Amazing achievement, Belle. Definitely worth you taking the time to polish this to a fine shine.
Writer's question: How much did the characters you have created end up driving the plot? Or, put another way, how much of the original plot survived character development?
Writer's question: How much did the characters you have created end up driving the plot? Or, put another way, how much of the original plot survived character development?
Anybody know of any other games here on f95 with a similar detective mechanic? I like the whole collecting clues and using them to solve a mystery (like the old Phoenix Wright/Apollo Justice games).
The idea to mix that mechanic with a basic skill system and a magic system was a fantastic bit of inspiration on Belle's part.
The idea to mix that mechanic with a basic skill system and a magic system was a fantastic bit of inspiration on Belle's part.
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only other game with nearly the same mechanic I saw was "Corrupted Kingdoms" but last time I played it it couldn't hold a candle to LltP storywise
other than that Sierra Lee's "The Last Souvereign" has some story parts where you need to play detective for the best outcome.
...to a degree I think any game that focus on Blackmail and rape will also have such mechanics
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It's a mix, I guess? There's a lot of misunderstanding about the nature of the plot in LLtP, mainly from people who are frustrated when there's a lot of focus on characters that don't appear to have anything to do with Princess Selena and the events surrounding her. LLtP has an overarching plot but spends very little time focusing on it (except for at the very end, as we're seeing these days). The focus is primarily on individual characters and their arcs. In that regard, character development is the plot, so when characters develop, so does the plot.
I'm not sure if that makes sense.
I'm not going to call this a masterpiece or even some amazing achievement(tho good is amazing on F95zone and especially where sexual type games are involved) BUTT and it's a big one all the best stories that have stood the test of time either leaned on character development or balanced the story and characters. So that means you are very much on the right path Belle just keep getting better. One thing I do LOVE about the game is the dialogue of most of the characters butt especially little Belle. She might castrate me for calling her that tho
.I'll second it. It's annoying as fuck. Have you noticed no one else changes the color and size of their messages?your the only one complaining about it....
How do I get the clues thing to work (on Android) it says short press to examine and long press to reveal yet nothing's happening when I long press.
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I'd like more information on this. The new clue system on Android is a recent addition, but I've heard from others that it works quite well. Are you using the official Android version from my Patreon/SubscribeStar? Are you certain that you're in a situation where the game actually expects you to present a clue?
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To say a couple of bad things:
Theres a lot of Cringy exposition in the beginining.
The Older sister is a virgin
After MC got punished by crone (to avoid spoilers) theres at least a couple of dialogues where Belle says she never had a cock in her mouth.
Some night scenes, specially Callies seem lower quality/higher compression/lower Res?
On the other hand theres a lot of awesome stuff you dont see in any other game. Theres small and big details here and there which make you deserve some real credit.
Theres a lot of Cringy exposition in the beginining.
The Older sister is a virgin
After MC got punished by crone (to avoid spoilers) theres at least a couple of dialogues where Belle says she never had a cock in her mouth.
Some night scenes, specially Callies seem lower quality/higher compression/lower Res?
On the other hand theres a lot of awesome stuff you dont see in any other game. Theres small and big details here and there which make you deserve some real credit.
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I respect that that's a trigger for you, but for almost everyone else on this site (my opinion, not backed by statistical research), an NTR warning means that your character is cheated on, not you taking someone else's love interest. netorare, not netori.
As such, your wigging out seems...shrill. And disingenuous, because you're making a big deal about calling netori NTR.
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If you are talking about the fairy queen and her husband, he totally deserved it.
Also it's not NTR if you are the one doing the fucking.