VN Ren'Py Love, Sex & Revenge [Ep 0 (fixed version)] [AG Studio]

[AG Studio]

Okay, here I am. I have been reading many comments about the story going too fast. The reason is clear and simple: in episode 0, the main character was talking about his life and what had happened to him up until now. (It's more of a recap of his life.) In the next chapter, the story is going to be fast. Well, no, it’s going to be slower. (Only an afternoon should pass.)

Regarding the huge breasts, okay, I will slightly shrink Linda's breasts. There are going to be characters with all body types (A, B, C, D).

Lastly, yeah, I am not a native speaker, so I will find myself a proofreader.

 

[Norman Knight]

Okay, here I am. I have been reading many comments about the story going too fast. The reason is clear and simple: in episode 0, the main character was talking about his life and what had happened to him up until now. (It's more of a recap of his life.) In the next chapter, the story is going to be fast. Well, no, it’s going to be slower. (Only an afternoon should pass.)

Regarding the huge breasts, okay, I will slightly shrink Linda's breasts. There are going to be characters with all body types (A, B, C, D).

Lastly, yeah, I am not a native speaker, so I will find myself a proofreader.

Wait wait, hol up

Whats wrong with Linda's breasts?, they are perfect the way they are, and they fit with the theme of all girls having big tits, in fact thats the only thing that was good from the start

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Pointing out what the dev did wrong and how his release cycle is not sustainable for the growth of the project is not being entitled, is just pointing out the obvious.

The game has some good things going like the models, but the story is all over the place and the dialogues are rough, pointing this out is not being entitled, is again, pointing out the obvious

If you really want to help the dev, then white knighting and licking his boots is not the way to go, you'll just make him believe he did nothing wrong and won't feel the need to improve anything.

OK, I got the proofreading version from @Saint Blackmoor (Huge thank to him.) I will update this as soon as possible.

I forgot trying to reason with clowns is futile.

OK, this is all I'm going to say.

 

[PissMaster3==o..]

seriously man, majority of people have mobile phone than laptop and computer

 

[FatGiant]

seriously man, majority of people have mobile phone than laptop and computer

Please, do check your privilege.

Millions, even Hundred of millions, maybe even a thousand million people don't have food and water to eat. Or internet access. Or a phone. Or a place to fucking sleep.

Go away!

Peace

 

[FatGiant]

Okay, let's ask the members who the boot licker is:
(ME) the guy defending the dev for legitimate reasons.
(you) the guy defending two entitled clowns for shaming a dev for putting out the update of his free game a little late. (Because real life stepped in)

Have you seen how many thumbs-ups are on my OG comment?

I guess you have joined the ranks of entitled clowns here. Congratulations.

I truly hope you don't mean me.

1- I made no mention of whatever release schedule this has or ever will have.
2- I felt and still feel that my reviews were perfectly legitimate, and focused.
3- When I saw you on the thread, knowing full well what you have done for other Dev and Games, I felt relieved, maybe this Dev can get the help he really needs.
4- Now I come here and I get a rather unpleasant vibe here.

It is hard to review a new game, sometimes having to rip to shreds a dream of someone else. I do it the most gentle way possible. Even when the work, the dream, the result is something like this. My sole intention is to make the Dev listen and understand that he truly needs help and why.

I have no ill will towards him, no one makes perfect fried eggs the first time, much less something has complex as this.

I know that there is a story buried under that. Maybe it is even a good story. There's no way to tell yet. There's too much trouble to get over, before we get there.

animeguyUX remember this, most of the people that read this ALSO have English as a 2nd Language. For many of them it is hard to understand when the use of English is good, but it is Impossible when it is as bad as this release was. I mean no harm, I would even offer to help, but English is also not my 1st Language, not even my 2nd.

Peace

 

[VN..reader]

Okay, here I am. I have been reading many comments about the story going too fast. The reason is clear and simple: in episode 0, the main character was talking about his life and what had happened to him up until now. (It's more of a recap of his life.) In the next chapter, the story is going to be fast. Well, no, it’s going to be slower. (Only an afternoon should pass.)

Regarding the huge breasts, okay, I will slightly shrink Linda's breasts. There are going to be characters with all body types (A, B, C, D).

Lastly, yeah, I am not a native speaker, so I will find myself a proofreader.

THAT being said , i'm good to go. i saw this when first released and... just now. so you have a schedule that doesn't go with My preference. it's Your game you do you. i will wait. the body shapes... well it is a fantasy story so i will go with what you make.
MY concern is getting the story told how you want and for You to finish it. a little nip here and tuck there, some help with the 'English', and voilà, you have something worth keeping. good luck friend.

 

[VN..reader]

seriously man, majority of people have mobile phone than laptop and computer

Aww, i see you chose your Name aptly...

 

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[AG Studio]

The fixed version (typos and grammar are fixed) is updated.
-animeguyUX

 

[thetrueredking]

Will this include wincest? I feel like it has that potential based on the introduction.

 

[AG Studio]

Can anymore reviews?
Also. UI will fixed in the next update (So, I will start working on it.)

 

[Woodstock_1983]

The Dev needs to fix the grammar a bit. This didn't make sense to me. Also, remove the narrator.If who or what was gone?

 

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[Bunty365]

Hi dev first of all the game is great and what do you think about promoting your game on discord server's off other devs and game modders who allowed for free of cost for reaching out to maximum people

 

[SilentSevenStar]

Nice~

 

[DrFree]

Hey dev, can I ask something? in your itch.io page it lists your game as "a thing" rather than "a game" lol. Wtf is up with that?

 

[ArunPrime]

Hello dev animeguyUX
I just finished the fixed version,
Really interesting Story, Nice renders.

Animation need to work, increase speed, video length and more angles to see.

One question is it really necessary, dick like a horse?

Lastly the Narrator dialogues. Honestly I always just skipped thoughts and story telling dialogues.
One or two lines are acceptable, but every single images and scenes. Seriously feels like I'm lost interest in reading.

Please reduce the narrator dialogues
Otherwise great game, waiting forward to seeing next release..
Good Luck

 

[DrFree]

Dev, do NOT reduce breast size, add another petite girl and call it a day. LONG LIVE BIG TATAS.

 

[AG Studio]

OK finally got a new pc and did a first render on it
old PC render(take 5 hours+photoshop):


New PC render (take 30 minutes +photoshop):