Belle

Developer of Supermodel & Long Live the Princess
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Amazing achievement, Belle. Definitely worth you taking the time to polish this to a fine shine.

Writer's question: How much did the characters you have created end up driving the plot? Or, put another way, how much of the original plot survived character development?
It's a mix, I guess? There's a lot of misunderstanding about the nature of the plot in LLtP, mainly from people who are frustrated when there's a lot of focus on characters that don't appear to have anything to do with Princess Selena and the events surrounding her. LLtP has an overarching plot but spends very little time focusing on it (except for at the very end, as we're seeing these days). The focus is primarily on individual characters and their arcs. In that regard, character development is the plot, so when characters develop, so does the plot.

I'm not sure if that makes sense.
 

d**k B*tt

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It's a mix, I guess? There's a lot of misunderstanding about the nature of the plot in LLtP, mainly from people who are frustrated when there's a lot of focus on characters that don't appear to have anything to do with Princess Selena and the events surrounding her. LLtP has an overarching plot but spends very little time focusing on it (except for at the very end, as we're seeing these days). The focus is primarily on individual characters and their arcs. In that regard, character development is the plot, so when characters develop, so does the plot.

I'm not sure if that makes sense.
I'm not going to call this a masterpiece or even some amazing achievement(tho good is amazing on F95zone and especially where sexual type games are involved) BUTT and it's a big one all the best stories that have stood the test of time either leaned on character development or balanced the story and characters. So that means you are very much on the right path Belle just keep getting better. One thing I do LOVE about the game is the dialogue of most of the characters butt especially little Belle. She might castrate me for calling her that tho:p.
 
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Rain90

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How do I get the clues thing to work (on Android) it says short press to examine and long press to reveal yet nothing's happening when I long press.
 

RustyV

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It's a mix, I guess? There's a lot of misunderstanding about the nature of the plot in LLtP, mainly from people who are frustrated when there's a lot of focus on characters that don't appear to have anything to do with Princess Selena and the events surrounding her. LLtP has an overarching plot but spends very little time focusing on it (except for at the very end, as we're seeing these days). The focus is primarily on individual characters and their arcs. In that regard, character development is the plot, so when characters develop, so does the plot.

I'm not sure if that makes sense.
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Belle

Developer of Supermodel & Long Live the Princess
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Sep 25, 2017
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How do I get the clues thing to work (on Android) it says short press to examine and long press to reveal yet nothing's happening when I long press.
I'd like more information on this. The new clue system on Android is a recent addition, but I've heard from others that it works quite well. Are you using the official Android version from my Patreon/SubscribeStar? Are you certain that you're in a situation where the game actually expects you to present a clue?
 

Sesinho

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To say a couple of bad things:
Theres a lot of Cringy exposition in the beginining.
The Older sister is a virgin
After MC got punished by crone (to avoid spoilers) theres at least a couple of dialogues where Belle says she never had a cock in her mouth.
Some night scenes, specially Callies seem lower quality/higher compression/lower Res?

On the other hand theres a lot of awesome stuff you dont see in any other game. Theres small and big details here and there which make you deserve some real credit.
 

goobdoob

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Warning for all, there is unavoidable
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in this game. So be WARNED.
I respect that that's a trigger for you, but for almost everyone else on this site (my opinion, not backed by statistical research), an NTR warning means that your character is cheated on, not you taking someone else's love interest. netorare, not netori.

As such, your wigging out seems...shrill. And disingenuous, because you're making a big deal about calling netori NTR.
 

despot444

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As such, your wigging out seems...shrill. And disingenuous, because you're making a big deal about calling netori NTR.
Disingenuous? How is not wanting to make "love" with someones spouse makes me disingenuous? Why are you so hostile? Did I hit sore spot? It's NTR from perspective of Fairy King, he founds out there is this unknown dude, who should have sex with his wife. Let's switch roles, your sister comes to you (even though you are not her spouse) says that Fairy King should give his sperm to her while whole town watches. This should be netori too according to your beliefs.
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Evangelion-01

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Disingenuous? How is not wanting to make "love" with someones spouse makes me disingenuous? Why are you so hostile? Did I hit sore spot? It's NTR from perspective of Fairy King, he founds out there is this unknown dude, who should have sex with his wife. Let's switch roles, your sister comes to you (even though you are not her spouse) says that Fairy King should give his sperm to her while whole town watches. This should be netori too according to your beliefs.
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putting your final change of heart aside...
NTR = netorare = SOMEONE stealing YOUR love interest
netori = YOU stealing SOMEONES love interest
netorase = YOU encourage or force SOMEONE to steal YOUR love interest
 

Malkav

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I am a huge fan of the sneaking around at night part, but some of the pictures are very dark. I realize it adds to the atmosphere, but a little bit of immersion breaking would be appreciated from my end at least. I don't know how you would go about changing it now though
 
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