!!!!!!!) apart but bigger than the vast majority of updates on here. Some manage to be close with much shorter times, but without as much detail to different things.
 

Kouv

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Two things naughtyroad ..

1. If you aren't making a living out of this, then why not hire some help so the updates are not year long.. I mean, it's way too long of a time to wait for an update. (I know the reason you aren't to be honest, but I said "What the heck, let's post it anyway)

2. Maybe limit the content with the rest of the cast and focus more on the main characters ? Just a thought..

Otherwise this is by far one of the best games in this forum. Great work.
 

naughtyroad

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Two things naughtyroad ..

1. If you aren't making a living out of this, then why not hire some help so the updates are not year long.. I mean, it's way too long of a time to wait for an update. (I know the reason you aren't to be honest, but I said "What the heck, let's post it anyway)

2. Maybe limit the content with the rest of the cast and focus more on the main characters ? Just a thought..

Otherwise this is by far one of the best games in this forum. Great work.
1. There's quite a few reasons why that's not only unfeasible, but makes no sense even.

For one, from a work perspective:
Hiring on another person won't double development speed, as I'd need to train and coach them in my work methods, plan, specify and communicate what they should work on, verify their work and issue rework, and process their output. And there's some jobs that just can't be offloaded (at least, not while keeping it the LomL it is today). Also, a lot of the extra work that comes in is taking me away from what I love doing, which is making LomL.
I've written more extensively about the above before if you're interested in more details, but you'll have to do some digging in the thread.

Nr two, from a business perspective:
It does not seem likely that hiring on another person will increase revenue to a point where it justifies the cost of hiring on another person. When I did the math end of last year, net income from support is a little shy of Western Europe minimum wage, on an hourly basis (given I spend about 50 hrs a week on Light of my Life, and after VAT and every platform, payment provider and the tax man takes their bite).
I don't see that income doubling from shaving a couple of months off of a 10/11 month development period. In fact, it seems support has reached a natural limit and after the boost following the last release, right now it's already back at almost exactly the same level it was this time last year.

On a little side tangent, that's one reason why short releases cycles with little or no new content is a much better business practice, as it allows a dev team to keep kicking that line up before the effects of the last release wear off. It's also exactly how I don't want to make Light of my Life.

But coming back to what I was saying: what you're suggesting is sinking that income into what'll end up (after taxes and VAT) to be a little shy of half of a Western European minimum wage for someone else. Mind you, that leaves 0 income for me, without any less work for me. And the only gain from that seems to be "it's still to long to develop, just a little less too long".
I mean, I don't do this to get rich (or I'd just moonlight my other job and make a killing), but that just doesn't make sense, whichever way you turn it.

Finally, I've heard people say "it's too long", but then again, for movies or series a year or two between drops is quite normal, and they have crews of hundreds. I appreciate people are eager, but I'm not about to throw quality out of the door to satisfy this demand for quantity, so any development time will be "just long enough to get it right", and y'all just need to redefine your expectations to match.

2. The side cast is very important for pacing (entire chapters would have been left without any lewd content to speak of), comedic relief (the coven) and as an antagonist to drive some dramatic developments (Brooke). Cutting that content out would make Light of my Life a less complete and balanced experience IMHO, so that's not going to happen.
 

deathhound7

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Hey, I'm just popping in here to say that I just finished reading(?) this VN, and I think that it's absolutely spectacular. I'm fairly recent to this type of media and was originally just looking for fap material, but writing happens to be a failed hobby of mine, and I quickly ended up craving romance and a good story out of these things more than anything else. That's . . . hard to find.

If I have any complaint about the story at all, it would probably be the stuff going on between Lou/MC and Denise. Compared to everything else, it comes off as super-creepy and pretty much snaps suspension of disbelief. Denise comes off as far too innocent (well, until you figure out what she's really like) and Lou/MC would have to be practically brain-dead in order to be convinced that doing stuff like jacking-off in front of his daughter was a reasonable request out of concern for his health. I know I'm asking for realism in an incest porn VN, but I really felt that by comparison, the stuff going on between Macy and Denise, and eventually Lou and Macy, were all very natural and believable.

If you were to ask me how I might try to do it better, however . . . I donnu. I wouldn't have the first clue on how to touch that one. All I can really say with any certainty is that I had more of a problem in the beginning of their progression, rather than much later, when the pretense of this not being for mutual gratification had been all but obliterated. If there's one thing that I do like about Denise and Lou's relationship, it's that Denise, in many ways, takes care of her father and even acts maternally, which does a lot towards the power-dynamic between them. In my mind, her extreme naivete and her vulnerability would mean that she's completely off-limits to a character as old as Lou, but her saving graces are her maternal instincts and well . . . the fact that she's probably the most perverted character of the cast.

I think that I've been drawn to incest because the taboo presents such a challenge. In regular romance stories, there's the will-they or won't-they element, but with incest romance stories, there's the, "How the fuck does this even happen?!" element to it. I think that father-daughter stories might be even harder to write than other pairings. At least with siblings, you have similar ages, so there's less to deal with on a power-dynamic front. Mother-son pairings would be a bit harder, but with the way our society currently views men and women, you could simply overturn the power-dynamic altogether and write the son as being the more protective, even more dominant of the pair. With father-daughter pairings you have to overcome the obstacle of how fathers are supposed to see themselves as protectors beyond all else, and how such a relationship would violate those convictions. There's also the real-world problem of it being more common for father-figures to be sexually abusive towards their children than any other abusive familial situation.

So far, there's only four father-daughter VNs that I like; yours (LOML) Daughter for Dessert, Petal Among Thorns, and Now and Then. I have problems with each one, but I would also say that each one of these have impressively tackled a very difficult subject/premise.

PS: That bear scene. I had actually completely and utterly missed that Macy was licked by a bear. I saw her swinging that twig in the background, but was too focused on Denise and Lou's conversation to notice that a mother-f'ing grissly had come into the frame at all. When Macy recounted what had happened, I actually had to rollback in order to confirm that it, indeed, had.
 

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on steam it says the planned release is second half of 2022, does that mean the next update is second half of 2022 or will the game be finished second half of 2022?
 

Count Morado

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On a little side tangent, that's one reason why short releases cycles with little or no new content is a much better business practice, as it allows a dev team to keep kicking that line up before the effects of the last release wear off.
I have brought up this exact point when dealing with "update when"/milker complaints in other threads. Glad to see this shared by a trusted developer.
on steam it says the planned release is second half of 2022, does that mean the next update is second half of 2022 or will the game be finished second half of 2022?
there is still a lot of story remaining for beyond the next update of chapter 7.
 
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