- Apr 9, 2018
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My only personal beef with the MC is the scars. I've gotten my ass handed to me and been cut open like that, I'm scare free. It's the only thing that takes away from his appearance for me. Otherwise, he's just into retro 90's, which I'm all about
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one question, you said incest will be a part of storytelling, so mc will have relationship with mom and sis?
- Jun 29, 2021
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This story has some ups and downs, but many more ups than downs! I like that the MC isn't just a beautiful face, insstead makes the scars him interesting. The LIs are lovely but very different, don't know who is going to be my fave. Only problem is that there are too many plots at the same time, so you gotta keep your tongue in the right mouth while playing.
I like that the MC isn't just a beautiful face, insstead makes the scars him interesting. The LIs are lovely but very different, don't know who is going to be my fave. Only problem is that there are too many plots at the same time, so you gotta keep your tongue in the right mouth while playing.
- Apr 9, 2018
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This is good, but but there have been a few things that have really been bothering me:
- Forced events/sexy times. Sometimes I can say no, sometimes I can't. If there were opt-outs, then they weren't clear or maybe I was supposed to be mean to them in order to avoid them
- The story kept pushing Savannah on me the whole time. I did not choose to pursue her and chose to not have feelings but the chat with the boxing guys made it sound like I was infatuated with her and then I am at the hospital trying to find her. Was this just a bug maybe?
- It feels really weird that we never get to explain why we disappeared from the date with Kaylee that night. It seems to get to the point that it is water under the bridge but I don't understand why MC wouldn't clear the air regarding that date
- Dec 23, 2019
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Alright, the Dev is a graphic designer and not an author it seems.
I just started this and already have a concern about how this will progress from here on out.
The MC is at LOSER University...LSU...UNIVERSITY I say again for added effect...
I have attended TWO universities and not ONLY did neither of them have DETENTION like middle school would, but none of my friends who ALSO attended higher learning institutions have voiced that they have had anything to DO with Detention since they stopped being subjected to it at the same time I was.
You see University is a BUSINESS, they don't give a FUCK if you don't hand in your assignments OR even if you don't show UP, you can pay your tuition and go on a year-long bender for all they care, you just won't be granted anything in return.
The more you go and focus, the more you learn the curriculum, and the easier it is to pass the courses...I KNOW right...almost sounds LOGICAL, doesn't it?
So you should seriously consider re-writing that part and developing the story from a more Logical base.
Oh and getting an editor that is familiar with the English language, with all the idiosyncrasies that go into some of the dialog we have, would be an excellent addition since the translation is a little butchered in some areas.
LASTLY, I thought this was a VIRTUAL novel with directions and CHOICES that are supposed to matter, ones that pull the narrative in different directions for different outcomes...apparently, this is more like a Linear or Graphic novel since our choices do not mean a damn thing, the story will simply pull the reader into the same direction it was written to be>
(CHOICES?...we don't NEED no stinking CHOICES???)
Edit: Oh HEIL no, the writing is worse than I thought!!
Not ONLY are parts butchered, but you have incredibly idiotic dialog like "Hey you are an IDIOT" Mc: "Oh right, I FORGOT"???
A STUDENT approaches a TEACHER and wants to get to KNOW him??
The teacher ACCEPTS the flirting like its fucking normal (CONFLICT of INTEREST) see we do not have teachers and students OPENLY flirting with one another... that's fucking ILLEGAL and would get the teacher FIRED and the student tossed out of that university, but WAAAAIIT there's MOOOORE!
The same fucking teacher actually says WELL as you MAY OR MAY NOT KNOW< I am a professor at this university???"
The SAME university that the student who is currently HITTING on him just asked for MORE information???
An idiot outside that our "Awesome" Mctries talking to like he is the MCs BEST FRIEND also has some WINNING dialog "As you may or may not know we just came from detention".....
This is beyond brutal, and not worth my time to even speed through all of this useless dialog just to get to the renders, no wonder why this only has 6 pages of interaction in the last 10 months since it was dropped on this site.
Hire a writer, then this can be a decent project.
I just started this and already have a concern about how this will progress from here on out.
The MC is at LOSER University...LSU...UNIVERSITY I say again for added effect...
I have attended TWO universities and not ONLY did neither of them have DETENTION like middle school would, but none of my friends who ALSO attended higher learning institutions have voiced that they have had anything to DO with Detention since they stopped being subjected to it at the same time I was.
You see University is a BUSINESS, they don't give a FUCK if you don't hand in your assignments OR even if you don't show UP, you can pay your tuition and go on a year-long bender for all they care, you just won't be granted anything in return.
The more you go and focus, the more you learn the curriculum, and the easier it is to pass the courses...I KNOW right...almost sounds LOGICAL, doesn't it?
So you should seriously consider re-writing that part and developing the story from a more Logical base.
Oh and getting an editor that is familiar with the English language, with all the idiosyncrasies that go into some of the dialog we have, would be an excellent addition since the translation is a little butchered in some areas.
LASTLY, I thought this was a VIRTUAL novel with directions and CHOICES that are supposed to matter, ones that pull the narrative in different directions for different outcomes...apparently, this is more like a Linear or Graphic novel since our choices do not mean a damn thing, the story will simply pull the reader into the same direction it was written to be>
(CHOICES?...we don't NEED no stinking CHOICES???)
Edit: Oh HEIL no, the writing is worse than I thought!!
Not ONLY are parts butchered, but you have incredibly idiotic dialog like "Hey you are an IDIOT" Mc: "Oh right, I FORGOT"???
A STUDENT approaches a TEACHER and wants to get to KNOW him??
The teacher ACCEPTS the flirting like its fucking normal (CONFLICT of INTEREST) see we do not have teachers and students OPENLY flirting with one another... that's fucking ILLEGAL and would get the teacher FIRED and the student tossed out of that university, but WAAAAIIT there's MOOOORE!
The same fucking teacher actually says WELL as you MAY OR MAY NOT KNOW< I am a professor at this university???"
The SAME university that the student who is currently HITTING on him just asked for MORE information???
An idiot outside that our "Awesome" Mctries talking to like he is the MCs BEST FRIEND also has some WINNING dialog "As you may or may not know we just came from detention".....
This is beyond brutal, and not worth my time to even speed through all of this useless dialog just to get to the renders, no wonder why this only has 6 pages of interaction in the last 10 months since it was dropped on this site.
Hire a writer, then this can be a decent project.
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- Aug 18, 2020
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Thank god. I'm not a fan of mom/son or dad/daughter incest. Bro/sis however is a top shot.
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I don't wanna question your knowledge of US universities but by playing BaDIK and watching Community I can tell that American colleges are pretty weird when it's about their lessons.
I mean in BaDIK no matter what you study, it seems you have both English and Math. And we're not talkinng about some advanced math like linear algebra but as it seems basic math. Furthermore your gender studies class consists of you talking with other students rather than following an actual lecture.
Furthermore, in Community, although that's a Community College but still a valid place to study in the US, you can get a lawyers degree by taking classes of Spanish for beginners, math & antropology, not to mention some dumb classes like "ladders" that are only there for inside jokes but you get the point.
This game is obviously only focused on creating a story of the MC going through life so there's no need to think too hard about topics like this. I mean for heaven's sake it's a porn game. We don't whatch porrn for the plot, we watch it for the money shot. At least here we do wanna see plot but it doesn't have to be something incredible with how it's being made by one person alone, rather than an entire studio.
- Apr 9, 2018
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One of the most fun VN's that I've played so far. Nice work dev, keep it up =)
- Apr 9, 2018
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Lili is one of the hottest girls that i've seen on this site.
Continue with the good work
Continue with the good work
What a great game this is. Fresh new characters that have their own great personalities. MC that is super likeable.
Graphics are nice and colorfull but looks like it's compressed a lot. Hopefully dev will fix this in future. Also seen some strange floating pillows and bedding and so on, but nothing major.
I think this game will be a hit in no time.
Graphics are nice and colorfull but looks like it's compressed a lot. Hopefully dev will fix this in future. Also seen some strange floating pillows and bedding and so on, but nothing major.
I think this game will be a hit in no time.
- Apr 9, 2018
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I've been remaking ch1 and will release it alongside the upcoming chp3B. The images won't need to be compressed anymore as I've gotten a new system for rendering.
Thank you for playing and for your kind words.
- Sep 12, 2018
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First things first, sorry for going radio silent on you guys for over a month. There were many times where I wanted to post an update but it just felt like there was no point unless the update was ready.
Usually, each chapter focuses on 3 to 4 women for you to pursue. However in this chapter, the focus is on only 1 girl and also to properly introduce the family.
Because of this decision, I understand that not everyone may like the woman featured in this chapter, therefore I went a step ahead and included custom animations for the 4 women chosen from the previous polls.
The woman included from the poll are: Alejandra, Costanza, Grace and Linda.
These animations can be found in the main menu gallery screen. You can unlock them by playing through the chapter.
Which brings me to the update status.
Release Dates:
- Executives - 1st of June
- Managers - 10th of June
- Assistants - 12th of June
- Public Release - 14th of June
Chapter Status:
- Renders: Complete
- Story/Dialogue: Complete
- Sound: Complete
- Animations: Complete
- Extras Gallery Images: Complete
- Extras Gallery Animations: 50%
- Ch1 Remake: 20%
As for the Chapter 1 remake. I intend to finish it off by the time Chapter 3B gets a public release. For players who've already played to the latest chapter, I'd recommend replaying the remake since it will include more renders, more animations and more dialogue.
However, if you want, you can choose to ignore it completely as it will not affect your saves.
I'll be posting a poll soon regarding the update speeds. I understand waiting months for an update can be frustrating so I'd like to get your feedback on how often you want updates to be pushed through.
Thank you and I hope you enjoy what I've been cooking up
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- Jun 30, 2021
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Try playing Above the Clouds
Btw, for once the main character is not a horny idiot, his "adventures" are really interesting to watch. Nice job dev
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Just started playing. Very fun! Thanks for the recommendation, man. I was looking for a good VN these past few days and you certainly helped me. Thanks again!Try playing Above the Clouds
Btw, for once the main character is not a horny idiot, his "adventures" are really interesting to watch. Nice job dev
- Jun 30, 2021
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Glad to help. Actually there aren't many fun games with lots of sweet & comical situations, of those you can still recommend try FreshWomen (two seasons) and Unnatural Instinct (adorable kawaii imouto)Just started playing. Very fun! Thanks for the recommendation, man. I was looking for a good VN these past few days and you certainly helped me. Thanks again!
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