Dimitri57

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Reading this made me remember who Rin is. Yes, we must go get her. But, I'm bettin' you already know that. :whistle: Not to worry about stirrin' the nest, Bob must die anyway! (n) Not that I'm a war monger or anything. But, some people are just too bad to let live. But, back to Rin. I'll start the chant. Save Rin! Save Rin! Save Rin!
Here you go if you need your memory refreshed as to who Rin is.. rin in room test 1.jpg .
 

motseer

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Nothing good has been updated for like three days. I think I'll re-read Long Road Home tonight. But, my retention is only about 30 days so... , you'll need to make that your deadline for v 0.9.0 o_O Yes? (y) Yes!
 

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I tacked it onto the end of the conversation with Stan and Della when MC shows the incriminating evidence about James to them. It's not a lot. It just sets up the event for 0.9.0

Below is the conversation from the script. It's not really a spoiler to anyone that's done with 0.8.0 since it was supposed to have happened.


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I think I remember part of that script/conversation in my last game save, although it got about as far as mentioning Rin and how she felt, I think it actually ended with telling Stan she wanted to get out and move to the FoxBox.

At least I believe that's how I remember it, been a minute since I played, and I'm trying to not touch it again until the next version is out. don't wanna spoil myself with the story and get upset that it stops lol
 

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Tbh mine was a joke :LOL: I think short hair is easier to render but I'm not against long hair either.
The only thing that gave me pause was the rainbow saddle blanket strapped to his handlebars. :unsure:

Not hating or judging. I just wasn't planning on taking the story there...
 
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If you can base the MC on Sam Elliott, than I have no complaints! Well motseer I am a war monger, saving Rin is like getting the cake but I want the icing to. So removing Bob :love: is my icing. Maybe a bike accident, maybe his partner in the desert is lonely?

My question is, when do the feds become involved? Is OBD going to bring this story line in? Use to be where a club is, feds are not that far behind. Has it changed?

This story can go in so many directions, got to love it! (y)
 

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If you can base the MC on Sam Elliott, than I have no complaints! Well motseer I am a war monger, saving Rin is like getting the cake but I want the icing to. So removing Bob :love: is my icing. Maybe a bike accident, maybe his partner in the desert is lonely?

My question is, when do the feds become involved? Is OBD going to bring this story line in? Use to be where a club is, feds are not that far behind. Has it changed?

This story can go in so many directions, got to love it! (y)
No to the Feds. No to the Revenuers. Let the Rebel Yell roll!!
 

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"that the" simple fix before you publish :). Now I have an excuse to do another play through. Even though I have enough saves to go back and see any given point in the story haha. Always nice to get that organic feel on a fresh run. Shit, I might need an intervention at this rate.
 

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I tacked it onto the end of the conversation with Stan and Della when MC shows the incriminating evidence about James to them. It's not a lot. It just sets up the event for 0.9.0

Below is the conversation from the script. It's not really a spoiler to anyone that's done with 0.8.0 since it was supposed to have happened.


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I agree with FlameEmperor on needing to repair that one small error in the script prior to publication...
The line currently reads...
della "She may have a valid concern. It's rumored that the Bob's girls are virtually slaves to the club."
However, it should NOT have "the" in front of "Bob's girls." It should read...
della "She may have a valid concern. It's rumored that Bob's girls are virtually slaves to the club."

It's a tiny nit pick kind of item but does need a quick edit all the same. It would be a shame to litter what might be the greatest AVN of all time with little errors like that. :)
Adventure ever on my friend, Phat:devilish:(y)
PS: I am still willing and able to proofread and correct all the spelling and grammar errors in the whole game. :cool: (y)
 

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I agree with FlameEmperor on needing to repair that one small error in the script prior to publication...
The line currently reads...
della "She may have a valid concern. It's rumored that the Bob's girls are virtually slaves to the club."
However, it should NOT have "the" in front of "Bob's girls." It should read...
della "She may have a valid concern. It's rumored that Bob's girls are virtually slaves to the club."

It's a tiny nit pick kind of item but does need a quick edit all the same. It would be a shame to litter what might be the greatest AVN of all time with little errors like that. :)
Adventure ever on my friend, Phat:devilish:(y)
PS: I am still willing and able to proofread and correct all the spelling and grammar errors in the whole game. :cool: (y)
Easy fix. I haven't run the script through grammar and spell check yet. I typically don't do that until I'm done with the entire episode. I make mistakes like that when I'm composing on the fly and quickly make a change after reading the sentence. That one I inserted "Bob's" in the sentence. It first read, "It's rumored that the girls are virtually slaves to the club."

The "that the" is still there. It's split about 50/50 if it is correct grammar or not from what I've seen. I'm a lot of things , but a master of English composition is not one of them. I will defer to others if it is proper or not.
 
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I agree with FlameEmperor on needing to repair that one small error in the script prior to publication...
The line currently reads...
della "She may have a valid concern. It's rumored that the Bob's girls are virtually slaves to the club."
However, it should NOT have "the" in front of "Bob's girls." It should read...
della "She may have a valid concern. It's rumored that Bob's girls are virtually slaves to the club."

It's a tiny nit pick kind of item but does need a quick edit all the same. It would be a shame to litter what might be the greatest AVN of all time with little errors like that. :)
Adventure ever on my friend, Phat:devilish:(y)
PS: I am still willing and able to proofread and correct all the spelling and grammar errors in the whole game. :cool: (y)
This is why I'm weird and actually go back through and ignore most of the sex and read the dialogue carefully. (y) Miss so much because of the sex and women, oh wait stupid, it is a porn game. Can't believe I'm arguing with myself.
 

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So....as I mentioned earlier, I'm bored tonight. I tossed a little barb about giving you a one star review earlier and it made me decide to actually go read the reviews. First, my apologies, dev, 'cause I could have sworn I gave this VN a rave review months ago but, I must have imagined it. Honestly, I probably figured a story as good as this one didn't need my help. After reading all 60 reviews I have realized I could never do what you do. There is no way this VN deserves anything below a 4 star rating and that would only apply back when you were first starting out. The improvement in graphics, animation, writing, story telling in addition to the consistency of updates puts this in the top 3 VN's currently being published on this site and I currently have over 30 very good ones on my hard drive. The very few low ratings I saw didn't demonstrate logical evaluation but, unsubstantiated prejudice or preference. Sorry again, for getting complacent and being lazy. Here is your 5 star rating.
 
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