VN Ren'Py Abandoned Love, Demons and Broken Nose [v0.2.1] [Lawfullame]

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Overview:
Love, Demons and Broken Nose is an adults visual novel about a man in his twenties who experienced a mysterious paranormal encounter while hanging out with Jane, his friend with benefits and former classmate.
This event brings both friends to Dana, another of our protagonist's former classmates and the girl he loved and betrayed in his teenage years.
A chain of other mysterious events that follows makes our young man and both girls live together under one roof, take adventurous trips and accept the fact that they must face an ancient evil.
Although the times when Dana struggled with the urge to beat the main protagonist unconscious are long gone and the three get along pretty well most of the time, this cohabitation is not always easy, and a demon on their ass doesn't make it easier.
Is everything just a consequence of silly game when our trio together with another friend accidentally opened Pandora's box a few years ago, or is there something else behind these events?​

Thread Updated: 2019-08-15
Release Date: 2019-08-15
Developer: Lawfullame F95
Censored: No
Version: 0.0.3
OS: Windows, Mac Linux
Language: English
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Wow, the artwork is stunning!
 

AmBush-UK

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Well, I don't normally go for games that are just starting out(I think I have downloaded a total of three of them), but that overview actually got my interest so I will download this one and give it a try.
My thoughts exactly, I did and now I'm waiting for more content (More women and more renders definitely (y))
 
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lawfullame

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It could be, if you're a fast reader. lawfullame stated above that it wasn't intended to be a release, just a short preview in another thread.
Kinda rough, missing some renders and could use some editing/proofreader but it shows great promise.
At the moment, I plan that the first chapter will end where it ends now. Maybe I'll add a few lines to some places.
The main work is now focused on filling the story by renders.
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lawfullame

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I just uploaded version 0.0.4


I don't think the uplader needs to update all files in the OP at the moment. The number of renders is growing, but the changes compared to the previous version are not very big.
 
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lawfullame

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Hi there.
I am looking for Android Version port.
Can someone share it please?
It's a very early version, so I didn't care about the Android port. When version 0.1 is done I might try to create an official Android version myself, but so far I haven't tried to figure out what it takes to create an Android version.

EDIT:
I tried using Ren'py and the Android SDK plugin to create an APK for Android but the result is a package that can't be installed on my phone or tablet when I tried it. The installation will result in an error.. Maybe there is a simple solution, but at the moment I don't have time to look for it.
 
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lawfullame

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I'm adding new renders. Currently I have noticeably more renders than in the last released version. On the one hand, I feel a bit tempted to release 0.0.5, but I think I'll wait until the proper 0.1 is ready.
 

lawfullame

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WTF Your game is nothing but black screens?, Fuck man were are the renders? Hell even your first sex scene is just only one render are you just lazy? story looks good but theres nothing to see.
It was just a preview from general discussion and the uploader created game thread to early. I'm still working on the first chapter and covering the stoty with renders.

The expected time to complete the first chapter is between two days and a week, depending on whether I can finish it before my business trip.
 
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lawfullame

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Can we name the MC in this? taken the broken nose into account we should call him Owen Wilson :p:LOL:
In this preview you can only enter the name, in version 0.1 you will also be able to enter the surname.
In later chapters it may happen that the main character will deal with the police, and it would be strange if they called him by first name only.
 
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lawfullame

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V 0.1.0 is out.
The introductory chapter has been completed. Here are links (Windows, Linux).



I hope the uploader will update the OP soon.
 

ThunderRob

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Jane..the one i actually like.."friend with benefits" the other dame..who i've no interest in.."the forced LI?"
 

botc76

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Okay, here's my thoughts.
The story seems actually interesting. The renders improve quite a bit during the game, the women we've seen so far are interesting in the way that they seem like normal girls, not super models, fetish models or porn stars.

What I would change is to not drop infobombs on players this way.
Instead of just having a narrator explain everything, better write the past events as part of the story as well, with dialogue and descriptions of what happens.

Even though I liked the story, I still skipped through parts of the recaps, because it definitely was too much exposition.

The other thing and I don't know if anybody else mentioned it, but the title of your game reads awkward.

It should be "Love, Demons And A Broken Nose."

I'm definitely interested in seeing more of this game.
 

aQrata

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Really liked this intro and theres a lot of positive things to say imo. The Mc is not a horny teen scum, the ladies are gorgeous and have their own quirks... Writing is good with only some minor "mistekes" and the story seems interesting enough.

Things to improve: theres too much time at the start with black screen, i would add a couple renders. As others pointed out the intro would be smoother changing narration for inner thoughts. Theres a room from improvement on the renders, specially faces and lighting but im sure this will get better over time with experience.

Im looking forward to see more, i really hope to have the option of evolving the relationship with Jane to romance instead of keeping her as a fuck buddy, even in a triangle kindda of setting with Dana, but we will see how it comes out; wish the developer good luck and will keep an eye to see whats next.
 

lawfullame

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If Jane isn't going to be a love interest, then why use the intro to be able to feel closer to her, and even have sex with her, than some Dana that is supposed to be the LI and isn't even introduced until much later? Isn't that backwards?
Shouldn't the intro give you more backstory about your relationship with the intended love interest before Jane is introduced?

Oh wait! Patreon!
Get some quick, cheap sex in the game as soon as possible to attract patrons. Never mind how it might screw up the game for you later or makes absolutely no sense in the "intended" story line, that won't be presented until much, much later.

Nevermind.
Jene certainly won't be a cheap fuck-buddy who appears on the scene once in a while as an option for quick sex. She is one of the two main female characters who will be present throughout the story. Her character will go through some development during the story.
And why is the intro used to be able to feel closer to her?
Because she's a girl close to the main character, though there's no traditional romantic relationship between them. Unlike Jane, Dana is a girl who was very close to the main character in the past, disappeared from the main character's life for several years, and returns to his life during the story.
 

Le Pew

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Would there be an Android version?
Maybe the66 could take care of that.
Pretty please?
 

lawfullame

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Would there be an Android version?
Maybe the66 could take care of that.
Pretty please?
I tried to created android version for the preview 0.0.4 version in the past, but it didn't work. If I have time In the future, I might try to solve the issue, but I didn't have time for it yet.
 
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