Abibliboop
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Yeah, but she mentions she wishes she wasn't in the diary. Isn't that pretty much the identical situation with sister. Uber anti-incest but likes you? Not faulting your opinion, as everyone sees things in a different way, I just personally see those as pretty much identical. Abusing best friend and sister to magically force them against their will for MC's pleasure. I agree all the other characters are not unwilling as much as either naive or fairly open to sex in general, but those two both feel similar to me which is why it takes darkest/deepest secret I would imagine.I don't know it just feels different. You're not trying to convince someone, like Primrose, or even Evelyn, who already had some sort of attraction to you. You're changing someone completely.
The girl is into other girls, she says it and wishes she wasn't when she mention the MC in the diary.
Now, while being aware of that, the MC (who is her best friend) will still brainwash and take advantage of her. This sounds a lot different than the other girls honestly. That's why I mentioned it'll take good writing for me to stop thinking about it.
I'm not criticizing though, it's just how I feel about the whole thing.