VN Ren'Py Abandoned Lockdown [v0.2.0] [gAdult]

[SiJa]

Like the update gadult...
Short, but that's to be expected when it's only a month since the first version.

However...
A few language issues, but nothing that bad, I assume English is not your main language?
Maybe find someone to help with proofreading and beta testing before you release?
I would be happy to help (no charge) with that if you want? send me a private message.

The sex scene in the Bathroom, I agree with drhotrod needs to be re-rendered. once you notice the annoying moving black dot in two of the animations, it takes away from the scene and pulls the quality of the game down.

Also, this image could be better...

Spoiler: Bad hair day...

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Just some things you may want to look at...
But good work none the less

 

[Piat]

sex? 98mb...

 

[misterbaobab]

White screen in the game( Any help?

 

[zoislk]

sex? 98mb...

Yes, there are 2 scenes so far (with the wife). Definitely very short, but the author did give you something if that was your concern.

 

[SiJa]

Lockdown Fan Signatures.






To use Right Click on the image you want to use.
Select " Copy Image Address" from the options.
Go to your account and SIGNATURE.
Click on the ALIGNMENT icon and select ALIGN CENTER.
Click on the INSERT IMAGE icon and paste the link.
Also please click on the image before you save and use the INSERT LINK Icon to link to this game thread or Patreon page (links below).

https://f95zone.to/threads/lockdown-v0-2-0-gadult.70945/

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[XCelesX]

way too short.

 

[misterbaobab]

White screen in the game( Any help?

?????

 

[Kazukitc]

Nice

 

[Deleted member 2956266]

how is this only 98mb?

 

[spooge_nugget]

My biggest gripes with this are
1) The small amount of content. If the total content so far was a single update it would still feel on the light side.
2) The "animations" are bad (even if the black dot wasn't present). They're too rigid and unnatural.

I do like it, but I feel like it will be a while until there's a decent amount of content.

 

[D Dog]

Just saw this game today, and have to say I love the renders and animation. A great start, I love how the wife and MC play of each other with the humor. The writing is pretty good, some typos but I understood it.

The only two things to stand out is the bath room scene with the wife you see a a small black dot behind the MC. The second when the MC is speaking a lot the paragraph is at the bottom of the screen and hard to ready.

Can't wait for the next update.

 

[COOLMASTER]

too short

really good job, until now wait for more

 

[msleomac]

Copy the patch in the game folder, and delete the relationship.rpy file

thanks

 

[petkan]

Pretty good comments.
What kind of game is it? Is this a novel?

 

[defd©™]

Oh nooo
Lockdown also in the game?
I want freedom!

 

[Paapi]

Latest version changelog ??

 

[Daasss]

does 2.0 has the virus problem??

Yes, Covid is still in the plot.

 

[ImperialD]

how is this only 98mb?

ummm its compressed

 

[Skarletts_Blossom69]

Nice!!

 

[Gladheim]

That Sandra, MILF... oh boy... here I go again