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It's a mix, I guess? There's a lot of misunderstanding about the nature of the plot in LLtP, mainly from people who are frustrated when there's a lot of focus on characters that don't appear to have anything to do with Princess Selena and the events surrounding her. LLtP has an overarching plot but spends very little time focusing on it (except for at the very end, as we're seeing these days). The focus is primarily on individual characters and their arcs. In that regard, character development is the plot, so when characters develop, so does the plot.Amazing achievement, Belle. Definitely worth you taking the time to polish this to a fine shine.
Writer's question: How much did the characters you have created end up driving the plot? Or, put another way, how much of the original plot survived character development?
I'm not going to call this a masterpiece or even some amazing achievement(tho good is amazing on F95zone and especially where sexual type games are involved) BUTT and it's a big one all the best stories that have stood the test of time either leaned on character development or balanced the story and characters. So that means you are very much on the right path Belle just keep getting better. One thing I do LOVE about the game is the dialogue of most of the characters butt especially little Belle. She might castrate me for calling her that thoIt's a mix, I guess? There's a lot of misunderstanding about the nature of the plot in LLtP, mainly from people who are frustrated when there's a lot of focus on characters that don't appear to have anything to do with Princess Selena and the events surrounding her. LLtP has an overarching plot but spends very little time focusing on it (except for at the very end, as we're seeing these days). The focus is primarily on individual characters and their arcs. In that regard, character development is the plot, so when characters develop, so does the plot.
I'm not sure if that makes sense.
I'll second it. It's annoying as fuck. Have you noticed no one else changes the color and size of their messages?your the only one complaining about it....![]()
And more entertaining.For comparison, that's just 30,000 fewer words than George R.R. Martin's "A Game of Thrones". It is more than three times the length of "Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone".
It's a mix, I guess? There's a lot of misunderstanding about the nature of the plot in LLtP, mainly from people who are frustrated when there's a lot of focus on characters that don't appear to have anything to do with Princess Selena and the events surrounding her. LLtP has an overarching plot but spends very little time focusing on it (except for at the very end, as we're seeing these days). The focus is primarily on individual characters and their arcs. In that regard, character development is the plot, so when characters develop, so does the plot.
I'm not sure if that makes sense.
I'd like more information on this. The new clue system on Android is a recent addition, but I've heard from others that it works quite well. Are you using the official Android version from my Patreon/SubscribeStar? Are you certain that you're in a situation where the game actually expects you to present a clue?How do I get the clues thing to work (on Android) it says short press to examine and long press to reveal yet nothing's happening when I long press.
I respect that that's a trigger for you, but for almost everyone else on this site (my opinion, not backed by statistical research), an NTR warning means that your character is cheated on, not you taking someone else's love interest. netorare, not netori.Warning for all, there is unavoidablein this game. So be WARNED.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
He might be talking about the first time with the former Fairy Queen.Uh... wut? I think you might be posting in the wrong thread.
well she asked it.He might be talking about the first time with the former Fairy Queen.
If you are talking about the fairy queen and her husband, he totally deserved it.Warning for all, there is unavoidablein this game. So be WARNED.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
That scene is part of the plot.Warning for all, there is unavoidablein this game. So be WARNED.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Disingenuous? How is not wanting to make "love" with someones spouse makes me disingenuous? Why are you so hostile? Did I hit sore spot? It's NTR from perspective of Fairy King, he founds out there is this unknown dude, who should have sex with his wife. Let's switch roles, your sister comes to you (even though you are not her spouse) says that Fairy King should give his sperm to her while whole town watches. This should be netori too according to your beliefs.As such, your wigging out seems...shrill. And disingenuous, because you're making a big deal about calling netori NTR.
putting your final change of heart aside...Disingenuous? How is not wanting to make "love" with someones spouse makes me disingenuous? Why are you so hostile? Did I hit sore spot? It's NTR from perspective of Fairy King, he founds out there is this unknown dude, who should have sex with his wife. Let's switch roles, your sister comes to you (even though you are not her spouse) says that Fairy King should give his sperm to her while whole town watches. This should be netori too according to your beliefs.
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