First time commenter, and wow what a game to comment on. Just left a review and got to say great work!
It's incredibly rare to find a work of such quality without a paywall of sorts. Eagerly looking forward to your next release.
Thank you for this review and feedback.
I'm glad you liked the game.
I take this opportunity to respond to your worries about the game:
- for my "Engrish", sorry, I discovered while posting the first release of the game that my English level was not as good as I hoped. But there are currently 2 players who have started a titanic work of correction (I don't think they will be finished by the next update because this work is so big). As I try to make the characters' speeches take into account the progress of the game, there are often several variations for each sentence in the game, so it's really a crazy job they've started. Thanks to them
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- As for the frustrating side of the unfinished scenes, all I can say is that French proverb that I already mentioned in this thread: "
Paris wasn't built in a day". I'm working alone on the development of this game, and this is only the third release. I think it will take a lot more before the game is complete.
- For the grumpy side (if I understand correctly), I think it's due to the translation. In the french version, Lolita has a rather cinic humor and she handles irony a lot, and I'm not sure I managed to translate it into english. Hope the future correction will help
- and for the last point, the reactions of the NPCs are well planned according to Lolita's outfits (there are already several places that take this into account: the house, the bar, the brothel, the swimming pool) and there will also be afterwards some passers-by who will interact according to the outfits.
The next update will be about the school, because I find that this is the most repetitive and empty part of the game at the moment.
I'm currently preparing about 30 CGs (counting the variants) and I hope to be able to post it during the month of September.