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If it was just that I'd say yes. But it's not. There is this very weird thing she does where she practically channels Lacey's views.

In the convo the three of them have about Jared, she is far more amenable than Mia to whatever Lacey told them off screen. Mia keeps yapping about Lacey destroying her marriage and that she will crash and burn if she goes through. Anna simply says it's too early and she should wait for later, but it's still risky. I've already said my take on what the convo is about, but whatever that was, the difference between hers and Mia's reactions is obvious.

Then we have the next toxic trio meeting, where Lacey details her plan to turn MC into a cuck for his own good. Anna starts with flower garden shit. Mia removes her self from blame, practically repeating her previous stance that Lacey will destroy her marriage. After that, Anna says she is supporting the plan.

I think there is far more toxic in that sneaky bitch, it's just that a lot of it happens behind MC's back.
Well the funny thing is, I think that part is not very well written:

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Both her and the pimp agree, after saying it is a bullshit plan, where does that logic jump comes from?
And Anna describes MC as a fragile boy, my god, how the fuck do expect the audience to think that she is in love with MC.

This is not a good look.

probably Anna hopes that Mc will leave her after this?
 

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I understand, but the story must not get in the rails. This story telling is quite good due to unexpected shifts and surprises. Take a note and look on this forum. Everyone tries to keep some sense and order to the story. But this is not what makes this story so good. By doing so, they would ruin this game (Also did you try get the rpy files into AI to tell you who is the monster? Quite interesting reasoning.. but somewhat expected result..). If something unexpected happened .. it would be a great opportunity to shift the attention elsewhere. Lets pretend .. Lacey getting a similar fake pictures or videos, Lacey knows its probably a fake but oh lord they keep coming. Also Mia will get into it and similar to MC, she will try to derail her.. This could lead to short separation of the pair and unforeseen consequences that could .. again be seen in the future since Lacey cannot control her addiction and would not remember much. That alone could be fuel for entire chapter to come. I just hope the author stay out of the cliché and keep the story turning upside down as he was all the time.
What was the result from your AI investigation?
 

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Well the funny thing is, I think that part is not very well written:

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Both her and the pimp agree, after saying it is a bullshit plan, where does that logic jump comes from?
And Anna describes MC as a fragile boy, my god, how the fuck do expect the audience to think that she is in love with MC.

This is not a good look.

probably Anna hopes that Mc will leave her after this?
Don't get me wrong, Mia only protested strongly in words, in the end she also kept her mouth shut like a good girl. But I still think there is a noticeable difference in how they are approaching it. One says don't count me in (washing her hands), the other says we will support you (roping the other in). The logical conclusion in that convo for Anna, should have been don't count me in either. She does the opposite. It's just weird to me.
 

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Today I gathered my strength and tried the eager pubishment branch, although I guessed that I would not see anything good there
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Today I gathered my strength and tried the eager pubishment branch, although I guessed that I would not see anything good there
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Try punishment path act 2 choice 2 it is actually the only good one from all the paths in act 2.
Punishment is not much about physical punishment as much as degradation overall.
 
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Can you remind me?
A very rough first iteration of the Damien convo. She wanted MC to accept her whoring herself (to whatever extent she did), because it was in their mutual benefit and because it was irrelevant to her love from him. There is some very intentional wording in that convo, that I don't think it's written this way on accident. Nor the fact we don't see how it starts. She didn't want to keep doing shit behind his back, which she was all those weeks. The invite was easing into it.

It's the only way to explain Jared's invite and especially the way it happened. The sequence of events needed for him to find them in the state he did, doesn't happen naturally in a formal co worker meeting. It's literally the intro to a cuck scene.
 
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It's the only way to explain Jared's invite and especially the way it happened. The sequence of events needed for him to find them in the state he did, doesn't happen naturally in a formal co worker meeting. It's literally the intro to a cuck scene.
And she 'conveniently' forgot to msg the MC to tell him where they would be....
 

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And she 'conveniently' forgot to msg the MC to tell him where they would be....
No, I think that's the only truthful thing she said in the aftermath :LOL:

She wanted him there to admire how Jared was all over her and her slutty bikini he didn't know existed. Notice how in the aftermath she thinks the only wrong thing that happened was her forgetting to text? Like that was the important thing, not that she was all sluttied up for her harasser, cozied up in the tub.
 

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Notice how in the aftermath she thinks the only wrong thing that happened was her forgetting to text? Like that was the important thing, not that she was all sluttied up for her harasser, cozied up in the tub.
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Can't sleep, so I went and replayed my favourite part of act 2, the KW.

I think I made a post before on how Lacey actually laughs out loud if MC asks about raves.
"All four of the girls laugh loudly and take a drink."

Even if no one ever heard Lacey laugh besides MC and Jared (yup another thing tainted)

M "You... you laugh?"
M "I've never heard you laugh."
L "I've never laughed with anyone but [MCFirst]."
L "And only when we're alone."
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"Everyone had a nice laugh, well except for Lacey of course."
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MC "You laughed again."
L "I just imagined you actually doing that and I couldn't help myself."
MC "That's twice in one day."
MC "That's never, ever happened."
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But now I am also concerned about this:

How can the pimp say this about dick nicknames:

M "Oh c'mon, I thought for sure she had nicknames for yours."
M "I mean she always used to..."
M "I just assumed... she still did that."

When in act 1 she says this?

M "Uh, you know she tells me everything right?"
M "I know things no girl should ever know."
M "Like exactly how your dick tastes."
M "In detail."

You know about the taste but not about something so trivial as a nickname?
Malicious intent or a bit of lack of attention to details maybe due to a rushed delivery?

Both of these are kind of important points, especially the laugh :(

EDIT:
Thanks to CrysusPariah2 my curiosity has been sated.

The pimp might have overstated and lied as usual.

M "You know how sensitive guys are about the size of their dingus."
L "[MCFirst] doesn't have dingus. He has a schlong."
M "Wait what? You never told me that."
L "Because you'd constantly be making awful jokes about it."
L "So, I conveniently never brought it up."
M "I can't actually argue with that."

So maybe even the "dickname" could have been conveniently omitted.
I was getting wound up over nothing, BUT the laugh still stands!
 
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Both of these are kind of important points, especially the laugh :(
I think the laugh is very important, though could maybe be put down to being among people she knows for some time now and trusts. When did she laugh with Jarrad? That's not trust/long term friendship....

The name...that could be anything...from malicious intent to stir to author error....
 

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I think the laugh is very important, though could maybe be put down to being among people she knows for some time now and trusts. When did she laugh with Jarrad? That's not trust/long term friendship....

The name...that could be anything...from malicious intent to stir to author error....
She laughs when she gets groped in the closet while falling from the ladder.
MC gets pretty angry about it, and the pimp is surprised because she never heard her laugh.

So hearing Lacey laugh is a BIG DEAL and there is no way nobody noticed.

Probably a distraction in the writing.
 
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Can't sleep, so I went and replayed my favourite part of act 2, the KW.

I think I made a post before on how Lacey actually laughs out loud if MC asks about raves.
"All four of the girls laugh loudly and take a drink."

Even if no one ever heard Lacey laugh besides MC and Jared (yup another thing tainted)

M "You... you laugh?"
M "I've never heard you laugh."
L "I've never laughed with anyone but [MCFirst]."
L "And only when we're alone."
=============
"Everyone had a nice laugh, well except for Lacey of course."
=============
MC "You laughed again."
L "I just imagined you actually doing that and I couldn't help myself."
MC "That's twice in one day."
MC "That's never, ever happened."
=============

But now I am also concerned about this:

How can the pimp say this about dick nicknames:

M "Oh c'mon, I thought for sure she had nicknames for yours."
M "I mean she always used to..."
M "I just assumed... she still did that."

When in act 1 she says this?

M "Uh, you know she tells me everything right?"
M "I know things no girl should ever know."
M "Like exactly how your dick tastes."
M "In detail."

You know about the taste but not about something so trivial as a nickname?
Malicious intent or a bit of lack of attention to details maybe due to a rushed delivery?

Both of these are kind of important points, especially the laugh :(

EDIT:
Thanks to CrysusPariah2 my curiosity has been sated.

The pimp might have overstated and lied as usual.

M "You know how sensitive guys are about the size of their dingus."
L "[MCFirst] doesn't have dingus. He has a schlong."
M "Wait what? You never told me that."
L "Because you'd constantly be making awful jokes about it."
L "So, I conveniently never brought it up."
M "I can't actually argue with that."

So maybe even the "dickname" could have been conveniently omitted.
I was getting wound up over nothing, BUT the laugh still stands!
This was my reply to Deviant in case anybody was wondering:

I’m not sure about malicious, but definitely intent as the pimp was making pointed comments all along KW

I think the comment in Act 1 was an exaggeration. Something to put the guy off-kilter, like girls sometimes tend to do.

We know after the damian thing, that Lacey kept important details about MC’s dick hidden from Mia.

Maybe the pimp’s intend was to to find out what the dickname actually was, as Lacey had been refusing to tell her, only for it to blow up the whole situation
 

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Can't sleep, so I went and replayed my favourite part of act 2, the KW.

I think I made a post before on how Lacey actually laughs out loud if MC asks about raves.
"All four of the girls laugh loudly and take a drink."
I would attribute this to group generalisation.

Like if you tell a joke to a group of 10 people, 6 might laugh, 3 will chuckle and 1 might just smirk.
You would still say the group was laughing.

I think the same kind of applies here, Lacey didn’t laugh, but because she also drinks she is counted among “all four of the girls”.
I blame poor sentence structure but also not wanting to write something like: “Mia, Anna and Veronica laugh and then all four girls take a drink”
 
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I think the laugh is very important, though could maybe be put down to being among people she knows for some time now and trusts. When did she laugh with Jarrad? That's not trust/long term friendship....
I will say that Lacey tells Mia that she laughed due to it being a nervous laughter. I took it like she was very uncomfortable because she was trying not to blow her chance at "the job". Maybe a future Act will expand on that, but it's not really talked about besides Lacey telling Mia about it
 
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