This one started out so promising, but the more I play it the more it annoys the hell out of me. Lily's personality and attitude toward sex are constantly shifting around, depending on what the current scene requires. In one scene, she encourages a man she doesn't know to fuck her in the ass, just to help him get back at his ex. Then, several more atonal sex scenes and infidelities later, and she's squeamish about flashing her vag at a couple strangers for a few seconds OR fucking her boss (who she pretended to nearly fuck like a week ago just to get back at him) to keep her job. In one scene, she doesn't want to fuck someone because she doesn't want to cheat on her husband, meanwhile, she already has several times and is regularly fucking his father.
The worst offender is when the author repeats himself with the twin bar scenes. In both scenes, Lily is out with Nikki at a bar, Nikki challenges 2 male friends to a team bar game, promising that she and Lily will blow them if they lose the first time, then promising that she and Lily will fuck them if they lose the second time, Nikki pressures Lily into accepting the bet (ensuring her that Nikki's hustling the guys and there's no way they could lose), then depending on the players choices the girls either win or lose and Lily is VERY apprehensive about paying up. Depending on the player's choices she either does it or she chickens out. Now, I don't mind this same scene happening twice. Actually, it could have been a very good tool to illustrate Lily's sexual development through the game depending upon what choices the player has made so far. Except, the author didn't put that much effort in. Even if you've been playing Lily like a total slut who sucks and fucks every dick she encounters, she's still clutching her pearls and trying to back out of the deal both times.
I have no idea what Lily's personality even is most times. Sometimes, she's sexually aggressive and knows exactly what she wants. Other times, she's annoyingly submissive and naive. Neither of which have anything to do with the player's input. She's just written that inconsistently. I wanted Lily to flash those customers or fuck her boss to keep her job, and it annoyed the hell out of me that I couldn't make those choices. I wanted her to be nearly as ready and willing to fuck those guys in the bar as Nikki was, and it annoyed the hell out of me that I couldn't make the choice. The game isn't bad. Everything up to the second time Lily fucks Frank is fantastic. I just wish the rest of the game was