VN Ren'Py Abandoned Lily's Curse Prologue [v0.3] [GubaStudio]

[L☹VE]

Thanks mate

no problem, keep up the good work)

 

[Eerie Entity]

Hello everyone

I'm one of the game dev. I wanted to say thank you for the first impressions you had. And wanted to apologize for my bad english , we'll make more effort to correct it, for it to be less hurting eyes (got the same issue with my native language when i see flaws) .
I hope you'll like the story, even if it's a prologue.
Thanks for trying it

I was recently suggested that seeing as I'm an active member here, maybe I could offer help in proofreading and correcting mistakes, it's something I could consider. If you need help with that, we could discuss it. It would be my first time doing that, but if it goes well and all, I may even do it more often and for more devs
It was actually another game dev @MrKnobb that suggested and gave me that idea, haha.

 

[Ariku]

I was recently suggested that seeing as I'm an active member here, maybe I could offer help in proofreading and correcting mistakes, it's something I could consider. If you need help with that, we could discuss it. It would be my first time doing that, but if it goes well and all, I may even do it more often and for more devs
It was actually another game dev @MrKnobb that suggested and gave me that idea, haha.

The idea is really nice ! Help is always welcome . We can discuss it by mp if you want . knowing my grammar is terrible

 

[Madjuls]

A good start for a game and things can only get better.

 

[ThunderRob]

MC is NOT a man..geez..Yumi is begging for him basically and i'm screaming at the computer..go out with her you dickless twat!!!! and he says.."interferes with studies" i went out with a lot of gals in college and it never impacted my studies...millennials..buncha pussies.
i wont complain much though..super hot demon-chick is a win to me

 

[hyco2]

I looked at it (because there was nothing to play), and...

... uhhhh. I was not aware that Myth shares a connection to history, academically. Tolkien was a Linguist, for example. The Yumi scene is disturbing, but in a unhappy realistic way. For a gay nerd, at least. Nothing wrong with gays or nerds, I am one of that myself, but bad for dating female cuties, obviously. And our myth-interested nerd takes out the artifact with the very description of some forgotten fuckgoddess, and then wonders about his, hmmm, dream.

What I want to say here, apart from the engrish, the preview does not play as a game, because, it isn't. As a VN I have big problems connecting to mc, because of him lacking both male brains. He seems lobotomized because of plot, and it is never good if the reader realises that in the first few minutes. Still, I will keep watching this, because it has potential.

 

[macadam]

There must be town in distant corner of the Earth, inhabited by all those missing daddies from inc(ish) games :test:. I've always wondered where all those people went...

they probably roaming around as NTR actors....

( just a supposition )

 

[vultron]

I think I'll wait until the Engrish is formationed into English xD

 

[9inchz]

any incest in this ?
maybe custom made?
now or future?

 

[PeggyBlackett]

No incest patch?

 

[Ariku]

any incest in this ?
maybe custom made?
now or future?

No incest patch?

Hey there! The patch is on work already ( i just have to find out how to include it as a patch and not a new download.)

 

[Ariku]

MC is NOT a man..geez..Yumi is begging for him basically and i'm screaming at the computer..go out with her you dickless twat!!!! and he says.."interferes with studies" i went out with a lot of gals in college and it never impacted my studies...millennials..buncha pussies.
i wont complain much though..super hot demon-chick is a win to me

Thank you for your "human reaction" we argue a lot about MC , if he's shy there's a reason. But i love your comment about Yumi part !!

 

[gigan]

@Ariku i have yesterday evening figured out to try a incest patch too.The only resolution that i have found out is that the 004.rpa and the archive.rpa compress to one rpa file so that the rpy and the rpyc files in to one rpa file is and then you can change the scipt files.The only files what i have seen is to change is the script.rpy and the livingroom.rpy for this version

 

[Eerie Entity]

@Ariku i have yesterday evening figured out to try a incest patch too.The only resolution that i have found out is that the 004.rpa and the archive.rpa compress to one rpa file so that the rpy and the rpyc files in to one rpa file is and then you can change the scipt files.The only files what i have seen is to change is the script.rpy and the livingroom.rpy for this version

You might want to wait a bit on that, I'm doing proofreading for him, so the dialog and everything is going to be changing a bit. If you do that NOW, you'd have to do it again after these changes I'm doing

 

[L☹VE]

You might want to wait a bit on that, I'm doing proofreading for him, so the dialog and everything is going to be changing a bit. If you do that NOW, you'd have to do it again after these changes I'm doing

good job man, it's nice that you help

 

[gigan]

@Eerie Entity my incest patch is ready .But the big problem for me is that i must acualy upload the archive.rpa and the changed scripts and the rar file will be 315 mb big and i can´t upload that

 

[Eerie Entity]

good job man, it's nice that you help

Yeah, it was this other dev, the dev of Retrieving The Past (you should check it out if you haven't yet, it's a great one in my opinion) that suggested to me that I could offer my help proofreading for them, and after I played this game, I decided to take this as my first project and see how that goes. If things go well, I may even consider offering my help to others in the future, if my time permits of course.

He suggested that I'd do this because I'm rather active around here, haha, and apparently quite liked too, so why not

 

[Eerie Entity]

@Eerie Entity my incest patch is ready .But the big problem for me is that i must acualy upload the archive.rpa and the changed scripts and the rar file will be 315 mb big and i can´t upload that

Oooh okay, haha. Hey, didn't you create an incest patch for another game too just recently? Think I saw you on a different game's thread the other day, haha.

 

[Ariku]

@Ariku i have yesterday evening figured out to try a incest patch too.The only resolution that i have found out is that the 004.rpa and the archive.rpa compress to one rpa file so that the rpy and the rpyc files in to one rpa file is and then you can change the scipt files.The only files what i have seen is to change is the script.rpy and the livingroom.rpy for this version

That sound perfect thanks for the trick . I feel noob not thinking of it . Now i ll be able to do what i wanted as cath and mc are twins.

You might want to wait a bit on that, I'm doing proofreading for him, so the dialog and everything is going to be changing a bit. If you do that NOW, you'd have to do it again after these changes I'm doing

Don t worry i ll wait for it

 

[gigan]

@Ariku no problem.I found out the solution after 1-2 hours.
@Eerie Entity yes i make the incest patch for the game "the way" from Zee95 since version 0.10