I can absolutely see that happening as Denise starts coming out of her shell more and becomes more confident in what she likes. Might even be a way for her to help combat some of her anxiety too. If something like that happens I'm sure NR will have put lots of thought into how to bring it about naturally through character progression.
I agree Naughty is an excellent storyteller.
Tbh, I hadn't anticipated they'd get that frisky with each other when I made my first story outline back when before I got started. They sort of did that on their own as development progressed. Perhaps that's why it works as it does? Because it isn't shoe-horned in to check off a tag, but developed organically and naturally? IDK, sometimes I feel more like a chronicler than a writer.
You're probably right NaughtyTbh, I hadn't anticipated they'd get that frisky with each other when I made my first story outline back when before I got started. They sort of did that on their own as development progressed. Perhaps that's why it works as it does? Because it isn't shoe-horned in to check off a tag, but developed organically and naturally? IDK, sometimes I feel more like a chronicler than a writer.
Exactly my problem. Bad writing trying to give the girl agency made her a manipulative liar. The muh consent argument becomes crickets when the male char has no real choice.
Excactly, the big sister says something or does something, usual by the lil sis's minstrations, lil sis will then tell her daddy in a way that makes it seem innocent, so if the mc questions she can then say she said something else. she will do the same after talking to the mc, then she goes to the big sister and does the same thing. And do not get me started on when the big sis or the mc tries to deny anything ( like when the big sis denies having sex with the mc. or when the mc doesn't want the heath food or decaf coffee. she snaps and forces him to accept. then your forced to do what she wants and say okay, and faster then u blink she is back to being the sweet nieve angle. Don't mind her in the game, just wish she was not an li or an option for her not to be.
Too bad for me cause I think she's the most attractive but I feel like I'm not in charge in this game.
As I've said a few times before, there's not going to be a version where the Macy+Denise love interest combo is split up. If you want to know more about the reasoning behind it, see here among other places: https://f95zone.to/threads/light-of-my-life-ch-1-7-v1-0-0-naughty-road.29628/post-12211161
A KN?
Hardly, since you would probably not have had any problems with the choices in the game, if it had been the MC driving those events instead of one of the love interests. Your problem with it is that you do not like that the MC is not the one in control on many occasions, but that's a story matter, not a choices matter.In this case, I take "bad writing" to mean "not catering to my specific likes and dislikes". I'm sure you will do better when you set your mind to it, and I look forward to your first release.
Yeah the promise is not forgotten. : Dnaughtyroad, I never did post here about your latest update after I finished playing it. Just wanted to say that I enjoyed it
The number of posters on these forums who can't surrender even the tiniest bit of control, in a freaking story no less, to have some fun times is mind boggling to me. The only thing I can figure is that they have so little control over anything irl in their day to day that not having 100% complete and domineering control during fantasy time is like ptsd level triggering.As I've said a few times before, there's not going to be a version where the Macy+Denise love interest combo is split up. If you want to know more about the reasoning behind it, see here among other places: https://f95zone.to/threads/light-of-my-life-ch-1-7-v1-0-0-naughty-road.29628/post-12211161
A KN?
As I've said before, this is not a game where the MC is calling all the shots and all the love interests are fawning over him, awaiting his next command with bated breath. If that is a turn-off to you, then this is simply not the game for you.
To be honest, I find male power fantasies boring, besides being completely unrealistic as anyone who's ever shared a household with several women can attest (in sofar as realism is a valid argument in these matters). But if power fantasies and male control are your thing, enjoy, most of the games out there do feature it in droves, so you should have little trouble finding something more to you liking.
In this case, I take "bad writing" to mean "not catering to my specific likes and dislikes". I'm sure you will do better when you set your mind to it, and I look forward to your first release.
Not a question of control, it's a question of choices and agency...of which in reality there is none (aside from the side characters). Which is fine, it really is, even if naughty did get a little overly defensive. I still like this VN, still love Macy, just Denise annoys me personally (just a character thing). That we cannot avoid her is the way he wants to write his story and that's perfectly acceptable, one can either acept that or not.
There is a lot of agency. Just because there is one area which is integral to the basis of the story - which is the premise of the story - which is the whole plot device of the ENTIRE story - that you don't like is that the two girls are inseparable... that doesn't keep a player from using their agency.
