- Apr 15, 2019
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1. This sounds like you more want just plain drama than a good ending for them. I'm not so sure how well that would fit in a game like this that's more about just straight happy sex and romance but it is interesting. Kelly is cool but her being #1 is objectively incorrect.1. Kelly best girl. Other opinions are invalid. If her ending isn't running away together and becoming a superstar rock duo then I will be very sad. I do sort of hope for some references to what happened in the past during her ending, though. A 'full crying breakup scene' would be too much I think, and wouldn't really focus on the new relationship they have.
I would prefer something like... maybe an interviewer asking pointed questions about their "previous band" and their answers, then their actual thoughts afterward in private between just Flin and Kelly. Maybe with a sexy scene after confirming "no regrets" or somesuch. Or maybe some of their new fans gossiping about them after a show that they overhear. Or even seeing something in a tabloid provoking a talk about the past, if they have gotten that big by that point. Something that has them briefly run back through their thoughts and feelings from the very first time they saw each other, through falling for one another, their choice to be together, and their eventual present day circumstances.
Basically, an emotional retrospective on their relationship. Probably followed by sex.
2. Julie second best girl. Also not up for debate. I feel torn on this potential ending. I admit, I kind of want two different possible endings for Julie. I don't know if you are going to do multi-endings though, so I'll just have to hope. Both of them involve Julie getting pregnant, though. I truly don't think a non-pregnant Julie ending would be satisfying, considering her whole... everything.
The first ending I hope to see would be divorce and elopement. Pregnant Julie on her honeymoon with Flin or a "several years later" version with her in their happy home holding Flin's child, something like that. In both cases her and Flin talking about how happy they are and maybe talking a little bit about her ex-husband and other family, but mostly in the context of how happy she is with her new life. This is the traditional ending. It's well-worn in many game types.
The other one is less standard, and also the one I am worried won't make it in. A "cuckoo's nest" ending where Flin and Julie continue their secret relationship indefinitely. Stella's suspicion and trust hit a strong enough level that she never suspects anything forever. They stay together, maybe even marry and become rockstars with the band. Meanwhile, Flin and Julie continue their clandestine romance, even getting Julie pregnant. Possibly more than once. Julie stays married, raising Flin's children as her husband's while basically stealing her daughter's husband.
Maybe as rockstars Flin convinces Stella to buy a seperate house for Julie because she helps with the band or something, and Flin+Julie do married couple stuff there on the down low. Possibly even to the point people comment on it, but the high-trust low-suspicion Stella just thinks of it as Flin's good relationship with her parents.
It would take more setup and wordcount to do well. But the thought is pretty hot, at least to me. But I have to admit the full "divorces husband and leaves children to run away with main character and start a new family" ending has some appeal too.
Anyway. Just some thoughts.
The secret blowjob in the forest was amazing, though. And Kelly's internal monologue in the tent while her boyfrind was standing outside was beyond amazing. A couple more 'risky quickie' scenes like that for each girl would be pretty hot.
2. The amount of times he's busting in EVERY girl, it wouldn't feel right if any of them did not end up pregnant lol. Divorce + elopement is a staple in "cheating with a married woman" games umu umu. But miiiight end up having a dual yandere ending in this case. The second ending is interesting but it wouldn't work. Julie isn't single so it would be hella sus to buy a house for just her even if you try and say she helps with band. Plus you would really have to retract on some things for Julie to get preg and it not be sus to her husband and Stella especially if she's out helping the band (i.e. not having time to actually do the act with her husband to even get preg by him).
Good idea but need to let it cook some more. Julie #2 I do support, but Kelly is neck and neck with her.
3. Amy is #1, this was foretold by the universe itself. It's like believing the Earth is flat, you're free to do so and it is cute....but it's WRONG!
4. That bj scene was pretty nice, and I was hoping for some more "hidden in the trees" stuff for all the girls. Oh well was still a great update.
5. Was hoping for some more, Saman....something stuff following Chapter 9, maybe she makes a return in 11+